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 Post subject: Dawn to the Vampire's.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 9:52 pm 
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Here's a new story that was brought on suddenly by my very recent love of the show True Blood that I just fell into after getting the first season on dvd for christmas. Its not based on the show but it
inspired certain vampire themes from the show and the idea of doing a vampire story in the first place.
I jumped on it as it gives me a chance for something new and slightly different.
Hope you'll all like it.

Starring:

Yvonne Strahovski as Dawn Mist, a vampire slayer with an old score to settle.
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Stephen Moyer as Bill, an old, powerful vampire who's helping Dawn in her quest for reasons he won't share.
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Megan Fox as Lorelei, a bloodthirsty thousand year old powerful vampire leader.
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Kate Beckinsale as Sienne,a sadistic vampire and Lorelei's loyal follower.
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Olga Kurylenko as Helga, the manager of the nightclub Fangs who's got some history with Bill.
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Leighton Meester as Sue Susuki, Lorelei's human sex toy.
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Deborah Ann Woll as Jessie, a sadistic young vampire.
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Kristen Stewart and Robert Patterson as Belle and Ed, a twisted vampire couple.
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Emma Watson as Lucy Darwin, a young girl looking in the wrong place in the wrong time.
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Doutzen Kroes as Valerie Crotes, a human lawyer that works for Lorelei in the hope of being made a vampire.
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and Chyler Leigh as Lorna Lewis, the city morgue attendant.
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DAWN TO THE VAMPIRE'S.



Chapter 1. Dawn.


Ever since she was a little girl, Lucy Darwin had been taught the following three things by every adult she knew.
1. Never talk to strangers.
2. Don't go down dark alleyway's by yourself.
3. Vampire's DON'T exist.
Had she been better at following the first two things, she'd never have learned that the third one was in fact bulls**t.


It was just past three am in the city of angels when Lucy left the Finger-lickers nightclub, sporting an outfit she had purposely chosen with the intention of luring at least one man to her, a zipped up black leather top, dark pantyhose that framed her legs perfectly, black heels and shorts that most would confuse with panty's.
Her "dirty" blond hair blew softly in the cool night breeze.

Lucy Darwin...
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...was your average club going twenty year old.
The memory's of the last several hours she had just spent there were very fresh in her mind.
She giggled to herself as she thought back to the intense sex she had with the really hot guy in the gray suit in one of the stall of the mens room.
He had f**ked her six ways from sunday in there and she was still a little wobbly on her feet.
All she knew about him was that he had called himself Fleming and that he was a genius at sex.

Finding a cab was proving to be a futile effort so she decided to cut onto the main street through a dark alleyway.
Lucy didn't give the idea of going down the dark alley a second thought, she never was much for making sensible decisions.
There was an erry silence and the only sounds heard were the distant the traffic on the other side of the alley and the ones made by her high heels on the cold concreat below her feet.
Lucy's mind was still on the sex she had in the mens room stall and the way she had been f**ked over and over, her every desire fullfilled.
She bit her lip sensually as she imagined Flemings tongue running down her neck as his hands pulled the zipper of her top down to her bellybutton.
She remembered him licking her hard nipples and how he thrust his dick so hard into her over and over, she thought he'd split her in half.
Lucy had already decided to go to the club again the following night in hopes of seeing Fleming.

"Oh I wish I'll see him again."
She thought to herself.

"See who again?"
A man's voice asked from the darkness.

Lucy gasped startled and looked around frightened.
There was no sign of anyone.

"Did I just imagine that voice?"
Lucy though nervously.

"No you didn't."
A woman's voice replied from behind her.

Lucy screamed and staggered away, knocking her foot into a loose sewer grate and lost her balance.
She tripped but instead of falling onto the ground she felt herself swooped up in someone's arms and she looked up to see that she was in the arms of a strange and handsome young man wearing a fine suit.
He smiled at her and she suddenly felt like she was in some sort of a fairytale.
Lucy smiled back at him.

"H...hi. I´m...Lucy."
She said nervously.

"Hi, I´m Ed. Nice to meet you Lucy."
He replied in a charming manner.

Lucy smiled awkwardly as Ed helped her back on her feet and she felt blood rush to her face and she guessed she was as red as a tomato
For reasons she couldn't understand properly, she hugged him to her and then quickly released him and backed away, embaressed as hell and her face was ten times redder than before.
He laughed amused at her embaressment.

"No need to feel embaressed at all."
He said as he smiled at her.

Lucy smiled back and just as she was about to say something, a young woman's voice sounded from behind her.

"Always the gentleman, aren't you Ed."
There was a tone of mockery in the voice.

Lucy quickly turned but there was no one behind her.
She turned back to Ed and gasped shocked to see a beautiful young woman around her age standing right next to Ed.
Where the hell had she come from so suddenly, she hadn't been there two seconds ago.

"Lucy this is Belle, my wife."
Ed explained.

"Hi Lucy."
Belle said with false enthusiasam as she waved her fingers.

Belle was an absolute stunner in her elegant, old fashioned black evening gown.
It was cut down to her firm breasts, creating an impressive cleavage out of her rather small but perfectly round breasts.
Judging by the way the material of the gown hugged the breasts, Lucy could tell that Belle wasn't wearing a bra.
The gown was also cut up to her upper thighs so her splendid long legs stood out and breathed.
She was short but her black heels added considerably to her hight.
Her hair was blacker than the gown and styled to fall down on one side of her face.
Her lips were bright red and desirable but what most caught Lucy's attention was how pale she was.
Belle was white as snow, she sort of reminded Lucy of a mean looking Snow white in some way.
Come to think of it, Ed was just as pale.
But one thing was for sure, pale or not Ed and Belle looked magnificent together.
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There was something about the way that they stared at her that made Lucy feel very uneasy, they seemed to be almost lusting at her.
Suddenly it occured to her that they could be one of those couples that get their kicks from abusing or seducing young women to spice up their sex life.

"Don't worry Lucy. We have no intention of having sex with you."
Ed said as he moved closer.

"What? How did you know..."
Lucy asked confused.

"No, what we have in mind is infinitly worse."
Belle added smiling sinisterly.

Lucy was now getting scared and she backed away slowly as Ed and Belle moved towards her, slowly.
Their eyes never left her and the look in them frightened Lucy.

"Leave me the f**k alone."
Lucy yelled out and she turned around to run away but as she did, Ed was somehow already standing behind her.

He laughed and she saw his eyes turn blood red and glowing.
Lucy shrieked in fear and turned back around to see Belle there, her eyes as red and glowing as Ed's.
Belle's mouth opened wide and long, razor sharp fangs grew before Lucy's out of Belle's teeth and she hizzed like a wild animal at Lucy.
Lucy screamed horrified and turned back to Ed who was now sporting the same kind of fangs as Belle was and she screamed again, louder than before.

"Would you please not scream like that. Its so annoying and it won't do you any good anyway."
He complained firmly.

Lucy swung her handbag into his face as hard as she could but it had no effect on him and he only laughed at her.
She dropped it and ran but Belle grabbed her by the arm and threw her ten feet right into the wall as easily as if she were a rag doll.
Lucy bounced of the brick wall and slammed into the ground.
Ed blew Belle a kiss and they shared a laugh at Lucy's whimpering.
She tried to get up but she was hurt and her shoulder felt numb, she was pretty sure it was dislocated.
Ed and Belle moved up to her and Belle reached down and pulled her up by the hair as Lucy screamed in pain.
She pushed Lucy up against the wall and held her in place by gently pressing one finger down on her shoulder.
For Lucy it felt as if she was being held down by a ton, she couldn't hope to move away from the wall.
There was a cut on her forehead and blood oozed from it.
Belle's eyes widened as she saw it and she ran her tongue over the cut, tasting Lucy's blood as Lucy burst into tears and whimpered harder.
Belle moaned in pleasure and smiled.

"Mmmm AB negative, oh my love you must try her."
She said pleased as she stuck out her tongue that was smeared with Lucy's blood.

Ed leaned towards her and licked the tip of her tongue before taking the whole thing in his mouth and kissing her.
Their kiss grew more passionate and Belle wrapped her free hand around his neck and Ed placed his hand on her bare thigh and ran it up under her dress.
Lucy thrashed around and cried for help.
Finally the lovers broke of their kiss and turned their attention back to her.

"Will you please shut the f**k up. Can't you see that we are in the middle of something here?"
Ed said annoyed.

"Humans, so inconsiderate, so whiny."
He said to Belle, who rolled her eyes and nodded.

"I´m so glad I´m not one of these filthy meat sacks anymore. I'd f***ing kill myself if I was."
Belle replied in discust.

They looked Lucy in the face who was sobbing, her eyeliner all smeared and she had this lip quiver thing going on that greatly annoyed them.

"Please, don't... hurt me. I...I..d...on..'t...wa...nt...to..dd...dii....iee.."
She stuttered in between sobs.

Ed sighed and looked her firmly in the eyes.

"Don't worry. We won't hurt you."
He said with sincerity.

A weak smile of relief came to Lucy's face and a spark of hope ignited in her eyes.

"Really?"
She asked hopeful.

"No, I lied. Sorry."
Ed said indifferent as he held up his fingers to show her that they were crossed.

Then suddenly his fangs grew longer and before Lucy knew it he had locked onto her exposed neck with his mouth and sunk his fangs deep into her main artery.
Blood gushed from her and flowed down her neck and all the way to her cleavage.
Lucy screamed in horrible pain and her eyes were filled with more agony that ever before in her short life.
Lucy's whole body thrashed and struggled between Ed's cold body and the wall, trapped, helpless.
Her hands banged uncontrolably against the wall and the feet kicked so wildly on the ground that both of her black high heels were thrown off of her pantyhose clad toes and kicked away by the throws of her delicate feet.
Belle stood beside Ed, watching with relish and decided she wanted a piece of the action.
She bent down to her knees and ripped a hole in Lucy's pantyhose high on the inner part of her right thigh and she too sank her fangs into Lucy's artery.
She always prefered the blood from a woman's thigh to her neck, it was for some reason far purer.
Drops of Lucy's warm blood flowed down her thigh, all the way to her toes.
Her body shuddered and her toes currled.

"Aaaarrrrggggghhhhh..."
Lucy moaned as she felt her lifeblood draining out of her body, sucked out by a pair of bloodthirsty vampire's.

With every second, with every drop that left her body, Lucy grew weaker and closer to death.
Soon it didn't hurt so much.
She started to get the feeling she was slipping into a warm bath.
Belle's lips stayed locked to the soft skin on Lucy's thigh and her hand moved up to Lucy's pussy and she rubbed it sensually through the shorts.
Ed withdrew his fangs from Lucy's neck, licking his blood stained lips with enjoyment and he looked into Lucy's face.
Her eyes were unfocused and she was barely alive.
Her face was now as pale as his and Belle's.
Twin streams of blood oozed out of the two matching holes in her slender neck.
Ed looked down at Lucy's juicy breasts covered up by her top as they heaved weakly up and down and he felt thirsty again.
He carefully unzipped the golden zipper down to her belly and admired her perfect breasts with their cute little pink nipples and he took the right in his hand and massaged it gently.
He leaned up against the side of her face and whispered into her ear.

"Shhh, it's almost over. You're doing so well. I´m very proud of you Lucy. Just one last thing to do."
He whispered softly.

Then he sank his fangs into her naked left breast and she let out a painful moan.
Two thin streams of blood ran down her breast, one ran right over the hard pink nipple.
Ed and Belle quickly finished the last drops in Lucy's veins.
Her body trembled a moment and her toes uncurrled and relaxed.
Her arms fell to her side and hung limp at her side.
The breasts stopped heaving.

"Eeeeehhhhh...."
A final sigh left her lips.

The lovers withdrew their sharp blood stained fangs from Lucy's flesh and stepped back to watch as her lifeless body slide down the wall and slumped to her side.
Ed kicked her over so she rolled onto her back, her exposed breasts and her dead eyes staring up at them.
They turned to face each other and kissed, licking the blood of each others lips.
Ed took Belle's hand and they turned from Lucy's dead body and were about to walk out of the alley when they saw that a woman was standing before them.
This took them by surprise as its almost impossible to sneek up on a vampire.
The other thing that surprised them was how truly beautiful this woman was, she was in fact the most beautiful woman they had ever seen.
Ed even found her more beautiful than Belle and his thirst was awakened once again.
He had never wanted a woman's blood as much as at that moment, her devine scent drove him wild.
The beautiful woman was in her late twenty's and she wore her long golden hair loose so it hung down past her shoulders, down her back.
She had the kind of eyes you could loose yourself in and lips you just had to feel against your own.
She wore a black leather jacket, skin tight gray pants that showed clearly just what a masterpiece her legs and behind were, an snug, evil dead t-shirt that strained ot contain her perfect, breasts and sexy black leather boots with stiletto heels.
There was a firm but angry look in the eyes of this ravishing beauty.
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"Look at this Belle. Seems like our dinner just got supersized."'
Ed said amused.

Belle laughed and they both hizzed and exposed their fangs.
The woman held her ground, unafraid.
Ed flung himself at her, his fangs aimed for her throat but she quickly raised her hand that held a small crossbow and without blinking, shot an arrow directly into Ed's chest without a seconds hesitation.
Ed was thrown back by the force of the arrow, right into the concreat.
Smoke rose from the wound in his chest and he kicked and thrashed on the ground, howling in pain like a wounded animal.

"Ed baby."
Belle cried out worried and she dropped on her knees beside him.

"Silver. The f***ing cunt shot me with a f***ing silver arrow."
Ed spat out furious and pain stirken.

Belle hizzed and howled in anger and her red glowing eyes stared at the beautiful woman.
Her fangs grew to their maximum length and she too attacked.
The woman quickly reached inside her jacket withdrew a thin chain made of pure silver and swung it like a whip at Belle.
The chain slashed into Belle's cheek, leaving a large cut and throwing her up against the wall.
Belle screamed out in pain as smoke rose from the cut in her cheek and rushed up to her feet in inhuman speed.
The woman was ready for her and wrapped the chain around Belle's neck before she could stop her and janked on it as hard as she could.
Belle's eyes widened in horror and she instinctivly grabbed the chain but the silver burned her fingers so she couldn't hold onto it.
She howled louder and in more pain as the woman tightened the chain even further around her neck.
The silver seared into her neck and locked up her throat.
The blonde woman kicked Belle in the back of the knee so she fell down on her knees, giving the blonde a better vantage point over Belle.
Belle gurgled as she felt blood fill her throat from the cut the chain made on the insides of her throat and it flowed out of her mouth.
The woman reached forward and whispered to Belle's ear.

"Bet you didn't realize that its possible to strangle a vampire with a silver chain, did you? Well techincally as you lot don't actually breath, its the lethal exposure of sliver that kills you but the best way to apply it is to strangle you and it feels much the same so I call it strangling."
The woman whispered coldly.

Belle's eyes widened even further as she heard this, she was experiancing something she hadn't felt for nearly five hundred years and never imagined she would feel ever again...fear.
She struggled harder but the effects of the silver had drained most of her strength so the woman had her well under control.
She reached out her hand to Ed, her eyes pleading him to help her but he couldn't move from the arrow in his chest and besides he was far too occupied with his own pain to notice hers.
Belle's whole body heaved and fought to live, her hands pulled on the chain despite the searing pain and her breasts heaved hard against the black gown.
Her feet so kicked frantically under her on the ground that her heels slipped off of her bare toes.
The blood stained tongue protruded from between her lips and flopped around in her mouth as blood dribbled of it down her lips and chin.
Her breasts heaved so furiously that they popped out of the cleavage of the gown, allowing her hard nipples to get some air.
Blood gushed from her neck and flowed down onto her naked breasts.
The woman pulled one last time and a terrible inhuman shriek left Belle's lips and lots of smoke rose from her scorced neck.
Her arms fell to her sides and her toes stopped twitching on the ground.
The woman let go of the chain and Belle fell facedown into the ground, stone dead.

The woman turned her over with her foot and saw that the red glow had disappeared from Belle's vampire eyes and her brown human eyes stared back at her horror striken.
Her mouth was gaping and her bloody tongue hung from the corner of her mouth, blood running from it down her cheek.
The bloodsoaked bare breasts didn't move any longer.
She reached down and carefully unwrapped the chain from the seared flesh on Belle's throat.
The chain was blood stained and covered wit hbits of seared skin and flesh.

"Eww gross."
The woman complained as she wiped most of it on Belle's gown.

She then wrapped it up in a ball and slipped it into the inner pocket of her leather jacket and moved over to where Ed was still trashing on the ground, clutching the arrow in his chest and bent down beside him.
Ed looked at her with a murderous glare in his eyes but he was far too weak to do anything but gasp in pain.

"You saw what I did to your bitch. If you want it easier, you'll answer my question."
She said matter of factly.

"f**k you."
Ed spat at her painfully as blood poured down his cheek.

"I imagine the pain's excrusiating, it really is convinient, this aversion your kind has to silver. Makes my job much less difficult and alot more fun."
She said dryly.

Ed burst out laughing in-between gasps and looked at her with the upmost contempt.

"Who the f**k do you think you are? Buffy?"
He asked laughing, mocking her.

The woman didn't bat an eye and casually reached out and twisted the arrow in Ed's chest and he let out a howl that sounded like out of a horror film.
She then grabbed him by the hair and pulled his face towards her.

"Buffy's a lazy bitch. I´m Dawn and I´m your worst nightmare. Now be a good boy and tell me where I can find Lorelei so I can be done with you because I don't think I can stand your company much longer."
She said in such a way that he did not doubt her or what she was capable of.

The red glow withered from his eyes and she saw that he was terrified at the sound of Lorelei's name.

"I...I..c..an't. I can't, she...'ll.."
Ed stammered.

Dawn sighed frustrated and removed a little glass vial from her pocket filled with a murky liquid that looked like that stuff inside thermomiters and held it up to his face so he could see it clearly.
Ed tensed up at the very sight of it and drops of blood ran down from his hairline, vampire sweat.
Dawn grinned and twisted the cap of the vial.

"Melted silver, a most useful thing. Tell me where to find Lorelei or I'll shove it down your damn throat and watch as it melts you from the inside."
Dawn's voice was calm but serious.

