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 Post subject: Gavin Monroe and the Manhattan Misadventures.
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Here is the second story in my series about private detective Gavin Monroe as he suffers to solve murder mystery's that leave a whole hell of a lot of beautiful body's in its wake.
Hope you enjoy it.



Starring
Clive Owen as Gavin Monroe, the titular alchoholic private detective with all sorts of issues.
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Keira Knightley as the Virginia Kensington, the young, beautiful heiress in desperate need of Gavin's help.
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Scarlett Johansson as Janelle Hoberman, Gavin's new rich girl assistant who's rebelling against her family by becoming a P.I.
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Liv Tyler as Constance Raine, a detective in the case and the daughter of Gavin's first partner.
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Kate Beckinsale as Regina Kensington, Virginia's lesbian older sister whose got a taste for trouble and designer drugs.
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Amanda Seyfried as Kate, the young woman eyewitness who's life is in grave danger.
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Katie Cassidy as Connie Demico, the city's richest heiress, who's got it in for Victoria.
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Blake Lively as Alicia Donovan, Virginia's arch nemesis in the upper class social world and a real bitch.
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Scarlett Johansson as Tricia Hoberman, Janelle's disapproving twin sister and Victoria's best friend.
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Amber Heard as Lizzy, Regina's girlfriend.
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Anna Torv as Rita "the gossip queen" MaQueen, the sleeziest gossip writer in town, who's very interested by the murders.
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Rachel Bilson as Carly, Kate's confused and unfortunate roommate.
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Katherine Heigl as Jenny Post, Miss Flint's personal assistant.
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with Jennifer Garner as Nicole Flint, Virginia's lawyer/business manager who may have her own agenda.
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and Rosamund Pike as Dr. Hilary Rose. L.A.'s top plastic surgeon who's somehow connectred with these murders.
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Special apperances...

Mary Elizabeth Winstead as
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Holly Valance.
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Olivia Wilde.
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Michelle Ryan.
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Deanna Russo.
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and Christina Hendricks.
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Note that I chose to only include one photo of each character in the cast list so its not cluttered but many will have more looks or outfits than shown, the one chosen most describes the style of the character.





Chapter 1. A Tight Spot.


I've been through a lot in my life, had more problems than anyone should and managed to get myself in some tight spots that on hindsight were just absurd.
But the one I found myself in at the current moment wasn't absurd, it was dangerous.
I looked the man sitting across from me in the eye... Eddie Fits, a key player in New York's human trafficking market.
He was the sort of dickweed that wore eyeliner and painted his fingernails black.
His face had more metal in it that my Colt did.
Even if I were to go to the nearest swamp and flip a rock over, I doubt I'd find filth worse than him under it.
I thought to myself how I kept getting myself into these bulls**t situations but I felt reassured that at least this time I was doing it for the right reason.
A 12 year old girl named Chloe.

She had been kidnapped by Fits people from her parents three nights ago and seeing as her father was my brother, I felt obligated to look into it so I hoped the next plane and I had spent the last couple of days tracking her down.
I had it on good authority that Eddie was planning on putting her on a ship to Russia tonight where she'd be sold for god knows what and I wasn't about to let that happen and I was more than willing to shot dead anyone in my way.
I had arrived at the club tonight to try and make him a deal but I was fairly sure he wouldn't accept it... his life for Chloe's release.

I looked around the room we were sitting in, the office Eddie's kept in the nightclub he operated out of near the docks, Deaths door.
Catchy name for a club and tonight it might be accurate.
I had been led back deep into the building but the techno music was still banging so loud in my ears I felt a headache coming on.
Eddie sat with a smug look on his face behind his desk, laughing.
To his right stood a very beautiful young woman dressed long heeled leather boots, black jeans, a tight leather jacket and gloves missing fingers.
The jacket was zipped down to her breasts, giving me full view of her ample cleavage.
Her beauty was simply staggering, the lips were full and red, the dark brown hair long, thick and cascading down her back, she looked much like an angel with a dark side but as I've learned from bitter experience, looks can be deceiving.
Her name was Starina and she was about as much of an angel as Eddie was. She was his right hand and from what I gathered his chief executioner.
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I could tell that she was itching to riddle me full of bullets with that uzi, she was poorly hiding behind her back.

I glanced over my shoulder at the big guy in a sweat suit that was guarding the door.
He had a revolver the size of a tv sticking out of his pants.
A violent snees and he'd blow his dick off.

Another beautiful girl say on the right edge of Eddie's desk and like Starina she was more beast than beauty.
The girl looked like a model in every way, she seemed designed for it, her legs were long, her brown eyes seductive and mysterious, her smile wicked and her figure slim and alluring.
The legs were crossed and the heels of her knee length leather stiletto boots clanged together.
I knew that this was Katrina, Eddie's girlfriend/property, a former russian model turned murderer, dealer, thief, kidnapper and all sorts of other sh*t.
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She was twirling locks of her long, light brown hair with a finger of her right hand as her left ran up her thighs, slowly towards the hem of her low cut, inoppropriatly short blue dress.
She looked at me and winked as she did, no doubt she was trying to distract me.

But the only thing that could possibly distract me was the sight of the beautiful young woman lying back and relaxing on the couch up against the wall on my left.
She was everything a woman should be.
The sexuality positively beamed off of her and she made me feel grateful that I was a man.
I nearly lost it as she rubbed her pantyhose clad thighs together and bit her lips.
Her ample breasts pressed up against the fabric of her gray dress that reached down to her upper thighs.
The leopard coat she wore was clinging on by her shoulders.
Her skin was smoother than I thought possible and her lips the fullest, most desirable I had ever seen.
The woman ran her fingers through her short blonde hair and I caught a glimpse in her bright blue eyes.
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I found myself re-living the sex me and her had experienced the night before, and the night before that and so on and on.
The truth was that this was Janelle Hoberman, the lovely gal that had taken over as my assistant after I "fired" Julie the year before.
My friend Max was still aching with jealousy.
Having been burned by the Julie incident, I felt reluctant to get involved with another assistant but self control was never my strongest side.
We had been sleeping together for a better part of a year now and I still had not found a reason to regret it.

I had sent her to club an hour before I arrived, knowing that Eddie never could resist inviting the best looking women guests of the club into his office for a little party, most left looking and feeling worse than they did when they got in, some never left at all.
She was my ace in the hole, my back-up if things turned ugly, which they almost always did.
I was counting on her to help me stay alive long enough to find my niece.

Suddenly there was a knock on the door and Eddie yelled enter annoyed.
In walked a truly beautiful woman around Janelle's age dressed only in white knee high socks, with a pink silk sash drapped down her front barely covering her breasts and matching silk panty's.
She was tall, slim and thin, built in perfect proportions.
Her thick, dark hair framed her strong character filled face beautifully and I could see lust in her seductive green eyes.
I remembered seeing her on the stage in the club when I came in.
She was Carly, the star of the nightclub's erotic show.
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"Yes, what the f**k do you want?"
Eddie asked annoyed.

"I...I, just wanted...to..."
The poor girl stammered out nervous, most likely she was terrified of Eddie.

"Spit it out woman."
Eddie interrupted her rudely.

She was so nervous just being close to Eddie and I was sure she had suffered something at his hands in the past.
Finally she worked up the nerve.

Its about these new shifts you're making us work and it..."
She began.

"Shut up you dumb bitch and don't bother me with this bulls**t now."
Eddie spat at her angerly.

She seemed terrified and regretful of her words and made towards the door but Eddie stopped her.

"Wait there. I'll deal wit hyou as soon as I´m done with this sucker over here."
Eddie said, refering to me.

Carly stopped and stood still, near frozen in the right side of the room.
Eddie's attention shifted back on me.

"Bitches, huh."
He said with a snort.

I reached inside my jacket and pulled out my pack of smokes.
One left, I hope that wasn't some sort of a message from fate.
I placed it between my lips and lit it with the lighter I took from Eddie's desk without asking.

"So?"
I asked.

"So what?"
Eddie asked curious.

"We got a deal?"
I said calmly.

"What sort of deal?"
Eddie had a stupid grin on his face as he leaned forward.

"The girl for your life."
I said firmly, meaning every word.

A big smile came to his ugly face and he looked up at Starina laughing as if I had made a joke.
I didn't see what was so funny but she seemed to get it and laughed as well.
Then Katrina joined in and I was starting to feel irritated.

"Seems that Mr. Monroe's gotten a little confused about where he's sitting."
Eddie declared as he faced me again, still with that f***ing grin on his face.

"He's clearly confusing his brain with his dick."
Starina said amused and I noticed that she was pulling the uzi into view.

"Looks like someone's itching for an early grave."
Katrina said with her thick russian accent.

"Last chance Eddie. Yes or no?"
I said firmly, my heart was racing but I didn't show it.

Eddie's smile faded and he knew I meant business but still he wasn't concerned.
I watched his hand slide under his desk and grip what I assumed to be either a sawed off shotgun or a grossly over sized handgun of some sort.
There was that all too familiar look of death in his eyes and I knew that within seconds one of us would be dead.
My hand was already gripping the revolver I had in my coat pocket and I was estimating how long it would take to draw my trusty Colt from the holster under my left armpit with my left hand.
I covertly signaled Janelle with a nod and she nodded back, her hand sliding carefully to the hidden holster strapped to her thigh.
Starina had a look of anticipation on her face and she bit her lower lip.
I cocked the revolver in my pocket.
I sucked in the last smoke from the cigarette, hoping it wouldn't be my last and stubbed it out on the desk.

"That's too bad Eddie."
I said calmly as I aimed the revolver at him though the coat pocket.

"Yes, too bad."
He said seriously.