"She's at the nightclub Fangs. Its her nest, she's usually always there in the VIP section."
Ed rushed out shivering.

"How do I get in?"
Dawn asked firmly.

"Anyone can get in but you need a vampire to willingly escort you in to the VIP section. Someone who's got access."
Ed spoke as fast as he could.

"Do you have access?"
Dawn asked.

"Ehh..no."
Ed replied hesitantly.

"Then what use are you to me."
Dawn said coldly.

Ed gasped and tried to say something but Dawn had already shoved the vial in his mouth and poured the liquid silver down his throat.
The most horrible screams of agony came from the alley in the next few seconds as Ed literally melted into a puddle of blood and intestinal gunk.
Soon the screams stopped and nothing was left aside from the large smoking puddle and a ruined Prada suit.

Dawn moved over to poor Lucy's body and checked her pulse.
She knew she was dead but a part of Dawn just wanted to believe there was still hope.
She cursed herself for having been too late to save her, this meant that she had to do something she hated to do.
Dawn reached inside her right boot and withdrew a silver stake, the length of a large knife and held it above Lucy's breast, the point aimed at her heart.
Her hand shook a bit, she hated the idea of mutilating the poor girls body but if she didn't, she might come back to life as a vampire and that was a fate Dawn didn't wish on anyone.
It was impossible to tell which victim's of vampire's turned and who stayed dead.
No one knew why some did and some didn't.
She looked into Lucy's hollow eyes as they stared up at her sightless.

"I´m sorry."
Dawn said as a tear ran down her cheek.

She plunged the stake into Lucy's inviting breast, piercing her heart.
No blood flowed from the wound as Ed and Belle had drained her dry.
Dawn withdrew the stake from Lucy's breast and placed it back in her boot.
She zipped Lucy's top back up to give her dignity and gently ran her hands over her eyes, closing them.
Dawn picked up Lucy's body and carried her to the open dumpster nearby and hauled her inside it.
Then she dragged Belle's body and threw her ontop of Lucy in the dumpster.
She removed a small incendiary bomb from her pocket, activated it and let it drop on Belle's blood stained chest.
She closed the dumpster and as she walked away a burst of flame blew the lid off of the dumpster and everything inside it was swollowed by the fire.

The rules were that any vampire body or that of a vampire's victim must be destroyed so that no hints of their existance will come out.
Dawn knew all the rules and had done this many times for the reason that she was a vampire slayer and a damn good one.
She had well over a hundred vampire kills under her belt ever since becauseshe killed her first fourteen years earlier, in the evening of her 13th birthday.
To her knowledge there were only 31 active vampire slayers in the US and based on rough estimates over 8 thousand vampire's so she felt she needed to be the best she could be.
And now she had the location of her next target, Lorelei.
Now all she needed was a vampire willing to help her.
She wondered who in the hell she could find one.
Without her knowledge, that very vampire was watching her from the roof of the building across the street, his eyes glowing red.

"Interesting."
He said grinning as he read her mind and heard her plea for help.



Chapter 2. Fangs.
Coming Soon.


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PostPosted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 2:21 pm 
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Hmmm, this is great ... love vampires ... like me ... sexy & deadly ... Lol! :666: :angels: :lol:


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Chapter 2. Fangs.


As far as most people in Los Angeles are concerned, the nightclub "Fangs" is just another nightclub with a vampire theme but in reality it is the largest gathering venue for vampire's in all of California.
All its employee's right down to the busboys are vampires and most of the customers never so much as suspect that their in the presence of the real children of the night.
It's only the select few who are unfortunate enough to be granted an invitation to the club's VIP section that learn the terrifying truth.
Every night a dozen or so clueless human's are brought to the VIP section accompanied by a vampire and once they enter, their never seen again.
These are usually young drifters or vagrants with the occasional hopeful young actress fresh of the bus from Wyoming or Arkansas or Canada or wherever the hell these desperate girls with daddy issues come from.
On any given night there may be as many as forty vampires gathered at Fangs, all there in the hope of being granted an audience with Fang's owner, Lorelei the oldest, most vicious, powerful and beautiful vampire in all of the Northern hemisphere.

Fangs insides are bathed with neon lights that fill the club with a blood red athmosphere.
What catches most people's attention is the large fountain of blood in the center of the dance floor.
The Los Angeles times even called it a delightfully morbid decoration decision in an article praising the clubs wonderfully colorful dedication to the lore of Vampires.
That particular night there were over four hundred guest there, all dancing on the enormous dance floor in rhythm to the ghastly repetitive techno music, bathed in the blood red light.
But when Dawn walked though the doors of Fangs and into the heart of the vampire's community that night, she wasn't thinking of the fountain or of how many vampire's were there.
She was only concerned with one vampire...Lorelei.
There was nothing she hated more than vampire's and most of all she hated Lorelei whom she'd been tracking for most of her life, for it was Lorelei who had mercilessly butchered Dawn's entire family fourteen years earlier and it was time for Dawn to claim her revenge.

She had been contacted via the internet by someone who called himself Bill the night before.
His message said that if she met him there that night, he'd help her to get to Lorelei.
Dawn was distrustful of this message but the promise of getting to Lorelei was too great a temptation.

The air changed in Fangs the moment Dawn walked inside.
It was as if time stood still, every eye found her and the dance floor was filled with whispers of shock, curiosity, lust and most of all...fear.
Every vampire there knew who she was and they could all smell the excuised scent of the sweet, mouth watering blood that flowed in her veins and they all longed to taste her but no one dared too...at least not in public.
They were forbidden to expose themselves to the human's inside the club and besides most were too afraid of Dawn to make a move.
The human guests who were clueless to Dawn's identity were fascinated by her for another reason, her earth shattering beauty.
The men desired her as much as the vampire's desired her blood and the women envied her and wished to be her.
She looked breathtaking in her skintight pants that perfectly framed her spectacular behind and her long, desirable legs.
The black leather jacket was zipped down to her breasts, allowing all to see the magnificent cleavage her perfect breasts created.
No one could guess that the black leather stiletto boots each housed a silver stake and a pair of throwing knife's cast from melted silver and laced with garlic powder.
Her twin pistol's, loaded with sliver bullets that had been dipped in garlic nestled against each of her firm breasts under her jacket.

Dawn...
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... smiled amused at the reaction her arrival had on the crowd and she ran her hand through her long, golden hair allowing the pheromones within it to be tossed in the air and as they scattered into the air, half the vampire's in the club had to restrain themselves from attacking her and sink their sharp fangs in her slender neck.
Dawn laughed at how easy it was to tease the "suckers", her nickname for vampire's, and moved to the bar.
The crowd parted as she walked through the crowded dance floor and at least four men hit on her during the thirty or so seconds it took her to reach the bar.
One tried to pinch her ass and she snapped his wrist in half with one effortless twist of her hand.
No one else tried to lay a hand on her after that.

The bartender of Fangs, was a big vampire, covered in tattoo's and piercings.
He was so fat that Dawn imagined that he had been sent to fat camp and eaten all the other fat people there.
She saw his eyes turn blood red as she approached him, a sign that a vampire was overcome with desire for blood...or anger.

"I´m looking for Bill."
She declared to the fat bartender.

The fat vampire leaned forward with a playful grin and let her see his fangs as they grew before her eyes.
Apparently he was trying to intimidate her.
Dawn chuckled, he clearly didn't know who he was dealing with.

"Don't know no Bill so why don't you fuck off, you filthy little piece of cattle."
He spat out with the deepest voice she'd ever heard.

The stench from his mouth was nearly overwhelming for Dawn.
Normally she'd have asked again politely but his use of the word cattle, a term vampire's used for humans, pissed her off something awful.
She pulled a small glass vial filled with a clear liquid from her jacket pocket and she thrust it with her palm into the back of the fat vampire's hand that rested on the counter, breaking it and spilling the liquid all over it.
The barman howled in agony as the contense of the vial burned through his hand, melting the skin but left Dawn's palm unharmed.
He fell down to his knees behind the bar and tried to pull his hand back but she held it firmly in place.

"Oh fuck no, please stop. I'll help you but fucking make it stop, I beg you. "
He pleaded painfully.

"Hmmm, fascinating how well a few drops of garlic oil serve to improve your manners."
Dawn said calmly as she leaned forward towards him.

She pressed down harder on the barman's hand and he let out another whiny scream.

"I said I was looking for Bill. Care to point me in the right direction?"
Dawn asked.

"I don't know any Bill. I fucking swear it."
The barman cried out.

"I´m Bill."
A strong manly voice said casually from behind Dawn.

She turned her head to see an handsome man with black hair, a firmly chiseled jaw, pale skin and the coldest eyes she'd ever seen standing behind her.
His clothes were vintage but still somehow fashionable and there was a careless expression on his face.
He looked to be in his mid thirty's but there was that look of a jaded soul in his eyes that indicated he had been around far longer than anyone ever should.
He gestured to Dawn to follow him and walked away from the bar.
Dawn released the barman's hand and followed him without another word to the barman.
The whole back of the barman's hand was melted and the bones in his hands were for all to see.
He clutched it with his other hand and fell back behind the bar whimpering loudly.
The crowd around the bar continued about their business as before, apparently unfazed by Dawn's run in with the barman.

Bill led dawn to a table by the wall in a dark corner as far from the dancing, humping fools too stupid to see they were partying inside a slaughterhouse, just waiting to be drained of their precious blood one by one.
They sat down and Dawn felt Bill's eyes lingering on her and she saw the red in his eyes.
She knew she was mad to trust a stranger and a vampire of all things but her obsession with revenge had clouded her mind.
It was clear to her that this was a potential suicide mission, to attack one of the most powerful vampire's in the world in her own nest, surrounded by her followers but Dawn didn't care, she was ready to die for her revenge, as long as Lorelei followed her to the grave.
An skinny waitress dressed in all leather with a shaved head and several piercings walked up to them.

"Drink?"
She asked with a thick eastern european accent.

"Double burbon on the rocks."
Dawn said coldy without looking up at the waitress, she didn't waist good manners on vampire's.

"O negative please."
Bill said politly.

The waitress nodded and disappeared into the crowd on the dance floor.
Bill leaned forward on the table to get closer to Dawn who pushed her chair back an inch and moved her left hand to the grip of her crossbow that she kept in a holster at her hip, just in case Bill wasn't the gentleman he presented himself as.

"Pleasure to meet you miss, um Dawn. I am sorry but I seem to be unfamiliar with your last name."
Bill said casually.

"Just Dawn will do. Now tell me, why would a "sucker" like yourself contact me to offer assistance with staking a high member of your...community."
Dawn let out a distasteful snort at the last word.

Bill leaned back in his chair and folded his fingers together on the table, having seemingly decided to give up on getting closer to her.
An amused grin came to the corner of his mouth.

"Lets call it a mutually benificial arrangment. You want Lorelei dead and that suits me just fine. But you need my help as you can only gain access to the VIP section in the company of a willing vampire and I don't see you lining up other possibility's."
Bill explained.

"What's so special about me? There are other slayers and all of them want her dead as I do."
Dawn had been curious about this since getting his message.

"I saw how you dealt with that nutcase Ed and his bride Belle. They were both powerful vampire's and you handled them beautifully. I knew right then you were the one I needed and with the added motivation of your family's death, I know I can count on you."
Bill said matter of factly.

The mentioning of her family made Dawn shift uncomfortably in her chair and she looked away from Bill for a moment.

"I see, and now for the million dollar question? Why do you want her dead and why haven't you done the deed yourself?"
Dawn asked bluntly.

"Lorelei is far older and more powerful than I am and besides as she is my maker, I am unable to harm her or she me. It is the bond we share, a bond I am anxious to sever.
Bill said with a disappointed look on his face.

"That only answers the second part of the question. Why do you want her dead?"
Dawn asked again.

Bill didn't reply and Dawn noticed a subtle twitch in his face and his eyes grow redder.
Clearly he hated Lorelei beyond words, it was something personal.
For a second Dawn felt she saw the faintest hint of sadness in his face and then he looked down on the table to avoid her gaze.
Whatever it was, it hurt him.
Dawn was taken back by that as she had never before witnessed even the smallest hint of feeling or anything remotaly human in a vampire.
This Bill was different and just maybe she could trust him.
She relaxed the grip on her crossbow and set her left hand back up on the table.
Bill looked up at Dawn, his face returned to his previous casual expression.
The bald headed waitress returned with their drinks and set down the glass of burbon next to Dawn and a wine glass filled with blood in front of Bill.
The both drank in silence for a few minutes.
Dawn glanzed at the large metal door at the other side of the dance floor, two hulking bodybuilders in black suits were standing on either side of it.
That was the entrance to the VIP section.
Dawn's gaze moved up the wall to the row of tinted windows that reached out all along the walls.
She felt her skin crawl at the thought of the little vampire nest up there, all the suckers looking down onto the dance floor below at all the clueless moron's dancing to the ear shattering techno crap, unaware that each and every one of them was a potential snack.

"What can I expect in there?"
Dawn question broke the silence.

"Anywhere from 25 to 35 vampire's but most of them are cowards, Lorelei's entourage, lazy, degenerate slobs more concerned with their own skin than that of their leader. Many of them will be either easy to handle or will run off once things start but the one you need to concern yourself about is Sienne, Lorelei's right hand. She is very old and powerful and willing to do anything for her. Sienne lives to kill and she's always armed to the teeth as well. You also need to look out for Helga, the manager of this little slice of heaven we're in. She's very powerful and she's also got a hell of a mean streak about her. If you expect to get to Lorelei, you need to make sure they are dead first."
Bill dictated.

"Happy to."
Dawn replied.

"But it's Lorelei herself you really need to worry about. She's the most powerful vampire I have ever come across. She can enter your mind and twist it around and bend it to her will, all for her own pleasure. She's faster, stronger and more devious that any other. I can only hope you can have a chance against her."
Bill said in a firm tone.

Dawn finished her drink and slammed the glass on the table.

"What are we waiting for?"
She said.


As Bill's guest, it was easy to get past the guards and into the heart of Lorelei's nest... the infamous VIP section.
On the other side of the metal door Dawn and Bill found themselves in a small windowless room that reminded Dawn of a meat locker.
In fact it was a meat locker right down to the freezing cold, racks of animal carcasses hanging from large metal hooks and the smears of frozen blood on the floor.
On the far right, there hung the lifeless, blood drained, naked body's of two collage aged girls impaled on two of the hooks, wrapped in transparent plastic.
They both had an expression of utter fear and pain eached on their blood drained faces.
The one on the left had long blond hair, fair skin and large, ample breasts
Trails of dried blood on her bare skin reached from the bitemarks on her full breasts, her slender neck, her right wrist and on the inner thigh of her left leg.
She had apparently been passed around like a joint.
The other girl's hair was curly red and her body was adoned with cute freakles.
Her breasts were smaller than the blondes but equally alluring.
There were the same sorts of bitemarks on her neck and wrists but the unnatural angle that her head slung in coupled with the fact that her expression was more calm that the blonds, told Dawn that the redheads neck had been broken and she fed on afterwards.
Many vampire's prefered the taste of blood from a fresh corpse rather than a living person.
Dawn felt hatred rush though her and she clenched her fists and dug her nails into her palms.

A very beautiful and exotic looking female vampire was waiting inside the meat locker for Bill and Dawn.
She had dangerous eyes full of lust and other carnal pleasures, full pouty lips and flowing brown hair.
The vampire wore an enchanting black lace transparent teddy that left no part of her lust provoking body unseen, dark stokings that were connected to her garter belt and golden strap heels.
Dawn guessed that this was Helga, the manager that Bill had warned her about.

Helga...
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...let out an amused laugh at the sight of Bill.
The mind numbing cold had Dawn nearly shivering but neither Helga or Bill seemed to feel it.
Bill stepped forward and gestured Dawn to stand back with his hand.

"Look what the cat dragged in."
Helga said dryly, mocking Bill.

Her accent was eastern european.
It didn't surprise Dawn as more than half of all vampire's originated from there.
Dracula may have been bullshit but there was a reason Bram Stoker set his story in Transylvania.
Helga walked right up to Bill, almost pressing her body into his and ran the tip of her fingers across his shoulder and down his right arm slowly in a sensual way, grinning.
This was a gesture that would have melted most men and had them surrender in lust to her but Bill seemed unaffected, his expression remained as sully and cold as before.
Helga looked up into Bill's eyes and Dawn saw the desire in them.

"I though that Lorelei had sent you away Bill. You must have fangs the size of your dick if you are thinking of defing her commands."
Helga's eyes moved down to Bill's crouch as she spoke.

"I've been summoned here. And my dick's non of your concern Helga."
Bill said dryly.

"As I recall, you're dick is quite pleasant and it used to be my concern or don't you remember. We certainly had some good times, didn't we Bill?"
Helga asked playfully as she moved her hand below his belt and stroked his crouch.

"Don't remind me, you filthy bitch."
Bill said coldly as he grabbed her wrist and pulled her hand away from his crouch and pushed her back.

Helga's smile was replaced with a hateful glare, she had never been rejected like this before and it pissed her off.
The look in her eyes made Dawn grasp the handle of her crossbow for the second time since she arrived in Fangs.

"Your loss, you limp dick motherfucker."
Helga said filled with bitterness.

Dawn looked at Bill to try and read his expression to judge the situation but he seemed calm.
She looked back at Helga who was already calm again.
The thing about most vampire's, especially females, is that they have the tempraments of teenage girls with constant moodswings.
IHelga tilted her head and looked at Dawn with mild curiosity.
It seemed that she had only just now noticed Dawn.

"Who's the pretty little meatsack Bill? You're not slumming it are you?
Helga asked amused.

"She's non of your business."
Bill said firmly.

"I'll be the judge of that."
Helga spat back at him.

She drew her breath and sucked Dawn's scent into her nostril's.
Her eyes opened wide and they turned blood red.
Her face lit up with fury and her razor sharp fangs extended as she let out an terrifying hiss.

"Oh shit."
Bill muttered.

Dawn didn't like that reaction and moved to draw her crossbow from the holster at her hip but before she could, Helga had thrown herself at her at a speed twenty times faster than any human was capable of and pushed Dawn up against the wall.
Dawn let out a painful grunt as her back slammed up against the wall.
Bill tried to stop her but Helga had battered him away with her hand and sent him flying into the wall on his left with such force that his back left a sizable dent in the wall.
Helga held Dawn firmly by the throat and hoised her up so her boots dangled several inches of the floor.
Dawn grabbed Helga's hand and tried to loosen the grip but she might just as easily have been trying to rip a door of its hinges.
Dawn gasped for breath and her boots kicked wildly against the wall.
She stared into Helga's face and felt quite nervous, she was in a tight spot and with each second her she grew weaker.
Helga's red glowing eyes looked back at her with a animal desire and she hissed again, the fangs at full display.

"I know your scent...slayer."
Helga hizzed at her.

Dawn struggled as she could and tried to reach any of her weapons but Helga's squeeze on her neck was too strong and she was already feeling lightheaded and dizzy, her hands didn't respond properly and her beautiful face was blue enough for her to apply for a spot in the blue men group.
Helga laughed at Dawn's pathetic struggle.

"Is this all you can muster? You the vampire slayer? Pathetic. Well, I'll enjoy draining every last drop of your blood all the same. It smells so sweet."
Helga said as she licked her lips.

Helga leaned forward towards Dawn's throat, her fangs about to sink into her delectible neck and taste the sweet blood in her artery.
Dawn was powerless to stop it, all she could do was wait for the pain and then death.
Helga's tongue touched Dawn's neck and gently licked the spot she was going to bite.
She moaned pleasurably and felt a warm feeling in her entire body, she had never tasted such a good human.
Her fangs were an inch from sinking into Dawn's throat when Bill suddenly grabbed Helga from behind and pulled her away from Dawn with his superhuman strength.
She lost her grip on Dawn's throat and Dawn keeled down on the floor.
Helga shrieked and hizzed angrily like a trapped animal, her arms flinging wildly in the air and her feet kicking like crazy as Bill swung her around with lightning fast speed, towards one of the empty metal hooks dangling from the ceiling.

"I'll rip your fucking throat out you limp dicked motherfu...hhhhuuurrrrggghhhhhhh...aaarrrgghh...."
Helga screamed out in agony as the hook pierced her torso.

Blood squirted out of Helga's left breast where the hook had come out of her after traveling through her back and heart.
Helga gasped in both pain and confusion as she felt herself free from Bill's grasp but she was still above the floor and she looked down to see that she was hanging on the hook with it running through her chest like all the other scewered animals.
Helga had clearly just fed judging by the amount of blood that gushed from her ruined breast, down her black teddy, soaking it though.
More blood forced itself from between her lips and flowed down her cheeks and dribbled down to her firm bosom.
Helga thrashed wildly on the hook much like a worm on...well a hook, her feet shook in air as the unnatural life was drained from her vampire body.
She reached up and touched the bloody tip of the hook protruding from her breast.
The hook was covered in her blood and she got some of it on her finger
Helga lifted the finger up to her mouth and licked the blood of her finger.

"Good stuff."
She said to Bill, who stood before her watching her die.

Helga's head slumped on her shoulder and the hands fell to her side.
Her feet tensed a moment and then they fell limp and swung aimlessly in the air.
Both of her golden heels slipped of her stocking clad toes and fell to the floor in the pool of blood that had collected under her.
Bill looked carefully up at Helga's face and saw the fangs withdrew back up and the blood red glow fade away from her eyes and all that was left in them was the blank stare of a death.
That was another thing the fairytales had wrong...when a vampire dies, she doesn't turn to ash or a big puddle of goo.
They just die like everyone else.

"Limp dick my ass."
Bill said to himself.

Bill moved to Dawn who was coughing and nursing her sore throat and helped her to her feet.
Dawn looked up at Helga's dead body swining on the hook, blood flowing from her chest and mouth, down her long legs and dripping of the tip of her toes.
She could tell that Bill had been successful at running the hook through Helga's heart.
If he had missed the heart, Helga would be thrashing like mad and most likely she would have already ripped the chain on the hook loose and pulled it out of her.
You could drive a sword though a vampire's chest but if it didn't go though the heart, it wouldn't even slow the vampire down.
She felt a rush of satisfaction as she looked into Helga's human eyes, the clearest sign a vampire truly was dead, and she smiled.
The death of a vampire always put a smile on Dawn's face.

"You alright?"
Bill asked Dawn.

"I feel like a useless fool but yes I´m alright."
Dawn replied sourly.

"Don't feel bad. Vampire's grow stronger and more powerful as the age and Helga was over eight hundred years old."
Bill said in an attemnt to reassure Dawn.

"Thank for saving my life."
Dawn said hesitantly.

The idea of thanking a vampire for anything was almost too much for her to bare and not to mention surreal as hell.
Bill smiled at the awkward look on Dawn's face and she saw that his fangs were out.
It was a sight that sent a shiver down her spine and disgusted her and her face showed it.
Bill quickly retracted the fangs and lost the smile.
Being thought of as a monster is nothing to smile at.

"Lets go. The sooner you kill Lorelei, the better."
Bill said with a bitter tone in his voice.

He pulled on one of the hanging lamb racks and a section of the wall opened up to reveal a pathway.
Bill strutted down the pathway without another word and a sullen expression.
Dawn followed him, regretful.
The wall closed up behind them and Helga's dangling corpse was left all alone in the cold meat locker.


Chapter 3. Memories of Blood.
Coming Soon.


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Thank you Jessika. Thrilled to hear you like it and i hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story.
Not surpised you like vampire's, their almost as deadly and sexy as you are. :up:


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Fleming...GREAT STORY....

Of course, lesbian vampires can only be killed by a cox through their pussy...LOL

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Chapter 3. Memories of Blood.


The VIP section of Fangs wasn't so much a section as it was a long hallway that streached out in a square shape all around the club on its upper level with mirrors on one side that provided a view over the entire dance floor like Dawn had guessed earlier.
It was lit in the same blood colored neon light which made it hard for human's too see clearly but for vampire's it was ideal.
There were black leather benches up against the walls as far as the eye could see and by the look of it, they were not just for those who liked to have a seat or lie down, their main purpose was something far more sinister.

On several of the benches, there either sat or lay dozens of vampire's feeding humans they had under their spell.
Well except for the very beautiful and sexy blackhaired female vampire who lay sprawled out on one of the benches butt naked as she was mercilessly pounded by a strapping human man who seemed to be a body builder who seemed to be just as fond of it as she was.
Her wild animal screams of lust were earshattering.
Her fangs suddenly shot out and she locked onto the man's throat as she kept fucking him.
His blood sprayed over her face and large naked breasts and she roared in joy as she wrapped her legs around him as she gorged on his blood.
She clearly wanted to get as much out of his cock before all the juice in it ran out.
After all a man needs blood to keep it up.

"That's Victoria. She's got a special... lust for life."
Bill explained to the horrified Dawn.

"I see that."
Dawn replied dryly.

Special apperance by Victoria Lust as well... Victoria Lust the vampire.

It was a feeding station, the benches served as trouths before the swines gorging on the young and helpless girls, who's painfully desperate moans and pleads for help fell on deaf ears as the horrid techno music drowned out their voices.
Which didn't matter as the VIP section was soundproofed anyway.
Dawn felt sick at the carnage before her eyes as she and Bill walked past feeding after feeding, looking into the eyes of the frightened, dying young girls that had not been fortunite enough to have been finished quickly as the beasts ripped into their flesh with their fangs, blood gushing from their necks, their thighs, their wrists and just about any part of the body it could gush from.
There must have been at least ten girls being feasted on in there.
Sometimes there were as many as four vampire's to a single girl.
Those girls didn't scream long as the blood was drained from their veins quickly.

Dawn felt horrible rage inside her and she barely resisted the urge to draw her weapons and slay every last bloodsucker in sight but she reminded herself that these girls were all beyond saving at this point and that she was there for a reason.
But it took every last ounce of strenght and self control she had in her not to act.
Bill who had read Dawn's thoughts, not that he had to, her feelings were plastered all over her horror stricken face, grabbed her arm to hold her back.

"I understand how you feel but there's nothing you can do for these poor souls. Remember why you are here. Keep your mind on that."
He whispered to her ear.

They walked past one of the benches where a stunningly beautiful young blonde lay sprawled out, naked aside from her black thong as two male vampire's feasted on her.
This struck Dawn especially as the blonde was so familiar to her.
She slowed down and looked closer at the poor girl.
She was unusually beautiful and cleaned up for a vampire's victim, her ripped silk dress and her Valentino pumps lay discared on the floor where the vampire's had thrown them after tearing the girls clothes away from her young, firm body.
These clothes were much too expencive for her to be an vagrant or a hopeful actress fresh of the bus.
Where the hell did Dawn know her from.
She took a step closer, her eyes fixed on the poor girl.

The vampire's seemed to have decided to work their way up her body as one was playfully nibbling at her calf while the other one had sank his fangs into her inner thigh, inches from her pussy and greedily sucked her precious lifeblood.
The girl seemed terrified but sedated, like she didn't know exactly where she was but knew enough to know she didn't want to be there.
She moaned angstful and writhed on the leather surface of the bench she lay on.
The vampire who drank from her thigh ran his hand sensually up her bare stomach, over her bellybutton.
His hand moved up to her firm, spectacular breast and he played with her erect nipple with his finger.
The girl shuddered weakly in disgust as she felt herself violated by the horrible bloodthirsty monsters.
Dawn saw the fear and pain in her eyes and she couldn't stop herself from drawing one of the silver knifes from her boot.
http://www.mediafire.com/imageview.php? ... fk&thumb=6 Special apperance by Amber Heard as the girl.

"Hey suckers."
Dawn spat out.

The vampire who's fangs were locked on the girl's thigh, looked up angerly, his lips and fangs stained in the girls blood, his eyes glowing red.
With one swift movement of her hand, Dawn sliced his throat open, nearly severing his head off.
The vampire let out a horrible gurlge as gallons of his blood sprayed out into the air.
The other vampire hissed at Dawn and with his fangs, he made to attack her but Bill had already moved up to him and grabbed him in a headlock.
The vampire trashe din his arms until Bill twisted his head so hard that he ripped it clean of the vampire's body.
Blood sprayed up like a geyser from the stump of his neck and the headless body crumpled to the floor.
The first vampire fell onto the floor, clutching his slashed throat and after thrashing for a few seconds, he slumped down in the large puddle of his blood, dead.
Bill let the other vampire's head drop on top of its owners body and quickly looked around concerned to see if this little incident had raised suspision.
Luckily non of the other vampire's feasting had a clue anything had happened.
Where a vampire feeds, they go into a sort of tranze and the rest of the world vanishes to them.
At that moment all that matteres to them is the blood flowing in the veins of their victim.
Bill shot Dawn a pissed off "what the fuck was the meaning of that" look but she ignored him.

Dawn sat down on the bench next to the dying girl and took her hand.
She had realized why the girl seemed so familiar to her, she reminded her of her sister...Daphine.
The memory of her family's slaying was still fresh in her mind.



MANY YEARS AGO.


Unlike most children, Dawn had grown up knowing that vampire's excisted among us for real and not just in books and movies.
She knew this because her parents were both vampire slayers, they best in all of the US.
She and her older sister Daphnie grew up listening to their parents story's and had been trained from an early age to fight vampire's so they could always defend themselves if need be but the last thing their parents wanted was for their daughters to follow in their footsteps.
That was why Daphine was a junior in college, studying law and Dawn was heavily involved in ballet.
The Mist family lived in a small cottage in the woods in Minnisota as they crawed the peace and quite their work lacked.

On that particular night they all sat gathered at the dinner table like they always did when Dawn's parents weren't away on slayings.
They had returned from a difficult job the day before and Dawn was besides herself over having them all together again as that night was her twelveth birthday and her parents had given her a silver braclet with little hearts carved into it.
There was a wide smile on Dawn's face as she ran her eyes across the dinner table, looking over her family.

Her mother was as beautiful as any woman could be, tall and thin with amazingly long legs, the most radiant smile and bright blue eyes
It was clear by the way Dawn's father kept looking at her mother that she looked breathtaking in her short black suade dress and heels.
As usual her long golden hair was done in cute pigtails that were most unusual for a woman her age but her mother was like that, never caring about the opinion of others and always went her own way in everything.
http://adoring-kidman.com/images/displa ... fullsize=1 Special apperance by Nicole Kidman as Dawn's mother.

Daphine was every bit as beautiful as their mother and she was always hounded by guys wherever she went, her magnificent petite figure, long blonde hair and her heartwarming smile made sure of that.
She always liked to dress casually at home and the only thing she had on to hide her black underwear was a tight black sweater that was only buttoned with one button and very short casual black skirt.
She never liked to wear shoes and was usually barefoot and that time was no exception.
http://kristenbell-online.org/photos/di ... =374&pos=0 Special apperance by Kristen Bell as Daphine.

Daphine loved her baby sister more than anything else and always took special care of her.
Dawn always assumed that Daphine had been so bored as an only child that when Dawn was finally born when she was nine that she decided they'd be best friends for life.
Daphine caught Dawn's gaze and smiled at her and pretended to snore at the dull story their dad was telling over dinner and the sisters both cracked up, trying to stiffle their laughter.
Their mother shot them a mean glare that then turned into a smile as she too expressed boredom at the father's story by rolling her eyes and pretending to die in her seat.
All three of them laughed outloud, much to the joy of Dawn's father as the outburst coincided with the punchline of his story and he thought their laughter was a result of that.

The family was in the middle of the second verse of Happy birthday when someone suddenly knocked furiously on the front door that scared the life out of Dawn and Daphine.
Their father quickly rose to his feet and drew his revolver, loaded with silver bullets and headed to the door while their mother pulled her crossbow from the closet next to the table and stayed behind to cover their daughters.

"It's Nala. Let me in quick."
A woman's voice called frightened through the door.

Dawn's father rushed to open the door and a stunningly beautiful woman of middle eastern decent rushed through the door, looking freaked out as all hell.
Dawn's father quickly bolted the door shut behind her.
Nala was in her late twenty's with long dark hair held down to the side by her silk headband.
She was wearing a zipped up black leather jacket that struggled to contain her firm breasts, the tightest pair of jeans known to man that looked very flattering on her glorious long legs and knee high brown suade boots with six inch heels.
There was no one in the world Dawn more wanted to be like that Nala.
http://logicalhiphop.files.wordpress.co ... of9zfo.jpg Special apperance by Claudia Lynx as Nala.

Nala was her parents best friend and their partner in vampire slaying.
Dawn knew that she was a very brave and gifted slayer and if there was something that frightened her, it had to be serious.

"What is it Nala? What's wrong?"
Dawn's father asked concerned.

"Its Lorelei."
Nala said out of breath and frightened.

Dawn's mother gasped in fear and fell down into her chair and her father looked like he'd been punched in the gut.
She and Daphine looked at each other concerned.
Who is Lorelei was a question burning on both their lips.

"She's here in the woods. Me and Macmillan's crew have been tracking her for days. We caught up with her last night. She slaughtered the others like animals. I just managed to escape, if the sun hadn't risen I'd be dead for sure."
Nala explained nervously.

She helped herself to whisky at the bar in the globe in the corner of the living room and let herself fall down in the sofa.

"Oh shit."
Dawn's mother blurted out.

She had never cursed in front of her daughters before.
This was serious.
Dawn's father seemed angry.

"Could she have followed your scent hear?"
He asked Nala firmly.

Nala looked up at him nervously and shook her head.

"Nno...no I can't see how she could have. I told you the sun came up and she disappeared.
Nala said unsure.

Dawn's father sighed with relief and wiped the sweat from his forehead.
Her mother stood up and poured herself a drink like Nala, another first for the sisters to witness their mother doing.

Outside the cottage in the treeline of the woods surronding it, a magnificently beautiful young woman stood in the darkness she called home.
The flowing dark-brown, almost black hair cascaded down her back, her skin was white as snow and her lips as red as blood.
There was a red glow in the bewitching eyes that normally were a wonderful shade of blue.
Her clean, white teeth had sproted two long, razor sharp fangs and she was licking her lips in antisipation.

Lorelei had taken the white gown she was wearing of the corpse of a beautiful young bride she killed.
She had seen the bride wearing that dress as she entered the small chapel she was getting married in and Lorelei had felt a desire for that dress so she crashed the wedding and slaughtered every single one of the thirty one guests in attendence.
She occationally liked to over indulge a little as she called it.
She had pulled the dress off of the bride's lifeless body, careful not to get blood on it and put it on instead of the ratty green one she had been wearing.
The silk glowes Lorelei had taken from the maid of honors corpse.
The white silk shawl, she had gotten from around the neck of the bride's mother and the black lace bodice she had tied around her waist, she had gotten interestingly enough from the father of the groom.

Lorelei...
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... was so happy with the way she looked in this "borrowed" ensamble that she had worn it almost every night for the past fifteen years, ever since that wedding took place.
She laughed at all the fear she felt coming from that little cottage and all the frightned thoughts going through their minds.
She drew in a deep breath and let the scent of the people inside fill her wits and she moaned with pleasant surprise over the particularily sweet blood she smelled on one of the people inside and she knew she had to taste that person's blood.

Dawn went over to her mother and gave her a reassuring hug as she seemed more than a little upset.

"Its okay mommy. Everything will be all right."
Dawn said with a smile.

Her mother smiled back and ran her hand down Dawn's cheek.

"I´m sure you're right."
She said.

The moment the words left her lips, the door was smashed to bits as Lorelei burst through it, a massive grin on her face and her fangs on full display.

"Am I too late for dinner?"
She joked.

Dawn and her sister screamed in fear and their father aimed the revolver at Lorelei but she had already moved up to him, she grabbed his hand and guided the barrel away her and much like pulling the wing of a fly, she ripped his arm out of its socket.
Blood sprayed over everything and the women screamed in horror as the father fell to the floor twitching as more blood sprayed from his torso.
Lorelei laughed and licked the bloody stump of his arm like a lollypop.
Dawn's mother pushed Dawn aside and with a furious look on her face she aimed her crossbow and fired the silver tipped arrow at Lorelei who caught it in mid air and threw it back at Dawn's mother.
Dawn's mother gasped as her own arrow hit her in the right breast and blood squirted out of it and down her black dress.
She staggered back a step and clutched the arrow loadged in her breast as blood spat from her mouth.
Her legs failed her and she fell to her knees and slumped to her side and lay still as more blood flowed from her breast.