I pulled the trigger of the revolver and shot Eddie Fits squarely in the chest, twice.
He screamed and was thrown back in his chair but his finger managed to squeeze the trigger of whatever was under the desk.
Instinctively I hurled myself to the floor a split second before the shotgun blast blasted out of the desk and smashed the back of the chair I had been sitting in.
The guard by the door yelled out as shells for Eddie's shot ripped into his leg and he fell over, clutching his injuries.
Katrina screamed with panic and dove to the floor.
Starina was stunned by what had happened but she was still quick enough to raise her uzi and she would have riddled my to pieces as I lay on the floor had it not been for Janelle.
I stared into the barrel of the uzi and saw the red lips smiling with satisfaction when suddenly a bullet ripped into the center of her right breast.
She screamed out painfully and her face whinched from the pain she felt in her firm, breast.
A splatter of her blood squirted into the air and drops of it sprayed in her face.
Her hands flew up in the air as she staggered backwards, her heels barely keeping her upright and her finger pulled the trigger, sending the hail of bullets she had meant for me higher and to the right, right where poor Carly stood.
Carly's eyes widened with shock as bullet after bullet ripped into her smooth skin and buired themselves into her stomach.

"Hhhhuuuurrrrgggghhhh..."
Her gasp was painfilled and horrible.

Carly staggered back and looked down in horror at the three new holes in her gut, one just to the right of her bellybutton, one right below it and one had replaced it.
She moaned and clutched the holes with both hands as three identical red streams began poaring out of them and running down to her panty's.
She looked up with such sadness and shock in her beautiful face, she couldn't understand why this had happeend to her.
Another painful moan escaped her lips before she fell to her knees and slumped forward to her right side.
She lay still clutching her wounds and her feet kicked on the floor as the bullets burned in her stomach.
Furious Janelle pumped two more bullets from her small pistol into Starina.
The first hit her under the right breast and the second sank deep into her left breast.
Starina screamed out as each bullet drilled themselves into her body and she jerked on her feet as she slammed into the wall behind her.
The uzi fell from her grip and clattered on the floor.
Blood flowed down her leather jacket from all three wounds.
Staria looked at Janelle with utter hatred for a second before her eyes fell dark and sightless.

"Eeeerrrrggghhhhh..."
Starina sighed as her heels lost their grip on the floor and she slowly slide down the wall, leaving two smears of blood on the wall.

She came down on her ass and fell limp, her hands fell by her side and her head slumped to her left side.
She sat there up against the wall, eyes wide open and lifeless, the toes of her boots pointing up at the cealing and blood trickled out of the corner of her mouth.
Confident that Starina was dead, I rolled to my right side and saw the wounded guard pulling the huge gun out of his pants.
He turned it on me.
I turned the revolver on him.
He beat me to it but he was a lousy shot and only hit the bottum drawer of the filing cabinate behind the desk.
Now it was my turn.
I shot him dead center of the chest and he yelled out and the gun fell from his grip but to make sure I shot him three more times in the chest.
He rolled to his back stone dead.
I dropped the empty revolver and reached for my Colt just as Katrina sprung to her feet, a knife she had pulled from her boot in her hand and aimed at Janelle's unsuspecting back.
She had turned her attention on Carly's whimpering in a pool of her own blood and didn't notice Katrina.

"Watch out."
I called as I struggled to get the Colt out of the holster, I hated the stupid snaps.

Janelle turned and raised her pistol but Katrina was quick enough to kick it from her hand and lunge herself at her, knocking her down on the couch.
She thrust her knife down at Janelle's face and Janelle just barely was able to stop it from sinking into her eye by grabbing Katrina's hand.
Katrina straddled Janelle on the couch and every ounce of her strength was going into plunding the blade into Janelle, who's every ounce of strength wen't into stopping the blade from doing so.
Both women stared into each others eyes.
There was a mad look of hatred in Katrina's eyes.
Then suddenly....BANG.

"Aaaarrrggghhhhh...."
Katrina gasped with shock and her eyes widened.

Her breasts pressed hard up against her dress as her back arched and she felt a sharp pain in-between her shoulderblades.
Janelle stared in to Katrina's face, it was painted with utter disbelieve.
She tried to say something but instead of words, blood ran out from between her lips and down her cheek.
She lost the grip on the knife and sighed.
Her body fell limp and she slumped dead ontop of Janelle.
Janelle sighed and rolled the dead russian off of her.
Katrina's lifeless body rolled off the couch and landed on her back.
I lowered the smoking Colt and rolled off of my stomach and stood up.

"What took you so long?"
Janelle asked pissed.

"Damn snaps. I told you to get me the black one."
I said as I pointed at the empty holster under my armpit.

"The brown goes better with your face."
Janelle said casually as she shrugged.

A painfileld moan from Carly turned our attention to her and we both rushed to her.
She still lay on her side,clutching her wounds, blood was seeping through her fingers and they were soaked.
A pool had collected on the floor beside her.
She was barely moving anymore, only shivering.
I got down on my knees by her and gently rolled her to her back.
The silk sash fell away and her bare breasts looked my in the face.
Blood was poaring from her mouth and she looked scared.
I told her she would be okay.
One look at her wounds and I knew I had lied.
A final wave of pain rushed through her body and then her body relaxed.
She gurgled her final breath and then she was still.
Her green eyes stared up at me without seeing and her lips were apart.
Her hands slide off of the wounds on her gut and thudded on the floor
The blood streamed up her abdomen towards her breasts, whose erect nipples pointed up in the air.
I felt sorry for her and closed her eyes and carefully covered the breasts up again with the sash.
I stood up and looked at Janelle seriously.

"We need to find the girl."
I said firmly.

Then I heard a gurgle behind me and I turned and saw Eddie Fits chocking on blood in his chair.
He was still alive but barely.
I walked to the edge of the desk and stared at him coldly.

"Where's the girl?"
I asked.

He spat up some blood and laughed weakly.

"G...ggoo..tt...o..hheell..Mo..nro...e..."
He stuttered.

I felt the anger boiling in me and gripped the handle of the Colt.

"You first."
I said ice cold.

Then I put a bullet through his head, splattering blood and brain chunks all over the wall behind him.
I holstered the Colt and turned to Janelle.

"Lets search them Gavin. We might find a clue or something."
She suggested.

I nodded and she walked over to Katrina's body and I to Starina's body.
Katrina lay on her back, her left leg bent under the right one and her arms lay by her side.
Her brown eyes stared up lifelessly and blood tricked down her cheek.
A pool of blood was running from under her back.
Starina's body sat up against the wall, her hands in her lap, her feet straight out and her head slumped on her shoulder.
Her dark eyes stared out at nothing and blood was dripping from her red lips.
Blood was running down her chest and abdomen from the bulletholes in her chest.

Janelle carefully felt Katrina's body up with her hands but found nothing hidden.
She slipped her hands inside her bra but found only hard nipples.
Her panty's held no secret aside from what you'd normally expect to find there.
Finally she unzipped Katrina's leather boots and pulled them off one by one, leaving the corpse barefoot.
There was nothing in the boots and she dropped them beside Katrina and moved over to guard.
She winched at the thought of touching that fat sack of dead meat.

I started by pulling Starina's boots off, one after the other and found nothing in them.
I let them drop by the barefoot body and unzipped her jacket and saw that she had nothing on under there and her bloodsoaked breasts said hello.
I covered her up again and checked the pockets of her jeans.
There I found her cell and I read the latest text message she had sent, which said... Dock 3, gray container, number 5557392022.
I couldn't be sure it was about Chloe but it was all I had going on.

"Janelle. I've got it."
I called out.

Then I rushed out of the room with Janelle following.


Chapter 2. The feel of the blade in my hand.
Right behind.





Chapter 2. The feel of the blade in my hand.


From behind a small crate, Janelle and I watched as a car pulled up next to container number 5557392022 and three woman stept out.
A man sat still behind the wheel.
One of the women shouted out an order in russian, she was definitly the one in charge.
One of the otehr two carried a machine gun.
The third one took out a key and began unlocking the container.
I knew that I had to play this one smart and quiet, at least to start.
I took a switchblade out of my pocket and told Janelle to cover me.
She grabbed my arm.

"Gavin be careful."
She said with concern.

"I will."
I said softly as I gave her a reassuring smile.

Then I pulled her to me and kissed her passionatly on the mouth.
Janelle wrapped her hands around me and kissed me back.
I broke free of her embrace and snuck off to get closer.
I jumped behind a smaller container quite close to the one they were by and I peeked out.
Now I could get a good look at them.
The woman with the machine gun stood watch as the other two talked in russian as one of them worked on unlocking the container.

The one that seemed to be in charge was a real stunner.
Her hair was firy red and the tiny, short black cocktail dress she had on barely contained her ample curves, her large breasts were straining the dress to breaking point, it was a sight to behold.
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The one carrying the machine gun was just as beautiful as the redhead in her zipped up leather jacket, leather boots and delightfully tight jeans.
Her hair was darkbrown and even in this darkness at a distance I could tell that her eyes were exceptionally beautiful, very one of a kind.
She had the kind of lips I just wanted to kiss.
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The one working on the containers lock looked ravishing in the elegant green dress that reached down to her knees.
Her heels matched the dress and so did her feline eyes.
The hair was raven black and suited her perfectly.
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(Special apperance by Deanna Russo)

I found myself wondering what the hell it was about Eddie Fits operation and stunning women.
I almost regretted that these beauty's would have to die tonight but then again, they brought it on themselves.
I signaled Janelle to get ready and I moved closer.
My foot bumped into an iron pipe on the ground and it clattered loudly.
All three russians jumped and looked carefully in my direction.
Luckily they didn't see me as I was in a dark spot.
I jumped behind the nearest container and cursed myself for being such a fool.
The redhead shouted some order and the woman with the machine gun huried to help the brunette with the container while she herself pulled a pistol from her handbag and walked towards me.
She had decided to investigate the noise herself.
I liked her, she had guts but it would be the end of her.

The only sound heard was the clicking of her high heels as she moved closer.
I flicked the switchblade open.
I had never killed anyone with a knife before and I wasn't looking forward to popping that cherry especially with such a wonderous woman, it seemed so in your face brutal and cruel but for my innocent niece I'd do anything.
The woman drew closer, the beretta in her hand by her side.
She walked carefully into the darkness, I could hear that her breathing was calm, under control.
I backed up further into the darkness as I couldn't be seen.
The woman came into view and she looked right at me but she couldn't see me.
I was maybe four steps away from her and I decided to take a chance.
I rushed forward at her, the blade pointed out at her.
She gasped in shock as I appearded suddenly out of the darkness and tried to raise her beretta but it was much too late.