"MOMMY"
Dawn cried out as she saw her mother fall.

Daphine grabbed her and pulled her back to the corner, hoping the vampire would not care about them.
Nala had already grabbed the silver sword that Dawn's father owned from where it hung above the fireplace and wielded it against Lorelei.

"Come get me you vampire cunt."
Nala yelled out bravely.

Lorelei laughed and threw the fathers arm into her so hard that she was knocked down to the floor.
As Nala staggered to her feet, Lorelei had already moved up to her and grabbed her by the hair.
Nala screamed in pain as she was hoisted up by her hair.
Lorelei held her face up against her own and licked her cheek as Nala whinched and hit out at her.

"Errggghhh. You taste awful. You must be a smoker."
Lorelei complained disgusted.

Nala responded by spitting in Lorelei's face.

"Taste that demon."
Nala said defingly.

Lorelei chuckled as she decided what to do with this one.
Her face brightened as she came to a decision and she threw Nala up against the wall.
She picked up the silver sword and drove it through Nala's gut so hard that it past through her and sank deep into the wall behind her, pinning Nala to the wall.

"HHhhuuurrrrgggg..."
Nala's agonised gasp was like music to Lorelei's ears.

Blood gushed from between Nala's lips and flowed down her cheeks.
Her face was locked in pain and her boots twitched on the floor, their heels scratching it.
With tears of pain running down her face, Nala weakly looked down to see the blood spilling from her impaled belly and running down her legs, soaking her jeans and wetting her white panty's.
The blade stood out of her belly in the gap between her jeans and her leather jacket, just below the bellybutton.
She could feel the warm blood running down from her back against the wall.
Her eyes were filled with fear and most of all pain.
She moaned as a heavy wave of it rushed though her entire body.
Lorelei moved up to her so close that they were inches away from one another and licked the blood off of Nala's lips.

"Mmmm, that's a little bit better than I though. Nothing special but terrible either."
She said matter of factly.

Lorelei's lips came against Nala's and she passionatly kissed her, drinking up the blood that flowed out of her mouth.
Nala's final moans of pain were unheard in Lorelei's mouth.
She writhed on the sword and her boots shook a moment before her body fell limp on the silver blade.
Lorelei's lips parted from Nala's and she looked at the dead vampire slayer nailed to the wall by a silver sword.
Her head slumped forward and her chin rested on her breasts.
Blood from her mouth dribbled down on her breasts and ran down the jacket.
Her hands hung limp by her sides and her boots dangled in the air above the floor, swinging slightly.
The wall behind her was stained in her blood.
Nala's life deprived eyes stared vacantly down at the blood puddle that had collected on the floor below her.
Lorelei looked away from the dead slayer and at the young sisters cowering in the corner, sobbing.
She breathed in their scent and and smiled.

"There it is."
She said pleased.

A quarter of a second later Lorelei stood right before them and they both screamed in fear as the beast glared at them lustfully, blood dripping from her lips, her eyes glowing red like a demons eyes.

"Daddy help us please."
Daphine yelled out to her father who lay stone dead in a pool of his blood, his eyes blank.

"Daddy can't hear you sweety. He's as dead as an old man's cock."
Lorelei teased.

Dawn sobbed harder and called out for her mother as her sister held her closely.

"Mommy, mommy."
She cried out.

"You know, you're not really getting it are you? Your mommy is also just as dead as daddy is. I think I'll start with you."
Lorelei said annoyed at the girls whining.

She leaned closer to the sisters, her fangs growing longer before their eyes and she hissed softly.
Dawn screamed frightened and Daphine held her tightly to her, trying to protect her.

"Stay away from them you horrible bitch."
Their mother spat out hatefully as she plunged the arrow she had ripped out of her own breast into Lorelei's calf with all her remaining strength.

Lorelei howled in pain and anger as the silver burned her leg.
She staggered away from the sisters and grabbed the arrows handle as she tried to pry it out of her flesh.
The sisters looked stunned at their mother, who lay on her stomach on the floor barely able to hold her head up.
Quite a lot of blood was trickling down her cheek from the mouth and she was breathing with difficulty.
There was a trail of blood on the floor where she had crawled from the place she had fallen to her daugters.

"Run. Now."
She ordered her daughters.

There was such pain and fear in her eyes, not fear for herself but fear for her daughters.
Daphine nodded crying and pulled her young sister to her feet who kept screaming for her mother and they ran out the shattered door into the darkness of the woods.
Lorelei finally managed to rip the arrow from her leg and she screamed out a beastly roar in anger as she did.
Within seconds the wound in her calf healed itself completely.
She threw the arrow away and pulled Dawn's mother up and made her stand.
Lorelei's eyes found the bleeding wound in her right breast that had soaked through the dress around it and she jammed her thumb in the wound as far in as she could.
Dawn's mother screamed in agony as loudly as humanly possible, just like Lorelei was hoping for.
Then Lorelei grabbed her neck with both hands and violently snapped her neck like a twig with a loud crunch.
Dawn's mother's body twiched in the air like a straw doll as a quick gasp left her lips, her delicate feet shook and one of her heels fell from her bare foot on the floor.
Her hands fell limp to her side and for a moment she dangled lifeless in Lorelei's grasp, her bright blue eyes staring emptily into Lorelei's glowing red once.
Lorelei released her grip on her neck and she slumped to the floor in a mangled heap at Lorelei's feet.

Daphine and Dawn could hear their mothers agonized scream and the stopped dead and looked back in horror.
Daphine knew she had to go back and help her mother, after all she had been trained in what to do.

"Listen sweety. I have to go back for mom and I need you to be a brave girl and go on without me. Just don't stop running until its daylight. You promise me?"
She said firmly to her little sister.

Dawn first resisted and begged her sister to come with her but then she agreed tearful and frightened.
Daphine hugged her one last time and told her to run.
Then she ran back to the cottage.
Dawn watched her sister for a few seconds before she did as she was told and ran as fast as she could.
It was the last time she saw her sister alive.

Daphine rushed back into the cottage to find her mother's lifeless body sprawled out on the floor besides her husbands body, her dead eyes staring right at her daughter.
Daphine screamed in horror and moved to run back out but Lorelei had already appeared behind her, smiling.

"Welcome back...to hell."
She hissed out.

Daphine moved to pick up her father's revolver but Lorelei was faster.
She grabbed Daphine by the throat, hoisted her up and threw her down onto the dinner table.
Daphine cried out in pain as she slammed onto the hard oak table and she felt as if her spine had cracked.
Before she knew it, Lorelei had climbed up on the table and straddled her.
Daphine struggled to fight back but it was hopeless.
Annoyed by Daphine's hitting and moving around, Lorelei grabbed her by the head and slammed the back of it into the table, half knocking her out.
She didn't struggle after that.

"Ahh, much better. I prefer quite when I eat."
Lorelei said.

Lorelei ripped Daphine's sweater open allowing her breasts in the black bra to breath a little.
She ran her hand up Daphine's stomach and to her breasts.
She fondled them with both hands, they felt so good to the touch and Lorelei's thirst grew stronger.
Daphine was half in and out of consciousness as Lorelei amused herself with her desirable body.

"S...st..oop...ple...asse..."
Daphine begged weakly.

"No I think I won't."
Lorelei said coldly.

Without warning Lorelei sank her fangs deep into Daphine's soft, exposed neck and blood gushed from it and flowed down to her breasts.
Daphine eyes opened wide with excrusiating pain and shock and she screamed out in horror.
Her whole body thrashed and kicked underneath Lorelei who enjoyed to feel Daphine's firm petite body pushing up against hers.
Daphine's legs kicked wildly on the table knocking glass's and plates to the floor and her bare toes currled as the pain burned through her.
Her breasts heaved frantically against Lorelei's ample breasts and her arms flooped aimlessly on the table.
Her fingernails clawed into the wooden table as the unbearable pain rode through her
Blood forced itself out of Daphine's mouth and streamed from the corners of her mouth, down both of her kissible cheeks.
Daphine cursed herself for being so foolish, rushing back to be this monsters dinner.
Her last thoughts ran to her sister and she hoped she'd be safe.

"Aaaaahhhhhh...."
She gasped painfully as Lorelei drained the last drops of blood in her veins and her body relaxed on the table under Lorelei's cold body.

Daphine's arms fell on the table with a thud, the feet stopped shaking and lay still on the table as her toes uncurrled.
The firm breasts stopped heaving against Lorelei's.
Lorelei pulled her fangs from Daphine's flesh and licked her lips happily, feeling fullfilled.
Daphine's beautiful bright blue eyes looked up at her life-drained and empty.
Her lips were parted, locked in her last agonized gasp and stained with blood.
Daphine was dead.

Dawn had been running for what felt like forever when she had to stop, her lungs were on fire and she could barely stand up straight and she fell to her knees gasping for air.
She burst to tears and fell into the grass as she thought of her family and hoped Daphine would be safe.
She was laying in the grass crying when she felt someone standing over her.
Every muscle in her body froze and her eyes widened.
It took her a little while to gather the courage to look up to see who it was but she finally managed.
Dawn screamed in terror as she saw that it was Lorelei.
She was just standing there with an odd curious look on her face.
Her lips and chin were stained with blood but her fangs were not on display and her eyes were blue and not glowing red as before.
She really looked quite like a fairytale princess to Dawn, aside from the blood.
Dawn crawled a few steps away from her but she was much to afraid to try and run.
Lorelei kept staring at her as if she were thinking what to do with her.
Finally she got down on her knees before Dawn and gave her a friendly smile.

"Its okay. I won't hurt you.
She said softly.

"Y...you...won't..?"
Dawn asked frightened.

"Nah, I changed my mind and besides I don't like the taste of children, too weak, not enough kick to it, you know. Why don't you run along home. Its not safe for a little girl like you to be wandering the woods by herself at night. Believe me I know."
Lorelei said in a very kind, very soothing tone.

Dawn stared at her, still far too frightened to move and confused as to why the vampire was being so nice to her.
Lorelei then got back to her feet and disappeared into the darkness without ever looking back.
Dawn sat there paralysed for a while until she finally got herself to get to her feet and run back to the cottage as fast as she could.
She didn't stop running until she got back to the cottage.

Very slowly Dawn peeked her head inside the door and she burst into tears at the sight of her mothers dead body lying in the pool of her fathers blood, her once bright blue eyes now hollow and empty, staring up at her.
Lorelei had ripped her dress off of her body and she lay there fully naked, blood still seeping from the wound the arrow had left in her right breast.
Her breasts and inner thights were stained with bloody handprints where she had touched by the vampire after she died.
She lay with her arms spread out and her legs bent at the knee, one ontop of the other.
Her golden hair was stained by her husbands blood.
Dawn took her mothers lifeless body in her arms and buried her face in her mothers hair as she cried.
Her mother's eyes stared at the daughter that so needed her comfort but she couldn't.

Dawn lowered her mother's body back on the floor and when she turned around and saw Daphine's limp body sprawled out on the dinner table she felt her legs give out and she fell to her knees clutching her mouth, feeling sick.
Daphine lay with her bare feet dangling just off of the edge of the table and her arms spread out at her sides.
Her black sweater was wide open and the black bra hung off of her breasts ripped in two, leaving her full naked breasts exposed and the casual black skirt had been pulled up to her hips and the panty's torn away.
Blood dripped of the table from the small puddle of blood that had collected on the table from the blood that had flowed from the bitemarks on her delicate neck.
The lifeless eyes stared up at the ceiling, ignoring Dawn's tearfilled eyes.
Dawn stared at the two identical holes in her sister's punchered neck and she knew how she had died.
She also knew what could happen and what she needed to do, her parents had made it quite clear to her and Daphine what had to be done to those who died from vampire bites.
Dawn couldn't bare the thought of her sister turning into a monster like Lorelei.
She opened the closet her parents kept most of their weapons in and with her fathers silver stake in her hand, she slowly walked to the table her sister's body lay on and held the sharp stake over her sisters heart with both hands.
She cried as her hands shivered almost uncontrolably over her sisters chest, she couldn't bring herself to do that to her own sister, even if she was dead.
Dawn threw the stake to the floor and let herself fall down onto the table an lay next to her sister's cold body and buried her face in her hands.
Soon she felt herself drifting into sleep from the exhaustion.

Dawn didn't know how long she had been asleep when she woke up from a strange sound.
She gasped frightened and slowly opened her eyes to see that Daphine's body was no longer lying next to her.
Terror washed over her.
She could hear a low animal growl from the living room and she rushed up.
Her heart nearly stopped as she saw Daphine crouched on the floor, her mothers lifeless body in her arms.
She had her back turned to Dawn and it sounded like she was sobbing with her face nustled against their mother's body.

"Daphine?"
Dawn asked frightened.

Daphine's whole body tensed up at the sound of her name and she lifted her head up.
She slowly turned her head to face her sister and when Dawn saw her face she screamed in horror.
Daphine's eyes were glowing red and inhuman, her teeth had sprouted enormous fangs and her mouth, chin and cheeks were covered with blood.
She hissed loudly at Dawn and stood up, dropping her mother's body that she had been feeding on back on the floor.
Blood gushed from the mother's neck who's head hung at an unnatural angle on account of the broken neck.
Dawn screamed again and fell off the table to the floor as she moved away from her sister.
When she rose herself up on the floor, there was no sign of Daphine.
She had vanished though the door into the darkness of the woods, off to join her maker Lorelei as she was now forever connected to her by the bond of blood.
Dawn laid down on the floor and currled up into a ball shaking, crying.
She was all alone.



PRESENT DAY.


Tears ran down Dawn's face as she looked down on the silver braclet with little hearts carved on it that she always kept around her left wrist.
Not a day had passed since that night that she didn't think about her sister, she had been searching for her all these years so she could finish what she started and free her sister from the curse she was trapped in and Lorelei was her only lead to her sister.
She closed her mind to her painful, blood drenched memories and focused on the poor girl lying on the leather bench next to her in this horrible nightclub.
Dawn smiled reassuringly at her.
The girl looked back at her with a frightened expression.

"Aa..am..I.I..ddy...in..g.."
The girl's voice was filled with sadness.

Dawn could tell by the girl's laybored breathing and the way she was shaking that she had lost too much blood, she was dying and fast.
The vampire's venom is deadly and there are few who survive a bite.
And if she didn't die, she'd most definitly turn.
That was something Dawn would not risk, never again.
Bill knew what Dawn was thinking before she did and he agreed with what needed to be done.
He leaned up to Dawn and whispered to her.

"I'll do it. Its better if I do it."
He said.

Dawn appreciated the kindness he was showing her but she needed to do it herself.
She had been unable to do it for her sister but she would not fail this poor girl.

"No. I have to do it."
She replied.

Bill understanding her feelings, nodded and stepped back to give Dawn privacy with the girl.
Dawn looked the girl in the eyes and ran her hand down her cheek softly.
The girl began writhing harder in pain as the venom took hold of her and she gasped in pain as she looked up pleadingly at Dawn.

"It will all be over soon."
Dawn promised.

Then she slipped the knife into the girl just below her left breast as cleanly and swiftly as she could, she did not wish to add to the girls suffering.
The girl sighed as Dawn drove the knife in at an upward angle, piercing her heart.
Some blood trickled down the girls bare skin to her abdomen from the wound as Dawn pushed the blade in deeper and the girl's body trembled and her legs twitched on the leather, her bare toes currled and she shivered as death took hold of her.
The girl coughed and some blood ran down her cheek from her soft lips.
Her hand squeezed Dawn's hand as hard as she could and Dawn squeezed back, comforting her as much as she could.
The girls breasts heaved weakly and more blood flowed from under the left one.
She looked up at Dawn and smiled weakly as tears ran from her eyes.
She was greatful for Dawn's act of mercy.

"...Tha..nk...yy...oo.....aaaahhhhhhh..."
She sighed as the last breath left her.

Her toes uncurrled and her body relaxed on the leather bench.
Her hand stopped squeezing Dawn's and the breasts heaved no more.
The girls eyes stared up at Dawn without seeing her or anything else.
Dawn reached out and closed her eyes.
She set her hand down on the bench at the girls side.

"Here. To cover her."
Bill said softly as he handed Dawn the girl's ripped dress.

Dawn nooded and accepted it.
She laid the dress over the girls face and chest, covering her the best she could.
She had given her piece.
Dawn wiped the tears away from her eyes and stood up.
She slipped the knife back in her boot and turned to face Bill, who had read her memories and feelings.
He felt a great deal of sadness towards this beautiful and brave young woman who had suffered so much and was about to march to her possible death willingly.

"Lets go kill the cunt."
Dawn said doubtless.


Chapter 4. The nest of the Vampire.
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Chapter 4. The Nest of the Vampire.


Nests of vampire's aren't at all like the traditional nest found in nature such as those of birds.
In fact the word nest is merely a nickname that vampires give their homes or resting chambers to distinguish themselves from humans, whom they consider to be far beneath them.
These nests can be anything from a house to a penthouse apartment or even just a hole in the ground, its only requirements are that the must provide the vampire or vampire's that have claimed it as their own, protection from sunlight and safety from potential "stakers" when they sleep.

Lorelei's nest was a large and dark windowless chamber lit only with blood red neon lights.
The only way in or out of it was through a thick steel door with the words "LORELEI'S NEST" displayed in bright red neon letters above it, at the top of the stairs in a private part of Fangs VIP section.
The door is always guarded by two loyal human servants, who's orders are to mercilessly kill any man, woman or vampire who tired to enter without Lorelei's invitation or approval.

The nests appearance was much the same as a the VIP lounge of a nightclub, filled with leather benches and chairs, a bar in the corner, stocked to the brim with Lorelei's favorite blood type...AB negative.
Chains dangled from the air in the center of the room as Lorelei often enjoyed stringing frightened girl up on their ankles and slitting their throats, allowing their blood to drip to her awaiting mouth.
Several large audio speakers on the walls played music from Lorelei's enormous record collection (music was her one passion that did not involve carnage) relentlessly all night long, every night.
That night, it was Bach.
In the corner there lay six black coffins where Lorelei and her entourage (the loyal vampire followers she allowed to share her nest) slept during the day, her inner circle.
Lorelei occasionally laid to rest with a young girl, always around twenty, usually blonde, who was locked inside with her screaming from fear, just in case Lorelei slept poorly and felt like a snack in the middle of the day.
The screams never lasted long after the lid was sealed shut and their lifeless body's were always drained down to the final drop when Lorelei rose from her coffin at sunset.

Lorelei loved every aspect of her vampire life, much more than she ever did in her human life.
She had been the chambermaid in a Duke's castle in northern England who resented her place in life as servant when she felt she deserved to be the one served on.
Lorelei had been the most beautiful girl in the county, many said in all of England and the Duke, a cruel, sinful man had lusted after her since she came to his employee.
One fateful night of her ninteenth year the Duke had called her to his bed chamber.
When she had arrived there, he had torn her clothes from her naked body, thrown her defensless onto the bed and had his way with her, ravishing her again and again as she wept and fought in vain as he was much stronger than she was.
Once the Duke had satisfied his lust, he had seen fit to plunge a dagger he had produced from under the bed, deep into her belly just below her cute bellybutton as he wished to remain the only man who got to enjoy all that a true beauty such as herself had to offer any man.

The dagger had felt like a searing flame of hell as it sank into her gut and she had cried for help with tears streamed down her cheeks, screaming in agony as her precious blood oozed from her ruined belly.
Lorelei remembered how warm it had felt, flowing down her bare thighs.
The pain had sent shivers down to her toes that curled as she fought to hold onto her life.
For the first time in her life she had learned the taste of blood as it flooded up to her mouth and forced itself though her lips.
She also remembered how her hand had found the dukes balls as he bent over her and watched her suffer with drool in the corner of his mouth.
She had squeezed them with all her strength and as he fell of the bed howling, she had struggled off of the bed and staggered out of the bed chamber through the castle, her hand pressed against her gut, as the blood seeped through her fingers and dripped down on her bare toes.
Her cries for help had been ignored by all those who lived within the castle walls out of fear of the Duke.
Twice she had come upon a member of the staff and twice did they turn their back to her, denying her help or comfort as she died a slow, painful death.
Near death, she staggered out through the castle gate and walked into the dark night, hoping that help would come to her outside of its walls.
In a way... it did.

Lorelei had fallen down amongst the trees outside the gate, all strength gone from her beautiful body.
She lay there, writhing as the agony in her gut tormented her when the mysterious figure had appeared from the shadows, a young woman of perfect beauty with flowing black hair, and a comforting smile.
The woman had cradled Lorelei in her arms and kissed her forehead gently, a motherly kiss.

"Aa...re...yyo..u..an..ange..l..?"
Lorelei asked tearful.

"No my dear. I am something else entirely."
The woman said.

"I can offer you a second chance, a chance for vengeance. A new life, a better life that will last forever. You'll be a god amongst men. Do you accept this gift of mine?"
The woman whispered.

In the grips of fear and agony, Lorelei had accepted by nodding her head as tears streamed down her cheek.

"That's a good girl. What's your name child?"
The vampire asked.

"..Lo..er...lei..."
Lorelei whispered as more blood flowed from her mouth.

"I´m Alara."
The vampire said with comforting smile.

Alara's smile disappeared as her eyes glowed red as horrible, beastly fangs grew in her mouth and the last emotion Lorelei ever felt was fear as the fangs sank deep into her inviting neck.
The wound left by the Duke's dagger stole Lorelei's life only a moment after the fangs sank into her neck and she fell limp in the vampire's arms as she drained the blood from Lorelei's lifeless body.
The following morning Lorelei's naked and lifeless body was found rigged and pale lying within the trees, her eyes wide open and her face washed with terror.
On command of the Duke, her body had been rolled into a freshly dug grave and covered up with dirt.
That very next night, Lorelei had risen from her grave as a vampire, full of bloodlust and desire for vengence and like a plague she had swept through the castle, slaughtering all that dwelled within it and fed of their blood.
She had punished those who ignored her pleas for help and their own pleas of mercy were in turn ignored by her.
She ripped them from limb to limb and decorated the castle with their entrails.
The Duke she saved for last, allowing him to witness the carnage he had brought on himself and his people.
His death had not been swift or merciful.
The following night Lorelei left the castle in flames, wearing the finest dress that had belonged to the Duke's daughter, who didn't need it after Lorelei drained her dry.
From that night on, Lorelei had enjoyed reaking havoc and destruction wherever she went and in the roughly thousand years that had past since that night, she had killed over 12.000 people.
She often wondered who this Alara that had made her was.
Their paths had never crossed again and Lorelei had never found out who she was or why she had chosen her.


Lorelei pushed her memory's aside and sat up in her thrown (an actual thrown that she had stolen from Louis the XVI's palace while he and his Antoinette were being unceremoniously "dismissed" by the french people) feeling bored and restless.
She sat in her thrown, playing with a lock of her long brown hair with her legs resting up on the armrests and amused herself by letting her black heels dangle of the tips of her bare toes.
The black one piece bathing suit she wore was fighting a loosing battle in keeping her breathtaking figure in check.
Lorelei...
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...knew that her uniqe beauty could seduce and captivate nearly all men on earth and more interestingly, a high number of the women but that was of no comfort to her as she wollowed in her own dispare.
Nothing excited her anymore and she had grown tired of her followers.
Her eyes moved throughout the chamber and her eyes moved from one to the next as she quietly reflected upon each of them.

Sienne looked simply breathtaking in her full body leather catsuit that hugged her body so tightly it would have given her breathing problems if not for the fact that vampire's don't breath and mouthwatering stiletto boots as she lay ontop of a young woman on one of the benches as she slowly drained the blood from her veins with great relish as the girl squirmed and whimpered in fear and pain under her.
It was her greatest pleasure to lure men with her beauty and smashing figure back to the nest, where she first made love to them and as she neared climax, she sank her fangs into their throats and drained them as she came, letting their deaths coincide with her orgasam.
But tonight she had settled for a pretty young blonde actress that she had discovered at the bus station earlier that night and lured her to Fangs with honey words of meeting producers and being discovered.
The blond, had been horrified to learn that in fact the only way she was ever going to be discovered was inside a landfill.

Lorelei enjoyed watching Sienne as she drained the girl, most especially when the girls blood sprayed over Sienne's breasts that were hanging free after she unzipped her leather suit to her belly so she wouldn't get blood all over it.
There was a time when Sienne would have allowed Lorelei to lick the blood from her breasts afterwards but that time had now passed.
Sienne's beauty was a match for Lorelei's own with her short dark hair, her rosy lips and her clear white skin.
Unlike most vampire's, Sienne's eyes did not glow red when the thirst raged within her but bright blue.
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...was a fierce killer, unsurpassed in her skills in combat and loyal to a fault.
Before Lorelei turned her, she had been one of Hitler's top assassins, taking much joy in slitting the throats of her targets.
She never was without the diamond crusted twin lugers at her hips, not that she needed them to kill anymore but they had been a gift from the Furer himself in gratitude of her service to the Third Reich and she treasured them.
Unlike Lorelei, Sienne craved the touch and taste of men and no longer offered herself to Lorelei's lust, something that Lorelei resented and after nearly seventy years, Lorelei had begun to find her company most taxing.

Lorelei's eyes moved away from Sienne to the newest member of her nest, Jessie where she stood leaning bored against the bar, her chin resting in her hand as she scratched her name into the surface of the counter with her fingernail.
This sort of thoughtless vandilisam annoyed Lorelei.

"Must you do that?"
Lorelei snarrled at her.

"Sorry."
Jessie said insincearly as she rolled her eyes.

Jessie...
http://deborahannwoll.net/photos/displa ... fullsize=1
...was a very pretty and innocent looking young girl with gorgeous flowing red hair that she kept in a ponytail and the most special and beautiful bright blue eyes that most men could loose themselves in but as Lorelei knew well... looks are deciving.
She had rarely know a vampire as bloodthirsty as Jessie who despite her very young age possessed a savage nature that surprised even Lorelei.
Her smooth skin was as white as paper and her body was to die for, her breasts were ample and perfect, her legs as long as telephone poles and her ass could make other women gry in envy.
Jessie enjoyed the effects her body had on people and liked very much showing her firm figure of and usually dressed as light as possible, tonight she wore nothing but her favorite pair of lace underwear, dark pantyhose and back heels that added to her already substantial hight.
http://deborahannwoll.net/photos/displa ... fullsize=1

She had only been made a vampire six months prior as the result of one of Lorelei's coffin midday snacks and she had quickly become Lorelei's favorite as her cruel nature amused Lorelei but in recent weeks Lorelei had begun feel put off by Jessie's immaturity, impatiance and volatile mood swings.
New vampire's are often unstable and Jessie was proving to be the worst of them all, constantly complaining and her eratic hunting had twice threatened to expose her as a vampire, something that would prove to be a disaster for Lorelei and the others.
Lorelei sighed and wondered if this was what human parents had to go through with teenagers and she made a mental note to never turn another 18 year old again.

Helga still hadn't returned from her duty's as manager which suited Lorelei just fine, Helga was just plain too stupid and irresponsible to make for a good companion and besides her obsessions with men were irritating, she reminded Lorelei of a wild bitch in heat.
Lorelei only tolerated her as she somehow managed of doing an examplery job of managing the club.

In the corner a very beautiful and petite young girl was chained to the wall by her wrist with a silver chain.
The skin on her wrist where the chain touched her was bleeding and burned from the close contact to the silver with faint whisperes of smoke rising from it.
She didn't scream or whimper in pain, she was used to this pain by now.
Her long golden hair hid her face where she sat on the floor, curled up against the wall.
She was dressed only in a black bra and a torn white skirt that was both stained with blood and mud.
http://kristenbell-online.org/photos/di ... =367&pos=6

This young vampire intrested Lorelei for the reason that she retained more of her old human self that most vampire's do and despite her clear hatred of Lorelei, she was unable to break free of her on account of the bond she shared with Lorelei, her maker.
The thought of taking a life disgusted the girl and she was only capable of killing when Lorelei had starved her to the brink of death and locked her up with a victim.
No vampire can contain themselves in such a situation, the thirst always wins out.
The girl was more a pet to Lorelei than anything else and she enjoyed her agonized howls from the coffin she kept her locked up in for weeks at a time.
Lorelei regarded this as a science experament, she wanted to see how long it would take the girl to give into her true vampire nature.
She had been starving her for weeks now, so whoever she put her in front of next would not stand a chance.
Lorelei had only encountered this sort of resistance to the thirst and a desire to stay human once before in her thousand years.
That time the result had left her bitterly disappointed.
She took another look at Daphine where she sat curled up against the wall and grinned at the thought of what the her parents, a pair of vampire slayers, would think that their daughter was a vampire and a slave to the vampire that had killed them.

"Can I intrest you in a little supper by any chance Daphine? You're looking a bit peeky."
Lorelei asked with mock concern.

Daphine looked up at her, the glowing red eyes shining though the golden hair that covered them with her fangs out, she had no strength to hold them back anymore.
The hatred in her gaze wasn't lost on Lorelei who laughed at it.
She knew that Daphine was near death and that the thirst had nearly overwhelmed her.
Withholding blood to a vampire is much like withholding heroin to addicts except a vampire never gets it out of her system, it gets worse and worse until it takes over completely.
A little more time and she'd devour a bus load of people without care.

"...F..fu..ckk...yooouu..."
Daphine muttered so silently that Lorelei only heard it thanks to her hightened vampire senses.

"Suit yourself."
Lorelei said dryly as she turned back front in her thrown.

Daphine's head lowered again and nustled against her shoulder as she shivered.
Yes Lorelei was most certainly tired of the people around her and Sue was no exception.
Sue, a beautiful brunette with fair skin was her current human "doll" as Lorelei called the girls she kept around for sexual games and blood and was currently sitting at Lorelei's feet, chained to the thrown with a steel chain around her ankle.
A doll was usually some girl that for one reason or another appealed to Lorelei and she kept them in her nest, sometimes even for months before finally killing them.
The odd thing was that for some reason Sue had become very infatuated by Lorelei and saw this relasionship of doll and vampire as some sort of a romance.
She even displayed jealousy towards other women and vampire's Lorelei consorted with.
Her blood no longer held that sweet taste and she had grown bored with ravishing Sue's body, as delightful as it was.
Sue was the most beautiful doll that Lorelei had ever had and it was her beauty that got her the job in the first place but now it held no more surprises and to top it all of, Sue's constant efforts to keep Lorelei happy and her sad devotion were annoying Lorelei, the whole thing was beginning to feel like a dead marriage that one party refuses to give up on.
Lorelei had begun to understand why so many people murder their spouses and stuff them in the garbage can.

"Stockholm syndrome is a bitch."
Lorelei muttered under her breath.

Sue...
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... looked positivly magnificent in the black leather corset, pantyhose and black stiletto heels that Lorelei made her wear.
There was a bright smile on her beautiful young face as she looked up at her master with adoring eyes.
Twice she had kissed Lorelei's legs and twice Lorelei had pulled them away, the second time she had hit Sue so hard across the face that she was knocked out for a good half hour.
Lorelei had been disappointed when she came to, she had rather hoped that the slap had killed her.

"Why do you look so grim my love?"
Sue asked gently.

"Have I not told you a hundred times to stop calling me that, you stupid sack of meat."
Lorelei hissed at her irritated.

"Sorry. I didn't mean to upset you...my love."
Sue said apologetically.

The red glow came to Lorelei's eyes as the anger boiled in her and she was just about to rip Sue from limb to limb when the metal door swung open and a ravishing black haired beauty strutted through them like she owned the place, wearing nothing but a silk robe that she had neglegted to tie up leaving it hanging open allowing all who cared to to see her massive juicy breasts with their hard nipples and her pussy, which was just what she wanted.
Drops of blood dripped from her lips down to her breasts and she looked positivly overjoyed and fullfilled.
A smile came to Lorelei's lips at Victoria's arrival and her anger at Sue subsided.
Sue however glared at Victoria with the deepest contempt.

Starring Victoria Lust played by Julie Strain as Victoria Lust the vampire.
http://www.mediafire.com/imageview.php? ... 2h&thumb=6
http://www.mediafire.com/imageview.php? ... 3t&thumb=6

Victoria walked up to Lorelei and kissed her full on the mouth, allowing her to taste the warm blood of her latest victim from her lips.
Sue whinched as if she'd been hit and looked away as a tear fell from her eye.
Lorelei's hand reached out and grabbed Victoria's fantastic breasts and massaged them as Victoria's tongue slipped deeper into her welcoming throat.
Victoria alone still had Lorelei's full confidence as she had both proved herself highly useful and an interesting companion as well as a truly satisfying lover for Lorelei.
She was Lorelei's oldest and dearest friend and she had been the first that Lorelei turned over eight hundred years ago.
Before she was made a vampire, Victoria had been the bored, unfullfilled wife of a pastor in a small french village and she had been only too eager to be made a vampire and follow Lorelei around the worls but not before she butchered her husband and half his congregation.
Victoria's lust for blood and sex out-matched even Lorelei's own which was why everyone always called her Victoria Lust.
Lorelei's hand moved down to Victoria's pussy and she ran her fingers over it playfully.

"That's what I like most about you Lorelei, you're very hands on in your managment."
Victoria said pleased.

"Well when one is in charge, one must be so to be an effective leader."
Lorelei replied amused.

Sue's disapproving snort that followed Lorelei's comment was the last straw.
Lorelei's patiance had reached its end and a grin came to her lips as she had an idea.
She wasn't hungry herself but she was in the mood to watch.

"Vicky what do you think of my little Sue here?"
Lorelei asked Victoria playfully.

Victoria's eyes moved over to the young leather clad girl sitting at Lorelei's feet and the hazel color of her eyes disappear as the red glow washed over them and her fangs slowly lengthened.
Shivers moved down Sue's spine as the vampire she so loathed gazed at her with desire.

"A juicy little fillet, isn't she?"
Lorelei remarked grinning.

"Oh yes. Yes she is."
Victoria replied grinning as well.

"Please help yourself."
Lorelei offered.

Sue gasped in fear as her fate was being decided without her say and she instinctivly moved backwards on the floor but the chain around her ankle stopped her from getting more than a couple of feet.
She shrieked from desperation and threw herself at Lorelei's feet and wrapped her arms around her legs, hugging them as hard as she could.

"Oh no please don't do this my love. I´m sorry for displeasing you but I will make it up, I can still please you. Give me another chance."
Sue pleaded sobbing as tears streamed down her face.

Lorelei bent down in her thrown and pleaced a hand on Sue's cheek and stroked it gently.

"Shhh... It will be all right."
Lorelei lied.

Sue smiled weakly and took Lorelei's hand in hers and kissed it.

"Thank you my love, thank you."
She said greatfully through her tears.

Lorelei looked her in the eyes and smiled.

"Vicky make sure you kill her before you drain her so you won't risk her turning. I can't imagine how annoying she'd be as a vampire."
Lorelei said coldly as she looked Sue in the eyes.

Sue's face filled with terror and the sobs burst through again as she begged for her life.
Victoria grabbed her from behind and pulled her up away from Lorelei.
The chain around Sue's ankle snapped in two like a poorly vowen twine.
Jessie who had been watching the entire thing with mild enthusiasam from behind the bar, sprung to life and jumped over the counter and moved up to Lorelei's thrown so she could see it all up close.
Her eyes glowed as brightly as Victoria's and she licked her lips.
Sienne was too occupied by her dinner to pay it any notice.

"Still bored?"
Lorelei asked Jessie indifferent.

"Oh no, quite the opposide."
Jessie said excited as she watched Victoria haul Sue to the center of the room.

Lorelei smiled amused at Jessie's enthusiasam, she missed that feeling.
She hadn't been that excited by anything for century's.

"Ahh, to be young."
She thought to herself.

Sue screamed and kicked and hit out with her arms frantically as Victoria pulled her away from Lorelei.