I plunged the blade deep into her belly, just below the bellybutton and she gasped a second time but with pain this time.
My left hand pressed over her lips so her screams of agony weren't heard and I felt blood touch my palm.
The beretta fell from her hand and clattered on the ground.
I pulled her up against the container and let her rest up against it.
I saw the fear and pain in her eyes as she stared into mine and at that moment I hated myself but I kept telling myself she was bad and she had it coming, being mixed up in these horrible crimes.
Blood trickled down her dress and down to her thighs.
Her hands grabbed mine but she lacked the strength to do anything.
She tried to scream but my hand made it a faint whisper only I heard, I wished I hadn't.
A stream of blood ran from under my hand and down her cheek.
A red tear ran down her chin and trickled down to her breast where it continued to ran down her magnificent cleavage.
Part of me envyed that tear.
I wanted to end it so I pushed the blade in as deep as it could.
She moaned and I felt her body shaking up against mine.
For a moment her eyes gazed into mine and then the light in them went out and she fell limp up against me.
Her head fell on my shoulder and her eyes stared off of it into the darkness.

I slowly pulled the knife out of her stomach and turned her dead body in my arms so that I could take hold of her under the armpits and I dragged her further into cover.
Her heels dragged on the ground and her arms hung in the air limp as I pulled her.
I gently lowered her onto her back on the ground and I looked down on her.
She lay with her legs straight and the toes of her shoes pointing up.
Her arms lay limp by her side.
The eyes were staring up at me and it felt bad so I reached down and closed them.
There was plenty of time for self loathing and regret later, now I had a little girl to save.

I carefully peeked out at the remaining baddies and saw that the woman with the machine gun was getting anxious.
The one in the green dress was still having trouble with the lock, I heard her mutter something in russian and I got the feeling she was cursing either the lock or the key.
I saw that Janelle had snuck up on the left side of the car and she was now in firing range but I was still worried about all the things that could go wrong.
I moved quietly in the shadows nearer and nearer, the bloodstained switchblade in my hand and my Colt within reach.
I wanted to try and do this quietly and keep the shooting to a minimum.
The less bullets flying, the less chance that Janelle or Chloe would catch one, not to mention myself.
Getting shot wasn't on my agenda.
The one with the machine gun was my big concern, I knew that if I managed to take her out of play, Janelle could handle the other one and the man in the car.
Finally I caught a break and the woman with the machine gun turned to the one in the green dress and I had my chance.
It was risky, all that the man in the car had to do was to look up from what he was reading and he'd see me but I felt confident I'd make it.
I moved towards her quickly, the blade aimed for her back but seconds before I could slip it in her, the man behind the wheek looked up at the worst moment possible and spotted me.
His eyes widened with shock and then the bastard did the only thing he could think of and honked the horn frantically.
This of course made the women both turn towards me.
I felt like a deer caught in headlight and for a second, I stood frozen.
Then the woman leveled her machine at me and I caught a smirk on her lips.
I just barely managed to hurl myself behind a crate on my right as hot lead whizzed by my head.
More bullets slammed into the crate and I was pinned like a fool.

The man behind the wheel didn't bother getting out of the car but he did stick his sub machine gun out of the window and join in on blasting the crate I was cowering behind.
I drew the Colt and returned fire.
The woman was smart and jumped behind a nearby container as one of my bullets missed her head by an inch.
The woman in the green dress pulled a pistol from her handbag and was about to shoot at me when Janelle finally decided to join in.
She popped up from her hiding place and shot the woman in green right between the eyes.
Damn, she was a good shot.

The woman in green's head jerked backwards as the bullet ripped into her skull.
She let out a loud sigh and the shock of her sudden death was painted on her pretty face.
Her arms flew up in the air as her body was thrown into the container behind her.
She bounced off of it and fell limp as a ragdoll into the ground and lay still in a heap.
The other woman fired a short burst at Janelle but she dodged it by ducking down behind her crate.
A shot from me boucned off of the container near her head and she retreated further behind the container.
Janelle fired at the car and shattered the back window.

This pissed the guy off and he sent a burst of fire at her before he slammed the car into reverse and backed it right into the crate she was behind, smashing it to bits.
Janelle had been jam if she hadn't thrown herself out from behind it and landed hard on the ground.
She dropped her gun and now she was a sitting duck as the man stuck his sub machine gun of the drivers window at her and grinned.

I had one chance and I took careful aim.
The Colt roared and my bullet passed through the front windshield, his head and out the shattered back window and ended up in a container behind the car.
The man jerked back in his seat and then he fell forward and his head slammed into the wheel set of the cars honk, which sounded constant and load, drowing out any other sounds.

"You okay?"
I called out to Janelle.

"Yeah."
She called back as she got back ot her feet.

There was no sign of the last woman.
It concerned me.
I called out to Janelle to keep her head down and I carefully got out from my cover and walked to the container the woman had hid behind, the Colt raised and ready.
There was nothing there except for her smoking machine gun, lying empty and discarded on the ground amidst dozens of empty bullet casings.
Where the hell had she gone?
With all these containers around this harbour was a damn mace and darkness didn't help.
I cursed myself for letting her slip away.
Now we had to be covering our backs.

I turned to face Janelle and my heart lept to my throat.
The woman in the leather jacket was sneeking up on the unsuspecting Janelle, a knife ready in her hand.
Janelle was blocking my shot completely.

"Behind you."
I called out loudly.

Janelle quickly turned on her heel and saw the woman about to run the knife into her and she acted.
She grabbed the woman's hand as she thrusted the knife at her and steared the blade back into her.
The woman in the leather jacket gasped in pain and shock as her own knife plunged deep into her, right below the left breast.

"HHHhhhhuuurrrrrrggggghhhhh..."
Her beautiful eyes widened up as much as they could as the reality of what had happened washed over her.

She looked down in shock at her blade sticking out of her and watche din disbelieve as her blood trickled down her leather jacket.
She grabbed ahold of Janelle to hold herself upright as her balance started to give away and her stiletto heels scratched on the ground.
Blood broke through the barriers of her lips and flowed down her cheeks.
Her eyes met Janelle's and she felt an urge to strangle Janelle and she grabbed her throat with one hand but she was much too weak to do it.
Janelle grinned coldly at her and hit the hand away as she pushed the knife in deeper.
The woman sighed and her eyes lost their spark.
She fell backwards and collapsed on the ground, dead.

Janelle stood for a moment holding the bloody knife that got pulled out of the woman as she fell and looked down on her.
The beautiful eyes stared up at her blank and her bloodstained lips barely touched.
Her hands lay spread-eagled on the ground.
The left leg was bent at the knee outward and the righ was straight.
More blood oozed from the stab wound in her chest.

I came up behind Janelle and set my hand on her shoulder and asked her if she was okay.
She dropped the knife, turned to me and hugged me close to her.
I put my hand around her and kissed her on the cheek.
I was so relieved that she was still alive.

We huried to the container the russians had been trying to open and I looked around for the key.
I went over to then dead woman in green and looked down on her body.
Her green eyes stared vacantly up at me and her face was expressionless, the mouth was lokced in the O shape of her last gasp.
There was blood leaking down her face from the bullethole between her eyes.
She lay in a heap with one leg ontop of the other, her right shoe had fallen off her bare foot and lay beside her body.
The hands lay ontop of her chest and stomach.
This was the first time I could see just how beautiful she was...shame.
Then I saw what I hoped to see, the key still clutched in her left hand.
I bent down and pryed it from her grip, she really didn't want to let go of it at first.

After about a minute of of trying to get the key to work on this rusty old lock I lost my patience and just shot the lock in pieces.
Why I didn't do it right away was beyond me.
Janelle rolled her eyes over my barbarism.
I pulled the container door open and rushed.
The container was pitchblack but the light streaming in from the open door let me see her.
There she was, my beautiful little niece, cowering in the corner, her blonde hair that was just like her mothers was dirty and she was shaking with fear.

"Chloe."
I said softly.

She carefully looked up as she heard my voice say her name and I saw a smile come to her lips as she saw that she hadn't imagined my voice.
She broke into a smile and rushed to her feet and into my arms and hugged me for dear life.

"Uncle Gavin. I knew you'd come."
She said loudly as tears began streaming down her cheek.

"Of course I did. Your the only one in the family I can stand."
I said truthfully.

I carried her out of the container, careful to cover her eyes so she didn't see the body's of the russians and I walke dwith her a bit away from the scene.
In the distance the police sirens sounded and I knew that I had a lot of explaning to do but I didn't care.
I had gotten Chloe back unharmed.
As far as I was concerned, they could lock me up if they felt like it.
I sat down on a box with Chloe still in my arms and looked out on the Hudson river and watched the lights from Manhattan reflecting in it.
Janelle sat down next to me and kissed me on the cheek.
I felt better than I had done in a long time.
Little did I know that my troubles in New York were just starting, at a birthday party held in the penthouse of the city's most exclusive building across town.


Chapter 3. Murder at the social event of the season.
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Chapter 3. Murder at the social event of the season.


It was the most glamour's, expensive and exclusive event of the high society's social calendar that year.
The 25th birthday of one of New York's most adored and envied heiress's, Miss Virginia Kensington.
Most thought she had it all, beauty unmatched by most women, endless wealth and just about anything she could ever want.
But they didn't know about the crushing boredom that plagued her night and day, the constant sting of the thorn in her heart, left there by countless failed romances or the painful scandals caused by her older but not wiser sister Regina.
Virginia counted her blessings that Regina had decided not to make an appearance that night as she rather wanted to spend the evening with her newest girlfriend, an 22 year old aspiring actress/slash model by the name of Lizzy.
They were no doubt snorting up all the coke in Manhattan off of each others naked and sweaty body's, Virginia thought to herself with disapproval.
But she had long since given up on trying to get Regina cleaned out and now she did her best to avoid her and made sure to keep her in enough cash so she'd at least avoid unpleasant scenes.