"This bitch is all rilled up."
Victoria said laughing.

"NOOO, please don't. I don't want to die."
Sue screamed hystarically as loud as she could.

Victoria threw Sue down on the floor and she let out a painful grunt as she slammed into the hard floor.
Sue tried to crawl on all fours the floor away from Victoria as if there was any hope for her in that direction.
She looked up and saw that Victoria had moved right in front of her and she sighed with surrender.
Victoria reached down, grabbed Sue by the throat with one hand and hoisted her up to her face, squeezing the fragile neck as she did.

Sue's pleads for mercy were drowned in her chocked gurgles as Victoria's fingers clenched around her throat, closing off her airway.
Sue's eyes widened as she desperatly tried to suck in that precious air but Victoria's grip on her windpipe made it a futile effort on Sue's part.
She grabbed the strong vampire's arm in a bid to loosen the grip she had on her neck but she couldn't.
Her feet that dangled several inches above the floor kicked and thrashed with more effort and ferousity than they had ever done before.
The sweet, supple breasts that Lorelei had gotten so familiar with over the last few weeks heaved violently against the leather corset that constricted their movement.
Sue's entire body thrashed and struggled harder as both panic and fear of death set in the poor girl.
Her feet kicked shook with such force that the snaps of her stiletto heels snapped and the shoes gently slipped off of her delicate pantyhose clad toes one by one and fell to the floor beneath her as her toes wriggled in the air.

"Hhhhuuugggrrrrrrrrrggrrrrrhhhhhhh...."
Sue's chocked gurgles filled the room.

Jessie let out an excited laugh and clapped her hands, she was enjoying the show as Sue's body thrashed around and squirmed like a fly caught in spiders web.
Lorelei watched indifferent as the girl that loved her was dying before her eyes and she yawned.
Jessie's eyes widened in joy as Sue's delightful, well rounded breasts won their battle with the poorly designed zipper of the leather corset and the pair of breasts flooded out of it and her rock hard pink nipples caught the attention of the vampires.
Jessie barely contained herself as her fangs shot out and her eyes glowed.
Sienne raised her head from the dead blond's neck and glanced at the dying girl dangling from Victoria's hand and she dismounted the corpse and walked closer to get a better look.
She licked the blood from her lips and zipped up her catsuit, covering her blood stained breast.
Even Daphine couldn't help looking up, the bloodlust raging within her as she watched the helpless girl in her final throws of life.

Sue's vision had already blurred and all she could see of her killer was a pair of red glowing eyes and black hair through the haze of her clouded vision.
Her face had adopted the shade of pale blue and her eyes looked as if they might follow the breasts example and pop out at any moment.
The bloated tongue started to protrude from between her rosy lips as a series of uncontrolled jerks rode throughout her failing body.
Victoria enjoyed few things as much as she did watching the life slowly fade away from the eyes of her victims and what she was seeing in Sue's eyes as they were nearly forced out of the sockets, bloodshot and agonized was a real treat.
She could feel that Sue's life was nearly gone from her, the body only twitched slightly as death set in and her feet no longer kicked but simply jerked ever so little.

"Eeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrgghhhhhh......."
Drool ran down from Sue's protruding tongue down her cheek as the final breathless gurlges left her.

Victoria applied a little extra pressure on the windpipe, snapping it in half and Sue's body twitched once in he rhand before it never moved again.
Sue's hands fell down to her sides and swung aimlessly in the air, brushing against her hips, her fingers limp and relaxed.
Her head slumped down on her right shoulder, her eyes gazing into Victoria's face without seeing the grin on the vampire's face.
The pantyhose clad toes hovered a few inches over the floor uncurrled and wriggle free.
The full naked breasts that stood out of the corset neither rose nor fell.
Sue had been taken by death.
A dribble of drool flowed from the dead girls tongue and ran onto Victoria's fingers who instnatly released the grip on her and let the girl crash down on the floor.

"Eww."
Victoria complained as she wiped her hand on the silk robe.

The moment that Sue's lifeless body slammed down on the hard floor, Sienne and Jessie could no longer contain themselves and rushed hissing to the body and sank their sharp fangs into her inviting veins sucking the delicious blood from her veins in an almost frenzy.
Sienne had locked her fangs onto Sue's wrist and ripped it open, drinking the blood with animal desire.
Jessie had sank her fangs deep in Sue's neck and moaned with joy as she felt the warm blood flow down her throat.
Victoria however had stood aside as she let the joy of the kill linger in her mind.
She could have squeezed the life out of Sue in an instant by crushing her neck but she had wanted to let her squirm, she loved the feel of a girl as she fought pointlessly for life, too look into their eyes as they died.
It was what Victoria lived for.
She watched her fellow vampires gorge on her kill until she decided she wanted her share and within an instant she had moved doen to the body and pierced the flesh on Sue's inner thigh with her fangs without bothering to rip the pantyhose away.
She only ever drank from a woman's thigh as she felt the taste was far sweeter on account to the closeness of what Victoria considered the most beautiful thing in all nature...her pussy.

The blood from a fresh corpse is far too great an appeal for almost any vampire to resist.
Only Lorelei sat back calm as her followers feasted on Sue's lifeless corpse, her brown lifeless eyes stared up at her as if they were asking her "why?"
She felt disgusted by Sienne and Jessie's savage nature and lack of control, after all this had been Victoria's kill.
Lorelei leaned back in her thrown and sighed with disappointment.
She wished that something interesting would finally happen to pull her from the abyss of melancoly she found herself in.



At that very same moment in the VIP section of Fangs, Dawn came to a door at the end of a side hallway that Bill had led her down.
The door had the words STAY THE FUCK OUT OF HERE OR YOU GONNA BE SORRY written across it with blood.

"Subtle."
Dawn quipt.

There was no handle on the door but only a slot, big enough to fit a hand inside.
Dawn reached her hand towards the hole but Bill grabbed it and pulled it away just before her hand went inside the hole.

"Careful."
He said firmly as Dawn looked at him with a mixture of irritation and confusion.

Bill let go of her hand and slide his own hand inside the slot.
Almost instantly black smoke rose from the hole and Bill's face whinched slightly in pain.
The smell of burned flesh filled Dawn's nostrils and she gasped as he pulled his hand back out and she saw that most of flesh had melted away and the bones in his hand were visible.

"What the fuck?"
Dawn asked horrified.

"I told you that you needed a vampire to get you inside. A nice little cocktail of venoms is dripped on any hand that is placed inside the slot. The venom burns through the skin and gets in the bloodstream, killing any human in under thirty seconds. Its a painful death too. The venom has no effect on vampire's."
Bill explained as he nursed his melted hand with the other one.

"But your hand is..."
Dawn's question became redundant as Bill's hand had already healed before her eyes and looked good as new.

"After you."
Bill said politly as he pushed the now unlocked door open.

Dawn shook her head, her disgust of Lorelei growing by the second and walked through the door, her hand stroking the handle of her crossbow.
Bill stepped in after her and the door slammed shut behind them.

"Well look at what we've got here."
A woman's voice greated them.

"Looks like its begun."
Bill said to dawn who nodded in agreement.


Chapter 5. A blood-stained reunion.
Coming soon.


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Ah, sounds like a younger version of me & Vicky are having a great time here ... being immortal is fun! LOL! :D
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You know what they say, bad girls have all the fun and you and Vicky sure are bad. LOL.


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And they're having quite a bit of fun as well. Probably as much as we are, reading it. :salute:


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Chapter 5. Painful memories.


Bill had hated being a vampire from the day he was turned against his will, the very idea of it was repulsive to him and his conscience was plagued by memories of all the innocents he had fed on through the years when his thirst had got the better of him and he sorely missed the sun but not as much as he missed his wife and daughter.
They had been everything to him and the day they died, he had all but died too.
Now he was cursed to live a life of neverending darkness, the memories of them all he had left and the only thing that stopped him from stepping into the sunlight and burn, was the little spark of hope that he might one day get his revenge on the monster that took his family away from him and took away his humanity...Lorelei.

The blood-drenched memories of that night were still fresh in his mind, even though it had been almost a hundred years.
Bill had lived a good life in New Orleans with his wife Lucia and their beloved daughter Brigette.
Bill knew that he was a very lucky man.
His doctor's practice was thirving and he had recently returned from the Great war in Europe a decorated war hero.
Lucia was probably one of the most beautiful women in the state and all men that saw her were taken under her exotic spell, they went nuts for her smooth skin, the long raven black hair, her perfect figure and her full, supple lips.
But what really drove them wild was her sensual turkish accent, it made them week in the knees.
Bill had met her as he traveled through Turky many years before, to bring medicine to villages stricken by poverty.
He had fallen in love with her almost instantly when he had seen her washing clothes in a stream in the hot afternoon sun and he had brought her back home to America with him and married her.
Lucia had quickly become a surrogate mother to Bill's infant daughter who's mother had died during birth and she loved her like her own.

As beautiful as Lucia was, she was no match for Brigette, who had just turned twenty.
She was the most beautiful young woman anyone had ever laid eyes on in that part of the country.
It was not only her extraordinary natural beauty or her long, silky black hair that won the mens hearts.
It was her beautiful, intoxacating smile, the allure of her bewitching, sparkling eyes and her uncommon kindness that truly set her appart from other beautiful girls although her superior beauty did that already.
Brigette was the object of affection for every young man in the county and she had already received seven marriage proposals but she turned them all down, she wanted more out of life than to be someone's wife and she was appaled by the idea of marrying someone she didn't truly love.
She wanted adventure, travel and meaning in her life.
Most fathers would have been unhappy with such a headstrong, perculiar daughter but Bill loved her even more for it, he wanted her to live the life she chose and nothing else.

On that fateful night Bill came home much later than usually as he had been required examine a young woman's body that was found in a back alley, her throat had puncture wounds on them and the body was seemingly drained of blood.
This had greatly concerned Bill and even now as he walke dup to his front door, he was still thinking about what could have happened to the poor girl.
Bill's house was located on the outskirts of the city near the swamp, free of all bothersome interaction with neighbours.
It was a beautiful old house on a property that once had been a fruitful plantation and it had been passed down in his family for generations.
The moment he walked in through the door he was greated by the two women that filled his life with purpose.
Lucia looked as beautiful as ever in a whitre nighty that she had put on for Bill's benefits, she knew what effect this wardrobe had on him.
http://team-jolie.com/gallery/displayim ... fullsize=1 (Special guest star Angelina Jolie as Lucia)

Brigette like her stepmother wore a white, sleeveless night gown that reached down to her knees.
Her long, straight silky hair cascaded down her back and there was a rosy glow in her cheeks.
A warm sensation came over Bill as he was filled with pride over his daughters beauty and he wondered if a smile more beautiful than hers existed in the world..he doubted it.
http://www.mediafire.com/imageview.php? ... lz&thumb=6 (A very special guest appearance by Britney girl)
She flung her arms around his neck and kissed his cheek.

"Oh father at last you're home. We were so worried. Something awful has happened."
Brigette said with a sigh of relief.

His daughters words worried Bill and his gaze met his wifes who clearly shared the concern.

"What do you mean? What's happened?"
Bill asked.

"Oh darling, its terrible."
Lucia said alarmed and Bill for the first time noticed the revolver in her hand.

They led Bill to the dining room where Bill could see a woman of strikining beauty he'd never seen before sitting at the dinner table.
She was shivering but not from cold, Bill deduced she was shaking from fear or some sort of trauma by the look on her face and the state of her.
Her white nightgown that was much the same as Brigette's was ripped in places and stained in blood, and her hand swere bloody but as far as Bill could tell, it was not her blood.
Her eyes were red and puffy from the tears that ran down her face.
The light brown shoulder length hair was dishevled and there were traces of blood in that as well.
She seemed to have lost her shoes and her feet dirty and cut, it looked as if though she had run through the woods barefoot.
The mud on the hem of her dress supported this theory.
The woman was muttering something under her breath which Bill couldn't make out.
Even in this state, Bill was amazed by her elegant beauty and he could only imagine just how devine she looked when cleaned up.
http://www.celebrity-pictures.ca/Celebr ... ike-21.JPG (Special guest star Rosamund Pike as Rosalyn)

"Who is she and what's happened to her?"
Bill asked his wife concerned.

"I don't know. She showed up at our door a while ago, shaking and muttering nonsense. She looked like she'd just faced the devil. She said that she was being followed but I saw no sign of anyone out there. She mumbled something about monsters and demons, I think she may be disturbed. What shall we do?"
Lucia was doing her best to hide how alarmed she was from Brigette.

"I'll talk with her."
Bill said taking charge.

"Are you sure that's wise? Shouldn't we just send a message to the police. She may be dangerous."
Lucia asked worried.

"I doubt that but give me the gun all the same."
Bill insisted.

Lucia handed him the revolver without protest, she trusted her husbands judgment perfectly and he tucked it into his waistband.

"Father wait, don't."
Brigette begged her father as she grabbed his wrist.

"There, there Brigette. Its all right, just stay with your mother."
Bill said softly as his hand touched her cheek.

Bill stepped into the dinning room and approched the woman with caution.
She barely seem to notice him as he sat down opposide her.
She shot him a quick glance and then she turned her attention back on her blood-stained hands that rested on the table in front of her.
Bill first attemnt to get through to her was ignored but when he pulled the revolver out and set it down on the table between then she looked up at him, her eyes filled with fear.

"My name is Bill Compton and this is my home. Can you tell me who you are and what's happened to you?"
Bill asked firmly.

The woman shivered at the tone in his voice and retreated back in her seat, her eyes avoiding his.
Seeing that the firm approach was the wrong one, Bill reached out and touched her hand gently.
At first she was about to pull her hand away from Bill's but she didn't, his touch seemed to calm her and she looked back at him.

"What's your name?"
Bill asked calmly.

"Ro..s...Roslyn."
She said nervously.

Her accent was english and Bill wondered if she was part of the english Duke's household that had moved in to the mansion a mile up the road from his house the month before.
Bill had yet to meet anyone of the family.

"Are you with Duke Wellington's household?"
Bill asked.

"I...I'm his wife."
Roslyn replied.

"Where are the rest of the household? What's happened to you?"
Bill continued his questioning.

A horror-stricken expression crawled over Roslyn's face and Bill saw the tears pooling in her eyes.

"Dead. Their all dead."
Roslyn replied.

"What do you mean? How did they die?"
Bill asked Roslyn firmly.

"Butchered, ripped to pieces by those unholy monsters. I couldn't help, I couldn't save them, I couldn't, I was afraid, so afraid and I ran, I ran as fast as I could through the woods but I could feel their eyes on me the whole time in the darkness, I could almost... oh the horror of it all. My poor husband."
Roslyn was rambling inchoherantly as tears flooded down her face.

Bill turned his head to his wife and daughter who stood in the doorway, expressions of utter fear on their faces.
Brigette was clutching her mothers arm and nearly shaking.
Bill wasn't sure if she was insane but he prayed she was.

"My handmaiden, I saw the beast tear her throat out with her bare hands. And all the blood."
Roslyn's ravings continued.

"What kinds of monsters where they? Men? Maybe they were wild animals, crockodiles?"
Bill was grasping at straws, hoping to find a logical explanation to this horror.

Roslyn looked up at him and into his eyes.

"Demon's Mr Compton, demons. These were no humans. They came to our door, saying they needed a shelter for the night and my husband let them in. There were two of them, women, very beautiful and the younger seemed so sweet but then they changed. They ripped them all apart and drank their blood, oh god. Those red glowing eyes, they were horrible. I tell you they were devils. I thought they'd kill me too but I ran...I ran, leaving my family to die... The laughter, that damned cursed laughter. They laughed as they ripped my family apart, the demon's"
Roslyn burst into tears at these horror filled memories and collapsed forward on the table sobbing.

Bill picked up the revolver from the table and cocked it, his hand and entire body shaking from the horror of this story.
He was a strong judge of character and I could always spot lies and these were no lies.
His mind turned back to the girls body he had examined earlier and suddenly it made sense.
Lucia was noticably frightened but did her best to conseal it and Brigette was shaking like a leaf in the wind.

"I need you to to take the carriage and go into town and alert captain Mitchell, have him send all his forces to the Duke's mansion and then stay there where you're safe."
Bill said firmly.

"What about you Bill?"
Lucia asked concerned.

"I'll stay here with Roslyn until the captain's men arrive."
Bill said.

"But father you..."
Brigette began in protest.

"Brigette, do as I say. Both of you go now."
Bill ordered firmly.

Lucia knew her husband well enough to know when to argue against him and when to follow his wishes.
She knew that his only concern was they're well being.

"Come Brigette, do as your father asks."
Lucia said firmly, taking charge.

Suddenly the air filled with a wicked woman's laughter that sent shivers down Bill's spine.
Brigette let out a frightened gulp and Lucia's eyes widened with concern.
Roslyn's tensed in her seat and sat frozen, an expression of utter terror plasted on her fair face, her hands trembling on the table.
The laughter came from outside the house and Bill rushed to the window and peeked out carefully through the curtains, the revolver raised and cocked in his hand.
There was no sign of anyone out there in the darkness as his eyes scanned the area on his property that seperated the house from the trees.
He was beginning to think that they had all imagined the laughter when it sounded again, louder than before.
There was something inhuman about the laughter, it was almost like a wild animal's hiss.
Then he saw her, the darkened sillouette shap of a woman standing in the edge of the treeline and even though he couldn't make out her face, he could swear that he saw a red glint in her eyes and suddenly Roslyn's tale wasn't so hard to believe anymore.

"Bill what do you see?"
Lucia asked nervously as she moved closer to the window.

"Stay back."
Bill shouted at her.

He quickly looked back at the spot he had seen the sillouette but she was gone.
Bill had no idea how she could have disappeared so fast, his eyes had only been off her for a second and now there was no trace of her.
He suddenly noticed a man walking towards the house and once the man walked into view of the moonlight Bill recognized him as Bo Johnson, the caretaker of Bill's estate.
Bill quickly moved to open the window and shout a warning to Bo, he saw the silouette swon past Bo and before he knew it, Bo's head toppled off of his body and a fountain of blood sprayed out of the stump.
Bo's headless body lingered a moment on its feet before it collapsed in a heap.
The woman's laughter echoed through the darkness.
Bill backed away from the window horrified and turned to his wife and daughter, clueless as what to do, his heart filled with fear for their safety.
His hand gripped the revolver's handle harder and he could feel his palms sweat.
For the first time in his life, Bill was genuinly afraid.
He looked at Roslyn who sat near paralysed from fear in her seat until she felt his eyes on her and slowly raised her head to meet gaze.