There had to have been well over two hundred guests at the top floor of the Luxemburg tower on 5th avenue in Manhattan and they all were having more fun than their host who stood by herself in the corner, gulping down some exquisite champagne without savoring its delicious taste or enjoying it for anything else than its high alcohol content.
Virginia's beauty was unquestionable as she stood there in the magnificent dark green silk evening gown, a replica of one her grandmother had worn at Queen Elizabeth's first official feast as the monarch of England in Buckingham palace.
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She watched as her guests enjoyed themselves, drinking, eating caviar, laughing and debating which of them had the fattest bank account or the biggest house in the Hampton's.
Virginia knew she outmatched them all in these matters and she estimated she could buy and sell each of them three times over.
She laughed at the thought that these were her guests, she barely knew half of them and she knew most of them were only there for the booze and the bragging rights that came with attending one of her party's, she detested them all but some more than others.
Virginia looked over the room at Connie Demico, possibly her least favorite person in the whole world, well except for one other.

Connie Demico...
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...was a strikingly beautiful woman that radiated charm but she was also shallow, false, snobby and a malicious liar.
Her and Virginia had been social rivals ever since the third grade and they never missed a chance to shoot snide remarks at each other, veiled as flattery.
Connie always dressed with the goal to seduce and tonight was no exception at all, her dress was not only shorter than Virginia thought decent but its V shaped neckline was cut so low it nearly revealed the color of her panty's, if she was wearing any for that matter.
Connie looked away from the handsome linebacker of the Dallas Cowboys she was practically throwing herself at and smiled (more like grinned) at Virginia so that her from across the room and waved friendly at her but both women knew that was just for appearances.
Out of habit or a desire to look unbothered, Virginia returned the wave and smiled back but the gesture was as fake as the tits on Miss Johnson's, the mayor's mistress.

Virginia's thoughts were interrupted as a very beautiful woman in her mid thirty's walked into the center of the room.
She wore a very elegant but reserved pink dress that showed she had taste and charm but also that she was very beautiful and sexy without flashing it for everyone to see like Connie.
Her long brown hair casscaded down her shoulders and fell down to her supple breasts.
She in fact was a vision of elegant beauty.
This was Virginia's long serving and loyal lawyer/business manager, Nicole Flint.
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Virginia depended on her with every aspect of her life and she was one of the few people that she truly cared for, in fact she saw her as a bigger sister, Nicole certainly was more of sister to Virginia than her real sister.
Nicole carried a champagne glass, which she banged on with a spoon so the crowd would turn their attention on her and Virginia sighed annoyed.

"Oh no. Not a bloody speech. I specifically asked her not to..."
Virginia thought to herself frustrated.

The crowd quickly fell silent and turned their attention on Nicole so all eyes were soon on her.
Satisfied that she had the guests full attention, Nicole began her well rehearsed speech.

"Good evening and welcome. I've been asked to say a few words to you all on behalf of our gratuitous but unfortunately shy host, Miss Kensington."
Nicole began.

The person in the crowd that seemed to be enjoying the speech the most was without a doubt Nicole's personal assistant, Jenny Post, a young woman whom never seemed to be too far from Nicole.
Jenny was a very attractive woman in her late twenty's with curly blonde hair and a warm smile.
She was wearing a very well chosen black cocktail dress that allowed her to present her best features, her voluptious breasts and her long legs.
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Jenny was a nice enough person but her thick southern accent deeply annoyed Virginia, not because she had any problems with the south but because the accent wasn't real.
Jenny was actually from Long island and the accent was simply a hangover from her days of playing Blanche in Streetcar named desire, in a horrible production by the Long island amuter theater group when she was 16 and she ahd kept the accent ever since because she thought it made her seem more interesting.
It didn't.
Jenny was also madly in love with Nicole and didn't seem to be able to get it into her head that Nicole wasn't a lesbian and her constant pinning was a source of great irritation for Virginia.

As the speech which mostly entailed sharing embarrassing story's about Virginia with the guests, who got a great laugh out of it, drew longer Virginia stopped listening.
She made a mental note of finding some way of getting back at Nicole for this.
Perhaps she could send her on a fools errand to the Sahara or maybe the artic.

The only other person attending that she didn't count along with the riff raff, was her best (only real) friend, Tricia Hoberman, heir to the Hoberman cotton candy fortune.
Virginia felt a genuine smile come to her face as she spotted Tricia walking towards her, holding two drinks in her hands, one clearly meant for her.
Tricia as always looked positively stunning as she made her way across the crowded room, wearing an utterly bewitching long golden dress that kept non of her spectacular curves a secret and it didn't go unnoticed by the men attending, every single one of them turned their head at the sight of her.
Whether it was her flowing blonde hair, her perfect ample bosom, the Marilyn Monroe figure she sported, the seductive eyes or the luscious lips everyone longed to kiss, Tricia was the object of everyone's affection.
Even Virginia, who was completely straight and had never even experimented in collage, found herself wanting to sleep with Tricia from time to time.
Tricia loved the attention she got, it gave her a real thrill to know that she was desired so and she always used it to her advantage.
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Tricia was in a great mood and giggling when she reached Virginia and handed her one of the drinks she had in her hand.
She was clearly a little bit drunk.

"What's up with you?"
Virginia asked curious.

"This party's the best Ginny. I just fucked the guy from the Armani ads on your bed. He's totally hot."
Tricia said pleased.

Virginia shuddered.
She wasn't sure whether it was from the thought of people shagging on the bed she slept in or by being called Ginny, she had hated that nickname ever since Regina started it when she was a kid and it stuck.

"Wonderful."
Virginia said sarcastically.

They both looked at the center of the room where Nicole had just wrapped up her speech and the room applauded her (non more than Jenny) as she bowed gracefully and smiled.

"Thank you but I think that the applauses should much rather go to our host and the birthday girl, Miss Virginia Kensington."
Nicole said enthusiastically as she pointed at Virginia and suddenly all eyes were on her and the crowd applauded wildly.

Virginia plastered a fake smile on her face and raised her hand in acknowledgment to the crowd as she shot Nicole a dirty look for this unwelcome announcement and attention but Nicole only laughed, she loved to tease Virginia.
Tricia laughed at her friends uncomfort and joined in the applauding.
As the applauses began dying down, a woman's voice calling out diverted the attention away from Virginia.

"To Virginia."
The woman called out loudly.

This wasn't wasn't good news at all.
Virginia recognized that voice anywhere and she sighed with frustration.

"I didn't think you invited her."
Tricia said surprised.

"I didn't."
Virginia moaned.

The young beauty, no older than 23 years old, strode though the crowd confidently as it parted like the red sea to let her pass.
Everyone was in awe of her, even the ones that loathed her and a good deal of them did.
The women wanted to be her, the men just wanted her, badly.
She was smoldering with almost unberable sexual charisma and mystical allure.
There was a certain animal ferosity in her bright blue eyes that hinted of something darker inside her beautiful and innocent looking exterior.
Her long golden hair casscaded down her back and its delightful scent swept over the nearby peolpe as she walked past them.
The breathtakingly sexy maroon cocktail dress she wore seemed to be fighting a battle to keep her perfectly curved body covered.
Her full, tempting breasts heaved against the pressed hard against the material and created a cleavage so beautiful, it could turn a man blind or drive him to crave for the days he was breastfeed.
The dress's hem barely reached halfway down her thighs and it was so snug that the fabric hugged her body so tightly, that every outline of her body was puplic knowledge, just the way she wanted it to be.
The golden stiletto heels she had on her delicate feet added to her stature.
There crowd already had begun their whispering over her sudden arrival.

"I don't believe it."
One woman said shocked.

"She's got some nerve."
Another whispered.

"Holy shit. Who's that fox."
One clueless man asked intrigued as he admired her long, slender bare legs and her more than perfect behind as she walked past him.

Alicia Donovan...
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...smiled with satisfaction at the guests reaction to her.

She had arrived just the way she wanted too, the center of attention and the object of lustful desire.
Alicia stopped in front of Virginia and Tricia with a triumphant look on her lips.

"Sorry I was late my dear but you know me. I like to make an entrance."
Alicia said delighted as she addressed Virginia.

Virginia was anything but pleased to see her and she had to control herself not to lung at her and shove the glass in her hand down Alicia's throat.
She felt Tricia's hand on her wrist, holding her back and she whispered a comforting word in Virginia's ear to calm her.

"I think we should all thank Nicole for her very entertaining speech, I know I loved it."
Alicia announced to the guests.

Virginia's face was alight with anger, which seemed to amuse Alicia.

"Lets raise a glass to the birthday girl and..."
Alicia began before Virginia cut her off.

"What the bloody hell do you think you're doing here you filthy slut?"
Virginia asked angerly.

The crowd watched on in antisipation, excited to see what happened next.

"Fifth bucks says they get into it, teeth and nails."
One man said to his friend excited.

"That'd be sweet. Your're on."
His friend replied grinning.

"Can I get in on that action?"
An older gentleman behind them whispered enthusiastically.

Alicia faked indignation and looked confused.

"What on earth do you mean? Aren't you glad to see me?"
Alicia asked offended.

"You know very well what she means, you bitch."
Tricia spat out at Alicia.

"Get out."
Virginia shouted, shaking with anger.

"And what if I don't?"
Alicia asked, taunting Virginia with a subtle grin.

This was too much for Virginia to take and she slapped Alicia across the face so hard that the sound of the smack could almost be heard out on the street.
Many in the crowd gasped at Virginia's action and everyone now had their full attention on the two women.
Alicia rubbed her hand over her sore cheek and looked Virginia in the face with hatred.

"How does it feel to know that he wants me more than you? That I can please him in ways you'll never understand, being the fridgid limey cunt you are."
Alicia whispered with a smug grin so only Virginia heard her.