"Its them isn't it?"
Bill asked.

"Yes and they will kill us all."
Roslyn said hopeless.

"They're here for you. You led this curse to our door you stupid woman and now we'll all suffer."
Lucia spat at Roslyn with anger.

She moved to attack Roslyn but Bill jumped in front of her and pushed her back.

"Stop this Lucia. Its no use. We need to rely on each other if we're to survive."
Bill said firmly.

Lucia seemed to take her husbands words to heart and she backed down.
Bill hurried to the fireplace and picked up the rifle that hung above it and took shells out of the ammunition box on the mentle piece.
There were only six shells in the box and he loaded them all in the rifle.

"That won't make any difference. You can't kill demon's. They'll slaughter us all and we can't stop them."
Roslyn shouted out hysterical.

"Shut your mouth woman."
Bill spat back at her, angry over how her rantings were frightning his daughter.

"Our only hope is to deal with them. Give them the girl. Her blood will apeace them."
The desperation in her voice was evident.

It was now clear to Bill that Roslyn's mind was lost and that she was delirious.
Lucia made a another movement to attack Roslyn for her words but Roslyn had spotted the knife on the table next to her, picked it up it and jumped up from her seat and grabbed the unsuspecting Brigette from behind and held the knife to her throat.
Brigette gasped in fear and grabbed Rosalyn's arm but she couldn't pull the knife from her neck.
Bill had quickly raised the revolver and amied it at Roslyn but he didn't have a clear shot.

"Release her."
Bill demanded as he cocked the revolver.

"You must see that we have to give her to them if we want to live."
Roslyn shouted frantic.

"Let her go you demented bitch."
Lucia screamed.

"Release her now. I won't say it again."
Bill said firmly, his finger poised on the trigger.

It had been a while since Bill had held a gun on another human being but it was clear he hadn't forgotten how.
The fear in Brigette's face made his need to protect her even stronger.
His eyes spotted the red teardrop running down Brigette's neck from under the knife's blade.
His decision was made for him and he found a target.
Roslyn's puplis dialated as she understood what he was about to do.

"Wai...."
She never finished her sentence.

Bill pulled the trigger.
His bullet struck Roslyn in the left shoulder and pulled her backwards causing her to let go of Brigette, who fell facedown on the floor.
Bill turned his aim on Roslyn's now exposed chest and pulled the trigger without hesitation.

"Aaarrggghhh..."
Roslyn screamed out painfully as the bullet ripped into her left breast.

Blood squirted from Roslyn's breast as she was thrown backwards into the wall so hard that the force of her slamming into it knocked the picture frames off of the wall.
Her face showed her own surprise over being shot and her eyes were wide with shock.
She felt the burning pain in her breast and looked down to see the fatal wound.
Bill's bullet had left a small hole in her white dress a few inches above the nipple and a stream of blood trickled out of it and down the breast.
A stain grew around the hole, turning the once white fabric bright red.
Roslyn gasped with sadness as the realisation that she was dying came apparent to her and the knife slipped from her hand and clattered on the wooden floor.
Her legs buckled underneath her and she grabbed onto the wall to stop herself from collapsing as she looked up at Bill, tears running down her face.
Blood appeared on her lips and flowed down the side of her mouth, staining her chin.
Bill kept the smoking revolver trained on her, ready to shoot again if it was called for.
She so wanted to curse Bill, as far as she was concerned she had been trying to save them, but she lacked the strength to do it.
Her legs gave in and she slide down the wall, her bloody fingers smearing the wall as she desperatly tried to hold herself up.
She came down on her behind and slumped up against the silverwear drawers.

Bill lowered the revolver and Lucia rushed to Brigette who lay still on the floor at Roslyn's feet and turned her over.
Her eyes were closed and some blood trickled from the cut in her neck made by Roslyn's knife.
Lucia cradled her stepdaughter in her arms.
Bill rushed to them and quickly saw that the wound was superficial and that Brigette was alive.

"Brigette darling, are you all right?"
He asked worried.

Soon Brigette's eyes flickered and slowly opened and she reached out and hugged her father, crying and shaking with fear.
Bill sighed with relief and wrapped his arms around both her and Lucia.

"I...is...it..ov...er.?"
Brigette stammered.

"No."
Bill replied.

He left Brigette in her stepmothers arms and moved over to Roslyn who was still alive but only just.
Her breath was extreamly shallow and more blood gushed from between her lips with each breath drawn.
Blood wa salso pumping from her breast and the scarlet stain had grown three times bigger, covering the left side of her chest.
It was clear to Bill that his bullet was loadged in her lung.
Bill bent down beside her and brushed the bloody lock of hair that covered Roslyn's face away.
She weakly looked up at him and all he could see in her eyes was sadness.

"Y...ou'v..e...spp..ared...mme..t...t.th..e..ho..rro...r...of..you..re....f..ate...th..ey'll...dev...our...you...all..."
Roslyn muttered bitterly..

"What are they?"
Bill asked firmly.

"...I...tol...d..yyo..u...d..de..mo..n..s.....aahhhhhh........."
Roslyn sighed her last breath.

Her body fell limp and her head slumped back against the drawers.
The blood-stained lips were parted and the eyes stared emptily at the floor.
Roslyn was dead.

Just then howls that could only belong to monstere's sounded from outside followed by demonic laughter.
Bill knew that whatever these beasts outside were, they could smell the death inside and were just toying with them, biding their time.
Him and his family were trapped like rats in a mace.
He knew that he had to do something to save his family.
He turned to face them as Lucia was just helping Brigette up on her feet.

"Brigette, there are more shells in a box in the upstairs storage room. Go fetch them quickly."
Bill ordered.

Brigette nodded and was about to hurry out of the room when Lucia protested.

"No Brigette, stay here with your father, I'll go."
She said firmly.

"Here, you take this."
Bill said as he handed Lucia the revolver.

He saw the fear in his wife's eyes and kissed her as passionatly as he had kissed her for the very first time on the docks of Istanbul all those years ago.
He loved her every bit as much as he did that day.
She smiled reassuringly to her husband and then she rushed out of the dining room.
Bill kissed his daughters forehead, grabbed the rifle and rushed to the window to see if there was any sign of the beasts but he saw nothing, nothing at all.
The property was as quiet and as dark as a tomb.


Lucia, with an oil lamp in her hand rushed up the steps to the second floor of the house and then down the hallway towards the storage room but the sight of the window at the end of the hall was wide open, the curtains blowing gently in the evening breeze she froze.
She was certain that she had closed that window earlier and the sight of the bloody hand print on the glass filled her with dread.
For a moment she considered running back the way she came but she knew that Bill needed those shells if he was to defend them so she didn't.
The hallway was entierly darkened aside from the dim light the lamp in her hand provided.
She cocked the revolver in her hand and quickly looked all around herself, pointing the light in every direction she could but she could find no sign of anyone or anything and she convinced herself that she was alone in the hallway.
Very carefully she eached herself closer to the door of the storage room which was next to the open window.
The door was slightly ajar and she hesitantly pushed it open and pointed the lamp inside, illuminating the room enough to see that there was no one in there.
She sighed a breath of relief and hurried inside.

The storage room was windowless and so dark that Lucia's lamp made little difference, she could barely see what was right in front of her.
She found the box of shells with difficulty on a shelf in the far end of the room and was about to grab it when the door to the storage room suddenly slammed shut.
Lucia screamed out in panic and turned around, the revolver aimed towards the door but she saw no one there but for a split second she thought she saw two red glowing eyes in the darkness near the door but when she shone the light at the spot she had seen them, nothing was there.
A chill came over Lucia and a shiver moved down her spine.

"Hello."
Lucia called out nervously.

"Hi there."
A cold woman's voice replied from within the darkness.

Lucia gasped in fear and the revolver shook in her hand as she turned in all directions to locate the source of the voice but again she saw nothing.

"What do you want?"
Lucia asked frightened.

"Your blood."
The voice in the darkness said.

Lucia's eyes widened and her finger gripped the revolver's trigger and she held the lamp up high to get better view.

"Show yourself demon. Where are you?"
Lucia demanded trying desperatly to keep the fear from her voice

"Here."
The voice whispered right into her ear.

Lucia screamed as she stared into the red glowing eyes that were less than one feet from her and she tried to raise the revolver but before she could, the vampire had knocked her over so hard that she was thrown into the wall behind her with such force that she left a crack in it.
The revolver was thrown from her hand and the lamp crashed into a nearby shelf and smashed open, setting it ablaze.
Dazed and with her body throbbing in pain, Lucia managed to lift her head to see her attacker as the flames illuminated her and she gasped in horror at the sight of her.
It was a very beautiful woman with long black hair and she was only wearing a silk robe that she left hanging open, allowing her sensual naked body to be on full display.
Her large firm breasts were soaked in blood that clearly didn't belong to her and so was her mouth and chin and drops of it ran down her neck but what was most frightning of all were the red glowing eyes and the enormous, bloodsoaked fangs that protruded from her mouth.
There was a devious grin on the vampire's lips.
This was the mosy beastly sight Lucia had ever witnessed.

"I´m Victoria. My friends call me Victoria Lust but you don't have to...unless you want to."
Victoria announced herself with a slight ladylike bow and a suptle nod of the head.

Lucia tried to move but the vampire had already moved up to her with an inhuman speed, grabbed her by the throat, hoisted her up to her feet and thrown her up against the wall again so they were face to face.
Lucia felt the red eyes gaze into her hazel browns and she saw that there was nothing human in them.
Victoria ran her face down Lucia's face, taking in her scent and she exhaled with satisfaction and licked her lips.

"Such a pretty thing aren't you. I like that."
Victoria hissed pleased.

Lucia shivered with fear as Victoria ran her hand down her cheek and stroked her full lips sensually.
The red glowing eyes moved from Lucia's face to the firm breasts the white night gown hid.
Her hands moved down with the eyes.

"Lets just get that out of the way, shall we."
Victoria said playfully as she ferosiously ripped the night gown open, exposing Lucia's delicious breasts.

Lucia gasped as Victoria's hands craddled her firm naked breasts and a tear ran down her cheek as Victoria's thumbs played with Lucia's erect pink nipples.
She wanted to fight back but she was too frightened to try.
Victoria could see and smell the fear that gripped Lucia and she laughed as she slide her hand down Lucia's bare abdomen, past her bellybutton and towards her womanhood.
Lucia whinched and closed her eyes as Victoria grabbed her pussy and squeezed it as she moaned pleasurably.

"That's the spot."
Victoria yelled out satisfied and her fangs extended even further as the eyes turned blood red.

She threw Lucia down on the floor so hard that her spine nearly snapped and her head bounced up off the floor.
Victoria enjoyed watching Lucia writh in pain on the floor, the torn night gown barely clinging to her body nor shielding it and the thirst awoke.
Lucia tried to roll over on her side but the throbbing pain in her back, arm and head made it a nearly impossible task.
Then without warning Victoria had lunged herself at her and sank her fangs deep into the carotid artery of Lucia's exposed inner right thigh.

"Aaaaarrrrggghhhhhhhhh......"
Lucia gasped as she felt her own warm blood gushing down her bare thigh.

Lucia's eyes opened wide from the excrusiating pain and shock that flowed through her shivering body and she screamed out in horror.
Her legs kicked wildly on the floor and her bare toes currled as the pain burned through her, she was experiancing a pain unlike any she ever thought imaginable, it felt as if fire was being pumped into her from the vampire's fangs.
The ample breasts heaved frantically up and down as she began breathing eratically, desperatly and her arms flooped aimlessly on the floor alongside her body.
Her fingernails clawed into the wooden floor as the pain got to be overwhelming.
Her whole body thrashed on the floor, much to Victoria's pleasure as she enjoyed to feel Lucia's firm, sensual body moving against hers.
She particularily appreciated the way Lucia's exposed womanhood heaved and moved in rythym to the movement of her hips and legs and she slide her hand over it, touching it, rubbing it as she slowly drained Lucia of her precious elixer of life...her blood.
To Victoria, blood never tasted so excuisedly as when it came from the thigh of a beautiful woman, she wasn't sure why but she imagined it had something to do with the thighs close proximity to the pussy, Victoria's favorite thing in all of nature and Lucia's blood was no exception.
It's taste was sweet with a hint of some bitterness.
Too much iron in her blood, Victoria thought but it didn't spoil her meal, she was finding Lucia to be a most enjoyable desert after the feast at the mansion she and her maker had enjoyed earlier that night.

As she was drifting out of conciousness, Lucia could heard moans of pleasure amidst the sucking noises that Victoria's lips made against her inner thigh and she felt a strong sense of hatred and discust, to be at the mercy of a beast such as this, dying in such a degrading manner, trapped, helpless and with her last ounzes of strength, she reached out for the revolver that she had seen lying near her from the corner of her eye.
Victoria was far too engrossed in her meal to notice Lucia's hand grab hold of the revolver and weakly lift it and point it at her.
Lucia barely managed to cock the revolver's hammer back and the sound of it alerted Victoria who pulled her fangs from Lucia's blood-stained thigh and looked the dying woman in the eyes.
There was sheer determination in Lucia's face as she lay there on the floor soaked in blood, her nightgown in tatters barely clinging to her, with a vampire between her legs.
She couldn't help but feel amused at this pitiful sight, Lucia could barel hold the revolver up and her hand trembled from the weight of the gun.
Victoria licked Lucia's blood from her lips with relish and laughed outloud.
Lucia pulled the trigger again and again until the revolver was empty.

Victoria let out howls that could have either expressed great pain or great pleasure as all four of Lucia's bullets pumped into her full, large naked breasts with blood squirting out of them and spraying over Lucia's bare chest and face.
Victoria was thrown backwards and she slammed into the wooden floor hard.
She jercked once and then she fell still, blood oozing from her shot up breasts.
Lucia's gunhand fell down on the floor and the smoking revolver slipped from it.
She let her head slump down on the floor as all her strength had left her and blood was gushing from the two matching bitemarks on her thigh that Victoria's fangs had left and she knew she had little time left.
She thought of Bill and Brigette and she consoled herself that she had at least made sure they'd be safer.
Then suddenly she heard Victoria's laugh and she gasped in shock as the vampire rose swiftly, almost flew, to her feet with a wicked grin on her blood-stained face.
Lucia watched in horror as the bulletholes in Victoria's breasts healed themself shut before her eyes, leaving no mark other than the blood that had oozed out of them.

"Did you really thing that your pitiful lead bullets could harm me?"
Victoria asked sounding offended.

Within a fraction of a second, Victoria had moved ontop of Lucia and slashed her clawlike fingernails(the same she had decapitated the caretaker with) across Lucia's exposed neck and the last thing Lucia ever saw was what little blood she had left in her vains, spray in Victoria's face.
Lucia's hand grabbed her bleeding throat as she gasped for breath and felt her warm blood gush from her severed neck and staining her fingers.
Her throat filled with blood and it flowed out of her mouth in blood bubbles as she gurgled her last breaths.
Her body twitched on the floor and her feet flopped as her body shut down.

"Eerrrrggghhhhh....."
Lucia's last painful gurlged breath left her.

Lucia's entire body relaxed under the vampire and her breasts stopped heaving.
Her eyes stared wide open and horror struck up at her killer.
She was dead.
Victoria tilted her head to the side as she admirered the bloody, half-naked lifeless corpse of her latest pray and she moaned with joy.
For her the life of a vampire was delicious giant ice cream sunday and moments like these were the cherry on top.


Chapter 6. Brigette.
Coming soon.


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A pretty good 'cherry on top' there, Victoria! Wicked giggle! :twisted: :666: :angels:

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Happy to hear you liked it Jessie. Thanks.


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Chapter 7. Brigette.


This chapter is dedicated with great affection and friendship to my dear friend Britney :)


Bill tightened his grip on the rifle as he stood by the window, ready to blast anything that appeared out of the night but nothing did.
The "demon's" that Roslyn had raved about seemed to be either biding their time or gone but Bill wouldn't bring himself to set his hopes on that possibility.
He looked over his shoulder at his beautiful daughter where she stood by the dining table, looking at him as if she expected the beast to suddenly pull his through the window at any second.
In her hand she clutched the same knife Roslyn had held to her neck earlier.
She was calmer but it was clear to Bill that she was still frightened and upset from what had happened.
Brigette...
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... felt his fatherly concern in the gaze and wanting to ease his mind she smiled at him.

Bill lowered the rifle and walked over to her, placing his hand on her soft cheek.

"We'll be fine darling."
Bill said, knowing he was lying.

"I know."
Brigette said, not letting on that she saw through the lie.

Bill's eyes found the small cut on her neck and the droplet of blood running down from it and he sighed, he hated that he had allowed it to happen.
He instinctivly glanced over to the corner where Roslyn's lifeless body lay slumped against the drawers, her eyes staring blankly up at them and he felt sorrow over killing her.
Brigette followed her father's gaze and looked at the body of the woman that had almost killed her.
He knew it had been unavoidable and if he hadn't Brigette would be dead instead but he did regret that it had come to that.
He had never killed a woman before and it wasn't the same as killing a man and he hated that Brigette had seen him do it.
Brigette could tell what he was thinking by the look on his face.

"You did nothing wrong father, you had to do it to save me."
Brigette said reassuringly as she took his hand and squeezed it.

Bill smiled weakly and wondered what he had done to deserve such a treasure like her.
Bill's thoughts on his daughter were interrupted by the agonized scream of his wife that sounded from the second floor that was followed up by several gunshots moments later.
A horrible fear came over Bill as he realized his beloved wife was in danger and he ran towards the stairs.

"Stay here."
He ordered Brigette who stood behind, shaking like thin tree in a storm.

Bill had barely reached the bottom step when something suddenly burst through the window he had been guarding and landed near Brigette, who screamed terrified and fell flat on the floor as she stumbled away from the creature.
Bill turned on his heel on the steps and saw that it was a young woman of remarkable beauty that had come in through the window.
He had never seen anything like her before, she seemed to be some sort of an abstract mixture of a purity and malice in her white silk linguire and long satin robe and a demon, with her red glowing eyes and monsterous fangs.
The creature was adorned with golden jewels, earings the size of acorns dangling from her ears, rings with diamonds bigger than most rocks drawn on her slender fingers and a golden necklace depicting a majestic swallow in flight drapped around her neck.
Lorelei certainly reminded Bill of a goddess but a goddess of darkness rather than of light.
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"Good evening, I thought I'd just drop in for a late supper if that's all the same to you."
Lorelei said with a playful grin on her full, blood-stained lips.

"We're not entertaining tonight."
Bill said dryly as he raised the rifle and shot her without hesitating.

"Aarrgghhh..."
Lorelei gasped as the rifle's shell ripped into her firm left breast and pulled her off her feet and sent her crashing into the hard wooden floor.

Bill lowered the rifle carefully, warry of not assuming she was dead and still keeping it trained on Lorelei's still body.
She lay with her eyes wide open and her mouth gaping.
Blood oozed from the large hole in the center of her left breast that the powerful rifle shell had blown into her and she remainded quite still, to Bill she seemed quite dead.
Before that night Bill had never so much as raised a weapon at a woman and now he had shot dead two beautiful women in the space of ten minutes.
Brigette sat up on the floor and reached for the knife she had dropped when she fell to the floor.
Splatters of Lorelei's blood had sprayed in Brigette's face when her father shot Lorelei and she wiped them away the best she could with the back of her hand, shaking like a leaf.

"Are you alright sweety?"
Bill asked her.

Brigette got to her feet turned towards his father and nodded weakly as she squeezed the handle of the knife as hard as she could.
Bill then remembered the danger his wife might be in and turned to continue up the steps to find Lucia.
Brigette turned her head back to the vampire's body on the floor.
Terror washed over her and she froze up as she saw that the body had disappeared, nothing but a pool of dark blood remained on the spot where Lorelei's body had laid moment before.

"Father, she's gone."
Brigette called out frightened.

Bill spun around at the top of the stairs and saw to his horror what his daughter was refering to.
It was at that moment that he truly believed that they were up against something that wasn't human, something evil.
Roslyn had told the truth.
Suddenly Brigette let out an ear-shattering scream as she gazed at her father and a beat of sweat ran down his forehead as he felt somone standing right in front of him.
He turned and to his great surprice, he see Lorelei standing on the top step, inches away from him, her glowing eyes alight with fury, her fangs longer and uglier than before.
Blood was still flowing from the large hole he had blown into her breast, right through the silk brassire.

"Look what you did, you fool."
Lorelei said angerly as she looked down at her bleeding breast.

Bill tried to raise the rifle at her but before he could, Lorelei hit him on the chest with her flat palm, sending him flying down the steps with a force consistant with him having been knocked over by a wild stallion running at a great speed.
Again and again, Bill felt his bones snap as he bounced down the steps, banging into the wall and banister on occation until he crashed down at the bottom of the steps wit ha loud crack as his back broke.
Bill gasped from the pain as he lay immobile on the floor, blood gushing from his forehead and left elbow where the bone protruded though the skin.
He spit up blood and tried to roll over but his broken body would have non of that.
His medical training told him that his left arm was broken along with at least three of his ribs, both legs, his back and his cheekbone was at least fractured.
The agonizing pain in his side and the difficulty he was having breathing made him guess that one of the broken ribs has pierced his lung and it was slowly filling up with blood.

"You've ruined my brassire. Do you have any idea how much it costs? Its from Paris you know."
Lorelei said irritated as she casually walked down the steps, her hand sliding along the banister.

Brigette rushed to her fallen father, her eyes full of tears, dropped to her knees and pressed her hand on the gash in his forehead.
Bill only wished for her to run, save herself but she wasn't thinking about herself.

"Oh father, I..."
She didn't finish as she saw Lorelei approching and the anger overwhelmed her.

"Hurrg..rr...run..nn..no..w.."
Bill ordered weakly as more blood gushed from his mouth.

Brigette's first impulse was to follow her fathers order and she looked over her shoulder at the front door but she knew couldn't just leave him there.
Her eyes met Lorelei's, hatred boiling inside her and a wicked smile came to Lorelei's face, this girl had heart, she liked that.
Brigitte looked at her father and smiled weakly to him as more tears flowed down her cheek and she ran her hand down his cheek as he had done to comfort her when she was young and looked into his pleading eyes and shook her head.

"I can't leave you."
She said softly.

Then she grabbed the knife she had dropped on the floor beside Bill and stood up to face the vampire.
Her entire body was shaking with fear but her eyes showed her determination to protect her father.
Lorelei let out an amused laugh as she reached the bottom step.

"You will not come near my father."
Brigette said as she held up the knife, her voice trembling with fear.

"Brave of you girl, but I´m afraid you're at a considerable disatvantage."
Loreleir said and snickered.

Lorelei's taunting fueled Brigette's anger and she lunged out at the vampire with the knife aimed at her throat but before it made contact, Lorelei all but vanished before her eyes and the knife's swung though nothing but air.

"What?"
Brigette was stunned.

"Missed me."
Lorelei whispered into her ear from the side.

Brigette gasped and and lashed out with the knife but Lorelei grabbed hold of her arm, twisting it so that she dropped the knife and swung her by the arn and hurrled her into the wall on the other side of the stairs.
The petite Brigette bounced off of the wall and crashed down on the floor and lay still.
Lorelei laughed and mimicked accepting applause from an non excitant audience with her arms before she moved towards where Brigette lay on the floor.
Bill, horrified at what was happening to his daughter used all his strength to reach out with his uninjured arm and grab Lorelei's ankle to try and hold her in place but she yanked it back without the slightest bit of effort, pulling Bill harshly over to his side and then stomach.
He let out a wail of pain as each one of his injuries trobbed from, the rollover.
On the plus side, the turn had releaved some of the pressure of his lung and diverted the flow of the blood in his lung so he could breath better.

"A fine throw mistress."
A woman's voice said cheerfully from the top of the steps.

Lorelei turned to face the person how's voice that was.

"Why thank you Victoria and by the looks of it, you haven't been sitting on your hands either."
Lorelei replied amused.

With difficulty Bill turned his head to see who this Victoria was and that's when he saw something that crushed him.
The black haired vampire standing at the top of the steps wore only a silk robe that she left open so every last detail of her mouthwatering body was for all to see.
But it wasn't seeing her that broke Bill.
It was the sight of his beautiful wife's lifeless and naked body laid out in the vampire's arms, her arms and feet dangling limp, her head hanging back off of the monster's arm, her slashed throat exposed and blood drenched.
Bill couldn't think, he couldn't breath, he felt the pain and sorrow wash over him and he screamed out with misery.

"WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO HER, YOU VILE BEAST."
He yelled out hatefully, with tears running down his face.

Victoria and Lorelei laughed in union at his dispare as Victoria walked down the steps.
She dropped Lucia's corpse down on the floor in front of Bill's face.

"Here you are."
Victoria said indifferent, as if she had dropped of a package from the store.

Lucia's face was directly in front of his, her dark eyes staring blankly at him.
Her face was frozen in pain and fear, the sensual lips he had kissed only minutes before were gaping, locked in her last scream.
Bill looked at the blood drenched, slit throat and he knew that there was nothing to be done for her.
His wife was dead.
But his daughter wasn't and he knew he had to save her, to get her away from these monsteres but there was nothing he could do.
His only hope was to keep their attention on him and hope they leave her be.
At the exact same moment, a soft moan came from Brigette where she lay in a heap on the floor and she stirred.
Lorelei spun around to face the girl as she came to and moved towards her, grabbed her by the hair and pulled her up to face her.
Brigette wailed in pain and grabbed Lorelei's hands to try and get her to release her hair.
Lorelei held the young girl up to her face and studied her tearful face carefully.

"You really are an amazingly beautiful young woman. I am half inclined to be jealous."
Lorelei said calmly.

Then she drew breath, taking in Brigette's scent and the delicious smell of the blood running from the small cut on Brigette's neck filled her nostrils.
The red in Lorelei's eyes blossomed as her thirst was awakened by the sweet scent and pulled Brigette closer and ran her tongue over the cut, tasting the blood as Brigette whinched in discust.

"Mmmm, so sweet and ripe too."
Lorelei moaned in pleasure.

Brigette responded by spitting in her face.

"Don't touch me you lothsome creature."
Brigette spat out hatefully, trying to hide her fear.

Lorelei only laughed at Brigette's spirit and wiped the spit from her face.
She looke dlong and hard into Brigette's face, thinking, deciding.
Then she held out her hand.

"Victoria darling, hand me the item that's lying on the floor please."
She said calmly.

Bill's eyes narrowed in fear as he saw the smiling Victoria pick up the knife that Brigette had dropped and place it in Lorelei's hand.

"No, wait no don't...NOOOOO..."
He screamed as Lorelei used the knife.

"Hhhhuurrrggghhhh..."
Brigette gasped in agony and shock as Lorelei plunged the knife into her belly just below the bellybutton.

"You're not worthy of the priviledge of my bite."
Lorelei hissed at her spitfully.

Lorelei thrust the knife deeper and deeper into Brigette at an upward angle hoisting her up on her tippie toes.
Brigette's eyes widened as the steel blade sliced through her insides as it moved deeper until the hilt collided with her belly and it could go no further.
She danced on her tippie toes as she struggled to keep from keeling over from the agonizing pain that rode though her every nerve.
It was as if a blade burning with the flames of hell had been thrust into her guts and the flame was now running loose inside her.
She could feel the blood trickling from her belly and flow down her thighs and her nighty sticking to her with the blood around the wound.
The white nighty had a large scarlet stain growing around the wound, wetting the fabric, white being over run by red.
Her back made contact with the wall behind her and it helped her to keep her balance and as the pain ravaged her, Brigette's bare foot was sort of instinctivly drawn up her other leg, her toe rubbing gently up and down her calf.
It had been a tick of hers as a child and she had always managed to calm herself when she did it and now she had inadvertantly reverted back to the tick at the moment she needed reassurance the most.
Feeling nasty, Lorelei twisted the blade in Brigette's belly a quarter circle, widening the wound and severing more of her insides.

"AAAaaarrrrggghhhhh..."
Brigette's painfilled scream was defining.

Blood gushed from her savagely sliced belly and flooded down her legs.
Brigette lost her strength to stand and she fell forward into Lorelei, who welcomed her in her arms and allowed her to rest her head on her shoulder.
Blood came to Brigette's mouth and as she parted her lips, it spilled out of her mouth, flowed down her chin and cheek and dripped onto Lorelei's bare shoulder, who didn't seem to mind at all.

"Stop, please, don't."
Bill pleaded tearful.

He tried to move but Victoria had him restrained by holding him in place with her foot.
Lorelei janked the knife out of poor Brigette's guts and she fell back down off her toes onto her feet and she only stopped herself from falling to the floor by holding onto Lorelei's shoulder.
She stared into Lorelei's eyes with sadness as tears flooded down her cheek and then she staggered wobbly past the vampire, towards her father.
She clapped her hands on her horrible wound and pressed as hard as she could but the blood only seeped though her slender fingers as if to taunt her futile attemnt to keep it in her dying body.
She took a step to her father before she crumbled to her knees and slumped sideways on the floor next to her stepmothers lifeless body.
Brigette currled herself into the fetal position as she writhed in pain on the floor, her hands desperatly clutching her blood gushing belly as her bare feet wiggled on the floor
The lower half of her once beautiful white cotton nighty was now stained in blood.
Lorelei looked down on the suffering girl and licked her blood off of the knife's blade like one does when licking the last of the batter on the whisk after baking a cake and moaned with satisfaction.
Brigette's bare feet rubbed together on the floor, playing footsie with one another as she twitched in suffering on the floor and her toes currled from the unimaginable pain.
Bill looked powerless at his daughters sufferings and tears flooded down his face as he tried again to move but Victoria's hold and his injuries made it an impossible feat.
His eyes met his daughters beautiful brown eyes and he saw the fear and pain she was feeling.

"Father, it... hurt...s ss...so muccc....h."
Brigette said tearful, her voice laybored and soft, almost a whisper.

Bill had never felt as helpless as now, watching his daughter dying in agony and he couldn't even put his arms around her or tell her it would be alright, the only comfort anyone could offer her was that it would soon be over, she was nearly dead.
He weakly streached out his hand and tried to reach out to her but it was too far.
Brigette reached out her left hand, stained in her blood and tried to touch her fathers.
It was so close, the tips of their finger's nearly touched but it was not to be.
Lorelei flipped Brigette over on her back roughly with her foot and thrust the knife into Brigette's belly once more, this time right though her cute bellybutton and drove it up to the hilt.

"Eeeerrrgghhhh..."
Brigette gasped softly, she had no strength left to scream.

"Stop, sst...op..."
Bill pleaded as his head collapsed to the floor as he cried.

A new river of blood ran out of the corner of Brigette's mouth and down her cheek.
Her entitre body shook on the floor and more tears fell from her eyes.
The firm, pert breasts heaved underneath the nighty, raising it up and down in rythym.
Her feet wiggled weakly on the floor as her feet rubbed against each other softly.
She gasped layboredly once and more blood gushed from her mouth.
The last thing she saw was Lorelei's grining face, standing over her and then blessidly everything was black.
Her body relaxed, her breasts stopped heaving and the hands fell away from her blood-soaked belly and fell on the floor next to her.
Her toes uncurrled and her feet fell away from each other and her head slumped to her right, her beautiful brown eyes staring sightless at her sobbing father.
The pain was gone, Brigette was dead.

Lorelei bent down beside Brigette's dead body and lifted her up off of the floor and held her in her arms like a child and once again extended her fangs.
She wasn't going to waist what was left of Brigette's sweet blood.

"GET AWAY FROM HER YOU VICIOUS MONSTER."
Bill screamed hatefully, his eyes red with tears.

Lorelei only shook her head with utter lack of care and then she sank her fangs into Brigette's bare neck.
Brigette's lifeless eyes stared blankly up at the ceiling as every last drop was drained from her body.
Seeing this, Bill collapsed back down on the floor, ruined.
Victoria moved up behind her mistress and licked the drops of blood that had falled from Brigette's mouth off of Lorelei's shoulder who moaned pleasurably.

Once Brigette's body was drained to the last drop, Lorelei let her fall back down on the floor ontop of her stepmother's naked body so Brigette lay sprawled out across her, her arms spread out and her bare feet lying pressed together, her eyes staring up at the vampire.
Lorelei turned and looked Bill and wondered what to do with him.
As she Lorelei looked down on the shattered man suddenly for some odd reason she didn't understand, she felt a great deal of affection towards him and she turned to Victoria who instantly understood what her master had decided.

"Mistress, do you think that is wise?"
Victoria asked uneasy.

Lorelei looked back down on Bill and smiled.

"I have no idea."
She replied excited.

Lorelei got down on her knees beside Bill ran her hand through his hair, he was too broken, too full of dispare to even care or react to her touch.
He didn't care anymore, nothing mattered and he had only to wait for her to kill him so he wouldn't have to know this pain anymore.

"Don't be so sad. I like you Bill and I am going to give you a gift, a grand gift."
She spoke softly, almost with kindness.

Bill looked up at her, his eyes empty and distant.

"What can you give me? You've taken everything from me. There is nothing you can give me now."
He said bitterly.

"Oh but I can. The gift of everlasting life."
Lorelei said with a genuine smile, in her mind she was doing something wonderful, for him.

"Soon you won't even care about this pitiful girl of yours."
She added.

Bill looked into her eyes as they turned back from the gentle emerald shade to glowing red and her razorsharp fangs extended.
He didn't care what she was about to do, he was already dead.
He closed his eyes and saw Brigette's face and her beautiful, heartwarming smile.
Then he felt the sharpest pain in his neck he'd ever felt as Lorelei's fangs sank into him and everything went away.

Later that night he watched as his home was devoured by the flames that Lorelei had set to it and knowing that the body's of his wife and daughter lay inside, being licked and consumed by the fire, he knew that all he loved and cared for was gone forever and so was his soul.
He stood there for hours watching his life burn until his new mistress Lorelei took his hand in hers and led him away with Victoria in tow.

"We're you're family now."
Lorelei had whispered into his ear.




Bill's shook his head, pulling his mind out of these painful memories and focused back on where he was and what was about to happen.
A drop of blood ran down from his eye, down his cheek and he quickly wiped his "tear" away before Dawn saw it.
He looked over at Dawn who stood beside him and felt a touch of hope in his cold heart.
The blood-bond shared between maker and vampire made it impossible for Bill to ever raise a hand against Lorelei, however much he desired to kill her but Dawn was bound by no such bond and her desire to see Lorelei dead matched his own.
She might just be his saviour, his avenging angel.
It also amazed him how much he liked her, not since his wife had he been as drawn to a woman, there was something unique about her.
They were standing at the bottom of a wide windowless staircase lit in the same dreary blood red neon light that led up to a large metal door with a large neon sign (the only sorce of light in the staircase) above it where the words "LORELEI'S NEST" shone brightly.

Dawn...
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...frowned at the sign, Lorelei's show off nature was getting on her nerves.
Two scandly clad women wearing leather from head to toe stood side by side at the top of the stairs, both holding samurai swords in their hands and cruel expressions on their faces.
They stood in the way of Dawn and Bill's revenge.
Dawn turned her head to Bill.

"Dibs."
She said casually.

Bill nodded and Dawn drew her twin silver daggers from her boots and walked up the steps with an amused grin on her face.
This would be fun.
Bill let out a chuckle and leaned against the wall to watch, this would be a sight.


Chapter 7. A Blood-stained reunion.
Coming soon.


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 Post subject: Re: Dawn to the Vampire's.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 7:12 pm 
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WOW!!!.....Erotic chapter :woot:

Hugs,

Victoria


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Thank you my dear Vicky, glad you liked it ;)


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Looking fwd excitedly to see what happens next! :up: :lol: :bravo: :dance:


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