Something inside Virginia exploded and she threw herself on Alicia, pulling her down with force.
Alicia vailed in pain as her back slammed to the hard marble floor with Virginia ontop of her.
Virginia was blinded by fury and without realising it, she had wrapped her hands around Alicia's throat and begun squeezing with all her might.
Alicia gasped out desperatly for air and her feet kicked wildly on the floor as her hands tried to pry Virginia's hands away from her throat.
Virginia felt all of her rage unleashed and all the hatred of Alicia she had stored up for the last mouth and she suddenly realised that she indeed wanted to kill her and she didn't care who saw it and she pressed harder on Alicia's neck.
She looked Alicia in the eyes and saw the fear and pleading in them and smiled.
Suddenly she felt an arm take hold of her from behind, trying to pull her off of Alicia but she resisted, she just needed a little while longer and the cunt would be dead.
Another arm grabbed Virginia and pulled as hard as it could.
She could hear Nicole's voice speaking into her ear.

"Let got my dear. This is not the right way to handle this. Let go."
Nicole said softly, she alway had away of calming Virginia down when her mood was out of control.

Virginia felt her finger's relax the grip on Alicia's neck and she let herself be pulled off of her.
Tricia and Nicole kept their hold on Virginia as they pulled her away from Alicia who rolled on the floor gasping for air as she massaged her sore neck.
Virginia looked up and saw that everyone was looking at her either shocked or just plain frightned.
She suddenly felt exposed and on display like some animal.
She shook loose from Nicole and Tricia's grip and huried up the steps that led to her bedroom, without a word.
Alicia got to her feet, still breathing heavily and holding her neck.

"You see. She's fucking crazy. She almost killed me."
Alicia said outloud for all to hear but no one seemed to much care about her well being and they instead looked at her like unwelcome filth.

"I think you better leave now or I'll have you thrown out like the garbage you are."
Nicole said firmly.

Everyone knew what Alicia had done and they didn't blame Virginia for what she had done.
Alicia looked around and saw the crowds judgmentful eyes on her and she understood that their simpathy wasn't with her.
Even Connie Demico seemed to be appalded by her and she was her best friend.

"Fine you can all go to hell. What do I care."
She shouted angerly as she stormed for the door.

"I think you better see how Virginia is doing up in her room."
Nicole said to Tricia.

Tricia nodded and walked to the steps while Nicole addressed the crowd, asking them to please resume their fun.
When she got to Virginia's door she knocked before entering.
There was no reply.
After a little while she opened the door and walked in but she was surprised to see that Virginia wasn't in the room at all and the backdoor in the room was open and she sighed.

"Where has she gone?"
Tricia asked herself worried.


Alicia muttered angerly to herself as she walked alone down the hallway towards the elevators on the penthouse floor.
The clicking of her golden heels on the marble floor echoed in the silence of the wide empty hallway.
She was still nursing her brused neck and thinking off what she'd do to Virginia if she ever got the chance to lay her hands on her.
She got to the elevators and pressed the button.
As she stood there waiting impatiantly for the elevator to arrive, suddenly all the lights in the hallway went out and the hallway fell into complete darkness.
Alicia nervously turned around and looked down the hallway it but there was no sign of anyone.
The only source of light was the emercency light above the elevator which eluminated the spot Alicia stood on and not much else.
She could barely see further than two-three steps ahead.
Her breathing increased and a beat of sweat ran down her face.
From the darkness there suddenly came the sound of high heels on the marble floor and Alicia felt more than uneasy.
She frantically pushed the elevator button over and over but still the elevator didn't open.

"Is anyone there?"
She called out nervously.

There was no answer but the sound of the heels continued and moved closer.
She was now terrified and she pressed the button and banged on the elevator doors.
The sound drew nearer and Alicia became more and more panicked.
Whoever was in the darkness was only a few steps away from her now and she began trembling.
Alicia saw the outlines of the woman in the darkness and she backed right up to the elevator door, pressing her back against it.

"Stay away from me:"
She called out frightnened.

The woman didn't stop and she appeared in the light and Alicia sighed with relief.
It was a extraordinarily beautiful and sweet looking young woman around Alicia's age with flowing blonde hair, the most beautiful green eyes Alicia had ever seen and full, pouty lips.
The young woman wore a a very charming and sexy red dress that complemented her excellent figure perfectly, she was in short breathtaking.
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"Who are you?"
Alicia asked cautiously.

"I´m...umm... Kate. What´s going on? What's wit hthe blackout and why are you freacking out?"
The young woman replied.

"Its nothing. I thought you might be someone trying to hurt me."
Alicia said as she began to calm down and laugh at her own reaction.

"Hurt you? Why would someone do that?"
Kate asked curious.

"I´m just being a paranoid idiot. No one's going to hurt me."
Alicia said amused as she laughed at herself.

The ding sounded and the elevator opened behind Alicia and suddenly Kate's face turned white and her green eyes widened in fear.
The elevator was only lit by the little red emergancy light inside it and it was hard for Kate to see clearly who it was standing inside it but she did see that it was a young woman in a long green dress and she definitly saw the long, sharp knife she had in her hand.

"What is it?"
Alicia asked.

Before Kate could say anything, the woman inside the inside the elevator grabbed Alicia from behind and forcefully pulled her inside the elevator.
For a split second Kate's eyes met the woman's and she saw the evil glare in them, which terrified her.
The doors of the elevator closed again and Kate could hear Alicia's terrified screams as the elevator moved down the building.
Then there was nothing but silence and Kate stood frozen, trembling, unsure what to do.
She didn'ty even notice the lights come back on in the hallway.

Alicia didn't see how was holding her and she screamed for her life and hit out behind her as hard as she could but she never landed a blow on the woman.
She felt herself violently thrown up against wall of the elvator, her head banged hard up against the wall and she nearly fell to the floor but her hand somehow managed to grab hold of the railing and she held herself upright.
She turned and looked at her attacker but the dim red light mixed with the blow she had just recived to the head made it hard to see her clearly.
She was trembling with fear and tears ran down her face.

"Please dont hurt me. I can pay you whatever you want. I beg you don't hurt me."
Alicia begged sobbing.

The woman laughed softly at Alicia's pathetic attemnt and spet closer to her so that Alicia could see her face.
Alicia gasped as she recognized her and she felt a rush of hopelessness go though her.

"Y...y...you..."
She stuttered.

The woman flipped the knife in her hand and Alicia saw the long blade and she whimpered.
The killer grinned and moved even closer.
Alicia desperatly hit out at her but the killer easily avoided her blow and with one flash of her hand, she sank the knife's blade deep between the third and fourth ribs on Alicia's left side.

"HHHhhuuurrrggggghhhh..."
Alicia gasped painfully as the cold steel blade penetraded her body.

Her eyes opened wide in shock and disbelieve.
A stream of blood sprayed form the wound and splattered on the elevator wall and more trickled from the wound down her side.
Alicia felt the pain ride thought her entire body like electricity through water.
Her feet twitched on the elevator floor so much that the snaps of her shoes broke and fell of her bare feet.
She weakly grabbed the killer's shoulder and tried to push her away but it was no use, she was too weak.
The killer janked the bloodstained blade out of her and Alicia moaned in pain as she did.
She pressed her left hand on the wound to try and keep the blood inside her but it escaped too easily through her fingers.
The killer wasn't not finished yet and she raised the knife up and held it above Alicia's breasts, the blade pointed down.
Her eyes met Alicia's and she smiled wickedly.

"The left or the right?"
The killer whispered playfully.

Alicia looked back at her with hatred and didn't say anything.
A drop of blood on the blade slide down it and fell of the knife and landed on Alicia's firm right breast.
The killer smiled again.
The knife had made the choise for them.
She pressed the tip of the blade down on the skin of Alicia's right breast and held it there.
Alicia gasped and shook her head, her eyes pleaded with the killer.

"Plea...se."
She moaned.

The killer ran her free hand across Alicia's cheek.

"Sssshhhhhhhh."
She hissed before she pushed the knife down into Alicia's breast, slowly.

Alicia let out a painfilled scream as the knife burrowed itself into her.
Blood gushed out of the wound like oil from the earth as the blade sank deeper and deeper and flowed down her breast on both sides and down her body.
A stream ran down her cleavage and disappeared under the tight dress.
Alicia's body shook uncontrolably as the life drained from her body, her feet shook on the floor and her legs began to give away under her weight.
Her mouth opened and blood streamed from between her lips and ran down her cheeks.
The killer pushed the knife deeper until in was in Alicia's breast up to the hilt and then she let go of it and backed away from Alicia.
Alicia weakly grabbed the knife's handle and held it but she had no strength to pull it out.
Her legs gave in and she slide down the elevator wall until she hit the floor on her perfect ass and she slumped to her left side up against the wall.

The killer bent down and tilted her head slightly sideways so she looked Alicia in the eyes.
She watched a Alicia's breasts heaved desperatly wit hthe prodruding knife loadged in one of them, the handle rose and fell, rose and fell.
Alicia's breathing was slow and layboured and more blood flowed from between her lips with each breath.
Her hand still clutched the knife handle.
The killer pulled the hand away and it fell by Alicia's side and took hold of the knife.

"Eeerrrrrggghhhhhhh..."
Alicia gurgled as the killer pulled the knife out of her breast slowly and more blood gushed from the wound.

Without warning, the killer plunged the knife into Alicia a third time and she moaned painfully.
She looked down and saw the knife stick out of her belly, just below the bellybutton.
Blood streamed out of that wound as well, down to her lap and past the hem of her dress and down her bare leg.
The killer twisted the blade and a final shudder of unbarable pain rode through Alicia as the final drops of blood seeped out of the wound in her belly.
Alicia's bare feet shook on the elevator floor for a moment before they stopped and fell limp on the floor.
She gasped a final painfilled breath before the death rattle took hold of her and her body stopped moving.
The killer watched with relish as she saw the light extingushed before her eyes inside Alicia's bright blues.
Her head slumped on her left shoulder and she lay still up against the elevator wall, her bare feet outstreached on the floor in front of her, her hands in her lap.
Alicia's dead eyes stared at her own relfection in the mirror of the elevator wall but if she could have seen herself, she wouldn't have recognized that pale, painstricken and blood stained face, beautiful as it still was.

The killer janked the knife out of Alicia's corpse, whiped the blood on a clean spot on Alicia's dress and stood up.
She grabbed the body by the bare anchles and dragged her out on the floor, she wanted the body to be a certain way.
The elevator stopped on the third floor as the killer had planned and she stept out but not before she pressed the penthouse button and Alicia's body went for the last elevator ride she'd ever take.


In the penthouse hallway several of the guest from Virginia's party had gathered after a hysterical Kate had banged on the door and told everyone that would listen about what had happened.
Nicole had asked people to stay calm and she along with a two waiters, a few of the male guests, Jenny and Connie had gone to investigate.
They were grouped around the elevator and as it opened Connie screamed as loud as she could before she fainted at the sight of what was inside the elevator.

"Oh my god."
Nicole said pale as snow.

Kate nearly threw up and fell into one man´s arms sobbing.
One of the waiters just managed to catch her before she thudded on the marble floor.
Jenny looked away in horror and so did most of the men.
One of them already had out his phone and was dialing 911.
Tricia came running down the hallway and she was shocked to see what was inside the elevator.
Alicia's body lay sprawled out on the elevator floor, her eyes staring blankly with an expression of horror imprinted on her face.
She was naked and her stunningly perfect body was covered in her blood, the dress lay on the floor, cut and bloodsoaked.
Her bloody nipples stood erect in the air and her pussy exposed for all to see.
On the mirror facing the people, something had been written in blood.
UNFAITHFUL CUNT.

"Who could have done this?"
Tricia asked Nicole horrified as they stood by the elevator, looking down on the bloody body.

A terrible thought came to Nicole and she turned to Tricia hastily.

"Where's Virginia?"
She asked with urgency.


Chapter 4. An offer I don't have the good sense to refuse.
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Chapter 4. An offer I don't have the good sense to refuse.


Me and Janelle were enjoying a little downtime in New York following our exploits down at the harbor.
We both felt we had earned ourselves a vacation and hadn't left the hotel room since checking in and I to be honest, I would have been perfectly happy to never leave it again.
I lay on the bed and watched as Janelle climbed out of the bed naked and walked to the bathroom.
She walked slower than she normally would which I appreciated and stopped a moment in the bathroom door, glanced over her shoulder with a smile and blew me a kiss.
As I pulled out one of my cigarette's and lit it with the lighter, Janelle had bought for me at some flee marked (why every woman in my life kept buying me things at flee markets I didn't know) and took a long drag on it.
I reached for the remote and turned on the tv.

First I landed on an episode of what I assumed was some reality crap.
Pass.
Then a cooking show. The only cooking I did was microwave.
Pass.
An episode of the simpsons, nice.
Ten minutes later it was over and my search began again.
Oprah, not if you paid me.
PASS.
The news.
I guess I can see what their bitching about today, the economy or Iraq.

"...she had been stabbed repeatedly and her body then stripped naked."
The anchor said with a grim expression and my ears opened.

"If you're just tuning in our top story today is that social icon Alicia Donovan was brutally murdered last night at the party held in honor of Virginia kensington's 25th birthday. Miss Donovan's body was discovered in an elevator of the building a few minutes after she left the party following an altrication with Miss Kensington. No statement has yet been made by the police and there currently is no suspect. Miss Donovan was twenty four years old. In other news..."
The anchor continued.

"Oh god."
Janelle said shocked.

I turned and saw her standing in the bathroom door in a white robe, her hair wet from the shower and she looked like she'd been punched in the gut.

"What is it?"
I asked.

"I knew her, when we were younger. I was in the same class as her."
Janelle said as she sat down on the edge of the bed.

This wasn't such surprising news for me, I knew Janelle's family was one of New York's richest and that she was living in L.A. working as P.I. against the family's wishes, which made me like her all the more.
As I was about to say something comforting, the phone rang and I answered it.

"Mr. Monroe?"
A woman's voice said on the other line.

"Yes who's this?"
I replied.

"My name is Nicole Flint. I am a lawyer and I represent Miss Virginia Kensington, perhaps you've heard of her?"
The woman said, her voice was very alluring and I guessed that she was as beautiful as I imagined.

"Yes as a matter of fact I have."
I said, trying to sound cool.

"Good. That saves time. Miss Kensington would like to retain your services."
Nicole announced.

"Really? What does a billionaire heiress need from a lowly P.I. as myself.
I asked curiously.

"I think that's best to discuss that in person. If your interested I'll send a car for you and your assistant."
Nicole sounded very professional and confident.

I wasn't sure what to say but I had to admit I was curious as hell and I kept thinking about that murder I had just seen in the news.
This was too much of a coincidence.

"I assure you that the rewards would be substantial."
Nicole added.

I glanced over at Janelle who was looking at me with as mixture of excitement and worry.
I made up my mind.

"We'll be ready in twenty."
I said.

"Good the car is already on its way."
Nicole said pleased.

"Wait. How did you know I'd say yes."
I asked.

"Oh please Mr. Monroe."
She said and I detected amusement in her voice.

I hung up and looked at Janelle.
She looked like she was about to explode with curiosity.

"Well?"
She asked impatiently.

"When was the last time you visited the old neighborhood?"
I asked.


Just a half an hour later me and Janelle walked out of the elevator at the penthouse floor of the Luxemburg tower.
I noticed that the elevator next to the one we used was sealed with police tape and there still was fingerprint dust all over the carpet in front of it.
Janelle looked nothing short of stunning in her (very) tight black skirt and leopard top with ample cleavage and long black heels.
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I counted, she had turned exactly nineteen heads from our hotel room to here, even the driver that was sent for us nearly got in three accidents as he couldn't stop looking at her in the rearview mirror.
I knocked on the door to the penthouse and the it opened almost instantly.
A very attractive blonde with curly hair and a big smile had answered the door.
She wore a tight top that did an excellent job of framing her large ample bosom and a pair of tight pants but expencive looking black pants.
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I knew they were expencive because Janelle stared at them longingly and I knew she'd go out and get a pair right now if we were't busy.

"Hello, you must be Mr. Monroe."
She said and I heard relief in her voice but there was something off about her accent.

"Call me Gavin."
I said as I held out my hand.

"I´m Jenny. Jenny Post."
She said as she shock my hand like she was trying to shake of a kitten that was stuck up on my head.

"And you are clearly Miss Hoberman. I can tell that."
Jenny said to Janelle.

I wondered what that meant.
She lead us into the penthouse and my jaw dropped.
This "apartment" was bigger than hotel I was staying at.
The floors were marble, every furniture an antic or some new hot design.
I could have stood on the shoulders of five men and not hit the ceiling.
Janelle didn't seem at all impressed, it was old news to her, she was used to this.
At that moment I wondered if marrying her wouldn't just be the smartest move I could make.
I could be a kept man.

Jenny lead us to the an office where we were greeted by a remarkably beautiful and elegant looking woman.
She was maybe in her mid thirty's with long brown hair, matching eyes and one of the cutest smiles I'd ever seen.
The woman was slim, tall and athletic but not in a bodybuilder way thankfully.
This was more a I stay in shape by jogging, kickboxing and swimming fifty laps every morning kind of a body.
She had on a painfully sexy short black dress that fit her body like a glove and matching long, open toed heels.
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"Would you mind getting me some coffee Jenny."
She said indifferently to Jenny who nodded and closed the door behind her.

"Good day Mr. Monroe we spoke on the phone earlier. I´m Nicole Flint."
She said in a very professional and impersonal manner.

I shook her hand and smiled, my guess about her had been dead on.
She saw my smile and looked at me funny.

"Is there something the matter Mr Monroe?"
She asked firmly.

"No, not at all. Just remembered something amusing."
I replied and the smile died a cold death.

"Good your not going to be paid to smile."
She said as she gestured me and Janelle to have a seat opposite her desk.

"What am I getting paid to do."
I said abruptly with a firm tone.

Nicole seemed taken back by me bid to take control of the conversation and she looked at me coldly.
I could tell she was all about making things match and she was clearly a person who needed control, there wasn't a hair out of place on her and she carried herself with great confidence and discipline, I guessed she had worked hard all her life to get to where she was and a lowly P.I. taking control from her was definitely something that irritated her.

"Have a seat and I'll explain the situation."
There was resentment in her voice.

I sat down and glanced at Janelle who was holding back a laugh.

"As you no doubt have heard. there was a murder here last night."
Nicole began and she seemed almost embarrassed by the subject.

"Yes a Alicia Donovan, the cotton heiress I believe."
I said.

"Candy actually."
Janelle corrected me with a grin on her lip.

I pinched her thigh without Miss Flint seeing and she flinched and looked at me annoyed at first but then she laughed.

"Well unfortunately Miss Kensington had ... shall we say a dark history with the Miss Donovan and then after the slight altercation they had during the party has put us in a bit of a...spot. You see at this moment Miss Kensington is the number 1 suspect in the murder but I assure you she's not the guilty party and that's what we'd like you to prove Mr Monroe. And of course you will be handsomely compensated."
Nicole explained.

Janelle looked at me and I saw that she wasn't sure if this was such a good idea.
But I had to admit my curiosity was wide awake and that handsome compensation had my full attention.

"Are you certain she's innocent. Is there any way to prove that like an alibi or an something?"
I didn't expect there to be or they wouldn't need me.

Nicole shook her head regrettably.

"Why me? There's hundreds of people you could have called but you chose me."
I was very curious to know.

"You come highly recommended, the pair of you."
Nicole said matter of factly.

"By whom?"
I asked.

"By me."
I heard Janelle's voice say behind me but it couldn't be her, she was sitting right behind me and she didn't open her mouth.

We both turned around and for the second time in ten minutes my jaw dropped but I worried that this time it wouldn't go back up.
Standing there in the doorway was a woman that looked exactly like Janelle and her voice was the same as well.
Either they were twins or clones.

"Gavin may I introduce Tricia Hoberman, my sister."
Janelle said before she hurried from her chair and the sisters hugged.

I was breathless, she'd never told me her sister was a twin, holy shit.
If nature was going to make two of someone it sure made sense that it was Janelle, I was speechless at this mirical of nature.
Tricia's hair was longer than Janelle's and her dress far more expensive but other than that they were exact doubles.
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Four identical perfect breasts, two pairs of the most kissable lips I knew and that figure, holy shit.
I was already working on how to approtch the threesome subject in conversation when Nicole cleared her throat and reclaimed my attention.

"What sort of altercation happened at the party."
I said, trying my best to maintain professionalism.

"Well..."
Nicole wasn't looking forward to re-telling that story.



Jenny opened the door of the storage, muttering annoyed over there not being any coffee in the kitchen and no one on the staff being around.
She turned on the light and walked inside.
The storage was the size of small convinient store but it wasn't convinent at all.
There were so many rows of shelfs all stocked with everything from cabbadge to onion dip.
She walked along the shelfs looking for coffee bitching about her life to herself.
She was far to engrossed in the tragedy of her own life to notice a second person enter the storage and closing the door.
Jenny finally spotted the coffee on a shelf so high it was out of her reach.

"What fucking moron thought it was clever to put the coffee all the fucking way up there."
She complained outloud.

Jenny stood up on the tip of her toes and reached for the coffee.
She could almost reach it.
The killer tip toed on her bare feet soundlessly towards Jenny, the knife ready in her hand.
Jenny used all her strength to push herself upwards just enough so she got hold of the bag of coffee with her fingers and pulled it off the shelf.
She let out a triumphant yell and smiled.

"Well this just might turn out to be good day after all."
She said outloud pleased.

Before she knew it a hand had clapped over her mouth from behind and pulled her back.
She tried to scream but the hand pressed over her mouth made barely a whisper.
She dropped the coffee bag on the floor and it split open littering the floor with coffee beans.

"I doubt it."
The killer whispered in her ear.

Jenny struggled to free herself but then the shining blade caught her eye and she froze.
The blade reflected in her eyes and she watched the hand that held it thrust it down.

"MMMMMMMMMMMMHHHHHHHHHHH..."
The killers hand muffled Jenny's agonized scream as the cold blade sank deep into her left bosom.

The knife didn't stop until its hilt touched Jenny's breast.
Blood gushed out of the wound and trickled down her full, heaving breast in two, thick streams.
A large, dark stain was forming in her top around the area the knife protruded from and with every layboured breath Jenny drew the stain grew.
Jenny was in shock, she didn't understand what had happened or why.
The pain in her breast was crippling and she felt all strength and will drain out of her body.
Her feet twitched on the floor and her body was beginning to feel numb.
Blood trickled off of her ample breast and dripped to the floor, staining the coffee beans at her feet.
She looked down at the large knife in her chest with horror.
The killer pulled her hand away from Jenny's mouth and blood penetraded her lips and flowed down her cheeks.
She released her grip on Jenny and backed away.

Jenny staggered a step forward, nearly crashing headlong into the floor but she stayed on her feet but just barely.
She grabbed the handle of the knife and whimpered as she felt she couldn't get it out.
Slowly she turned and looked her killer in the eye.
She gasped as she saw who it was and a tear ran down her cheek.

"You. Why?"
She asked weakly.

The woman didn't answer.
Jenny sighed painfully and the woman saw that last spark go out in her eyes.
Jenny fell limp on the floor with a thud and lay dead on her left side, her hands outstreached and her legs tangled.
Blood continued to leak out of her breast and quickly there was a puddle on the floor next to her with the odd coffee beans floating in it.
Her eyes stared unfocused at the reflection of the pretty woman in the puddle but didn't see her or the painstricken expression on her face.
The killer pushed her shoulder with her foot and she slumped on her back.
He breasts juggled as she was turned and the knife swayed around a little like a planted flag in a storm.
Most of the left side of her top was soaked in blood and her eyes now stared blank up at her killer, who saw her own smile reflecting in the Jenny's eyes.
She reached down and grabbed Jenny's corpse by the anchles and pulled her away with the hands dragging behind her.
Nicole would be waiting a long time for her cup of coffee.


Chapter 5. The Heiress.
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Thanks for the kind words ogre 010. Glad you liked it.


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oh. :o another nice chapter :dance: :bravo: :bravo:
your stabbing parts is really good and i love them :loves:
cant whit for next chapter .tanks so much and good luck
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Thanks for the continuing support ogre010. Glad to hear its to your liking.
Hope the rest will please as well although it won't always be stabbings.


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Chapter 5. The Heiress.


After spending a good half an hour in Nicole's office, where she filled us in on everything, the history of the bad blood between Virginia and Alicia, the altercation at the party, well if attacking someone and trying to strangle them to death in a middle of a crowded party counts as an altercation, personally I'd call it attempted murder but whatever, how Virginia had disappeared from her room and what the witness, had seen in the elevator, a green dress just like Virginia's.
I had to admit things sure seemed to point at Virginia and I was reluctant to take the case but after both Tricia and Nicole declared their trust in her innocence and Janelle begging me to take the case as she had been good friends with Virginia when they were kids and she wanted to help her, I agreed but I had to admit my decision was based as much on the reward Nicole offered as Janelle's request.

Nicole got an important phone call and asked Tricia if she didn't mind escorting us to meet Virginia.
At first she didn't think it was a good time for me to meet her but I insisted I needed to meet the person who's innocence I was going to be proving.
I told her it was so I could get her side of the story right but in truth I just wanted to look her in the eyes and see for myself if I trusted her or not.

"How come you recommended us?"
I asked Tricia as she lead me and Janelle out on the terrace where Virginia was relaxing.

"Well she's my sister."
Tricia replied.

"Yes but I was under the impression that the family wasn't all that thrilled with her career choice."
I found her explanation to be flimsy at best.

Janelle shot me a mind your own business look that I ignored.

"Well...yeah but right now it seems its a useful thing to have a P.I. we can trust in the family."
Tricia said as she smiled at her sister and Janelle couldn't help but repay the smile.

"Besides your reputation proceeds you Mr Gavin. They say your one of the best and following your little explodes down by the harbor the other night, I'd say your the kind of dedicated man we need."
Tricia added.

I couldn't help but feel flattered.

Tricia led us out onto a terrace as big as parking lot.
As we walked outside we met two women on their way in, both of them breathtaking.
The one on the left was younger, maybe 23-24 with long golden hair, full, lips as red as blood and a figure that made me want to get down on my knees and thank god I was a man.
But seeing as kneeling wasn't my style, it was convenient then that I didn't buy into any of that god bullshit.
The black and white dress clung perfectly to her body, leaving nothing a secret and the high heels only made her more desirable.
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The other one was a few years older and if possible even more beautiful than her companion.
Her long, thick dark brown hair flowed down her shoulders and hung lively by her supple breasts, barely contained by the tiny little white top she wore.
The black leather shorts she had on were the shortest and tightest I'd ever seen and my mind puzzled over how on earth she managed to out them on in the first place.
It must have been an engineering feet of historic proportions.
On either foor she wore a delectible dark stocking that reached up to her thighs and long, black heels.
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She was so alluring and perfectly beautiful that I couldn't take my eyes off of her and banged my shin into a metal flowerpot in my path.
It hurt.
The alluring woman let out a delightful laugh at my clumsiness and so did the blonde.
Janelle who must have noticed me looking at the brunette scowled at me and Tricia frowned over this idiot she had recommended.

"Who's this dashing gentleman."
The brunette said amused with a sexy english accent.

"He's the detective who's going to prove your sisters innocence."
Tricia said coldly.

It was clear by the tone in Tricia's voice and the way Regina looked at Tricia that they hated each other.

"I´m Gavin."
I said awkwardly as I massaged my brused shin.

"Hello Gavin. I´m Regina."
The brunette replied with a smile that could melt the artic.

She ran her finger across her breast and gave me a look, a look any man would want to get from her.
I had a sudden urge to grab her, throw her down on the groung and take her right then and there...but I didn't.

"I´m Lizzy."
The blonde said, equally amused as she ran her tonge over her upper lip.

"Pleasure to meet you both."
I said and I felt Janelle's eyes burn a hole in face.

I shook Regina's hand and then Lizzy's.
Regina looked over at Janelle and laughed again.

"Oye look how's back Lizzy, the copy."
She said amused to Lizzy.

Lizzy shared her laugh, apparently it was some sort of a private twin joke they shared.

"Piss of you junkie slut and stay away from Gavin. He's mine."
Janelle hizzed at her angerly.

I had to admit that seeing Janelle jealous and protective of me felt nice.
She definitly cared

"Don't be so bloody touchy copy."
Regina replied.

"Wanna fuck."
Lizzy asked with a girlish look on her face but her lips had a sinister smile on them.

I meant to say something intelligent but instead I muttered something inchoerant and adjusted the collar of my shirt.
Janelle would have punched her down had it not been for Tricia stopping her.
Lizzy and Regina both laughed at me and then they kissed and what a kiss it was.
I'd rearly seen so much tonge.

"Come on, these squears bore me."
Regina said with contempt.

Then she and Lizzy walked past us and disappeard into the penthouse, holding hands and laughing.
As I watched them go, I began to think I had entered some sort of a fairy tale world where all women were perfect looking.
The only other time I had felt like this was during what the papers called the "Hollywood murder mystery."
But thoughts of that only brought up memories I had spent weeks drinking away and I wasn't keen on having to do it again.
Max had more than once threatened to send me to rehab but usually he ended up drunker than me.

"Crazy cunts. I hope they fucking OD on their shit."
Janelle said bitterly.

I grabbed her and kissed her passionatly which seemed to calm her down.
It usually did.

"Mind if we get to it?"
Tricia asked.


The terrace had a glorious view over the entire skyline of Manhattan, the Hudson, Brooklyn and to less impressively to... New jersey.
We walked to the edge of the it where a woman stood looking down on the city, her hands resting on the railing in front of her.
Her long curly brown blew in the soft wind and from behind she looked spectacular.
She wore a silver colored silk robe that reached down to her her bare toes.
She was staring out on the city, longingly and she didn't seem to have realized we were there at all.

"Virginia."
Tricia said softly.

Virginia slowly turned and faced us and my heart leapt up into my throat.
Her beauty was both perfect and unsurpassed by all.
Her and Regina's mother must have been a goddess or some fairytale princess, nothing else made sense.
She looked firmly at me and I felt her brown eyes examine me as mine examined her.
I knew at that moment she was the most beautiful woman I had ever seen and I wanted her more that any other.
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A subtle smile came to her red lips.

"Welcome Mr Monroe. I've been looking forward to meeting you."
She said calmly, the allure of her sisters accent was nothing compared to hers.

I moved closer to shake her offered hand and as I did I caught her scent and let it fill my lungs.

"The pleasures all mine Miss Kensington."
I did my best not to sound cheesy.


"Oh hi Janelle. Its been so long."
Virginia said smiling and moved to her to give her a hug.

"Why don't I get a hug?"
I muttered jealously under my breath.

"What did your sister want this time?"
Tricia asked with distaste.

"Oh the usual, money and more money. She said it was to finance her newest art project but I wouldn't call an heroin art so I refused and dear old sis stormed off with her newest girl toy in a huff."
Virginia sighed.

She walked back ot the edge and looked over the city.
I got the feeling this was her way to escape her troubles.

"Would you two mind leaving us alone. Me and Mr Monroe have plenty to discuss. I´m sure you sisters would like to have a change to catch up."
Virginia suggested but we all knew it wasn't so much a request as an order.

Tricia nodded and walked off with Janelle in tow.
Janelle seemed hesitant at first but she followed.
As she walked she looked over her shoulder at me with concern, she had seen the way I looked at Virginia but at that moment her concerns were non of mine.
I leaned on the railing next to Virginia and reached inside my jacket for my cigarettes, put one in my mouth and lit it.

"Got one for me?"
Virginia asked.

"Of course."
I said and I offered her one.

"Oh damn. I seem to be out of matches and my lighter died on me this morning."
I said after fumbling in my pockets.

"No matter. Hold still."
She replied with a soft smile.

She leaned closer to me as if for a kiss, her cigarette protruding from her lips and with her hands she guided the ends of our cigarettes together and used mine to light hers.
It was a wonderful feeling being so close to her, our eyes meeting.
Her cigarette caught fire and she moved away and just in time too, I was second away from kissing her.

"Much obliged."
She said pleasantly.

"Your welcome."
I replied grinning.

"So Mr Monroe. Can you help me?"
She asked bluntly.

"That depends. Are you innocent?"
I asked casually.

She let out a laugh and looked away from my face and to the skyline.

"Yes, although I can't say I´m saddned by Alicia's timely demise."
She said calmly.

"But you have to admit it looks quite bad, doesn't it? You attacking her in front of everyone and she's killed five minutes later while your missing. After all you do have a motive. She seduced your fiancé on the night before your wedding and he left you."
I wanted to see her reaction.

Her face twitched slightly as I mentioned this and she looked down, avoiding my gaze.

"Yes it does look bad. Just my luck, isn't it."
She laughed bitterly at her circumstances.

"I admit I lost my head at the party but I coudn't murder someone like that."
She said as she looked me in the eye.

"Where did you disappear too from your room. Why go out the back?"
I asked firmly.

"I just needed to get away so I went to the kitchen and took the service elevator to the parking garage, got in my car and I just drove though the city for hours. I needed to be alone. I told the police all this and the security camera's even back me up but they say I could have time to kill her and still have left in time. They didn't believe me."
She said bitterly as she sucked as much poison out of the cigarette as she could.

She looked me in the eye and I saw how uneasy and nervous she was.
She seemed convincing and normally I would have believed her but I just wasn't sure.

"Do you believe me?"
She asked and I could tell she was desperate for me to believe her.

"I do believe you."
I wasn't sure if I was lying or not.

She smiled and kissed me on the cheek.

"Thank you. How will you handle this?"
There was relief in her voice.

"I guess I'll have visit the morgue, see if the body holds some clues for me and then I need to question this so called witness... Kate."
I told her.

"Thank you Mr Monroe."
She said greatful.

"You're welcome Miss Kensington and call me Gavin."
I hated to be called Mr Monroe, my father had always made us kids call him Mr Monroe and I always disliked it, it felt unpersonal but that was him to the T.

"Alright but then you must call me Virginia."
She said smiling.

I nodded and walked away.
I looked over my shoulder as I walked towards the penthouse entrance.
She had returned her gaze on the view, the cigarette I had given her twirling in her fingers.
At that moment I wished she was innocent.
Otherwise I'd be sorely disappointed.



Nicole...
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...dribbled her fingers on the surface of her mahogany desk, irritated as she listened to what Detective Constance Raine had to say on the other end of her phone.
She was so distracted by the conversation she didn't hear the south door of her office open, someone slipping inside and locking the door behind them.

"Don't be such a fool Constance. You know perfectly well that you don't have any evidence to bring my client in for questioning again. We have already co-operated fully and I've had enough of your nonsense."
She said angrily before she slammed the receiver down on the phone.

She leaned back in her chair and sighed with frustration.
There was a creak on the wooden floor behind her and she realised someone was in the room with her.
She jumped out of the chair and faced the intruder.
A wave of relief washed over her as she realised who it was and she lowered her defenses.

"Holy fuck. You scared the hell out of me. For a second I thought someone was here to kill me."
Nicole said as she laughed at herself.

"Oh but I am."
The woman said with cold seriousness.

The smile slowly faded off of Nicole's face and she looked at the woman with uncertainty.
There was silence as both women looked into each others face.
Finally Nicole laughed again.

"Oh damn it, you almost had me there. I really thought you were going to kill me."
Nicole said amused.

Then suddenly and without warning the woman's hands had wrapped themselvs around Nicole's soft, slender neck and tightned as hard around it as they could.
Nicole's eyes widened and nearly popped out of her head as the woman's fingers squeezed on her neck and she instantly knew what it was like to be strangled.
She grabbed the woman's hands and pulled on them will all her strength, trying to loosening the death grip they had on her throat but they didn't budge an inch.
Nicole gasped as the last ounce's of air she had in her lungs was forced out.
All the fear and panic Nicole was experiancing showed in her beautiful face as it lost its color and the skin adopted a blueish shade.
Her mouth was open wide as she tried to get even the smallest bit of air into her lungs or to scream or help but the best she achived was a painful gurgle heard only by her killer.

Nicole felt herself force backwards and she felt herself knocked into her desk.
The killer, still gripping her throat with full strength pushed Nicole down on the desk and pulled herself ontop of her.
Nicole thrashed around on her desk, pushing her papers, laptop, phone and jar of pens to the floor as she was made to lie on the desk with the killer straddling her.
Her feet kicked wildly in the air as they stood out of the desk so hard that both of her open toed heels fell from her bare feet and fell on the floor below.
Nicole's tonge found its way out of her mouth and bounced around between the corners of her mouth much like a fish flopping on the ground.
The firm, pert breasts heaved up and down against the black dress as her lungs battled to keep operation on the last fumes of breath.
Her bare feet kicked in the air and painfully banged up against the side of her desk, she though that maybe, just maybe if she made enough noise she'd be heard and saved but she was forgetting that she had her office soundproofed years ago.
Its hard to remember such details when your being violently throttled to death.
The brown eyes darted madly around in her head unfocused.
She gave up on her attemnts to disloadge the grip on her neck and began hitting up the woman but she was weak and hardly functioning so her hits were soft and unprecise and the killer avoided them with ease.
The killer grew tired of this dance and moved her thumbs lower so they were perched down on the windpipe and with extra force she shoved them deep down into Nicole's neck closing the windpipe of completly and almost crushing it.
Nicole's legs now only shook uncontrolably in the air.

"EEeeeerrrrggghhhhhhuuullhhllllerrrrr...."
Nicole's last painful gasps would have gotten under the skin of most but for the woman straddling her, they were music.

Feeling the very last ounze's of strength... of life fading from her Nicole only wondered why?
Why was this happening to her?
What had she done?
Then everything went black.
The brown eyes stopped seeing.
Her hands fell limp on the desk with a heavy thud.
The legs banged against the side of the desk one last time and hung unmoving of the edge like the feet of puppets and her toes uncurrled.
Her bloated tonge fell to the side of her mouth and hung out of it.
The firm breasts remained perfectly still under the black dress, their nippled hard and erect.
A weak, almost whisper of a sigh escaped the blue lips.
Nicole Flint had been successfully strangled to death.

The killer kept strangling Nicole's body for another minute or so until she was absolutly certain she was dead and then she slowly unclenched her fingers.
She looked down on Nicole's expressionless and color drained face.
The eyes stared up at her and it was clear that all that had made Nicole who she was and had always shown so brightly in her eyes was gone, extinguished.
She was now nothing but an empty shell, but still a very, very beautiful shell.
The woman ran her hands down from Nicole's neck, across her breasts and took them in her hands and massaged them fondly.
She had always wanted to know what it felt like to fondle Nicole's breasts and now she knew.
It felt great.

The killer dismounted Nicole's corpse and pushed her carelessly off of the table so she crumbled to the floor and lay in a twisted heap no living woman could adopt without a great deal of pain, amongst the contents of her desk.
She then grabbed Nicole's right wrist and dragged her on the floor to the door she had come into.
She unlocked the door and walked out, dragging Nicole's corpse behind her with her bare toes dragging on the wooden floor and her beautiful face hidden behind locks of her long hair.


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Chapter 6. Just like Pretty woman.


No matter how many times I´ve walked into a morgue, I always get chills.
Its a cold and lifeless place and I've yet to meet a coroner that doesn't seem a bit off, guess you have to be to handle that job.
Usually it would have been a bit of a hassle for a private detective to get allowed in to examine the body of a murder victim but luckily I ran into the lead police detective on the case out in the hall and as it turned out me and her went way back.
It was Constance Raine, the daughter of my first police captain, Johnny Raine.
I remembered her from when she used to pop up in the station wearing a mini skirt, black heels, a Spice girls tank top and pig tails when she was in high school.
She always did have the cutest smile.
It drove all the guys wild and she loved to tease them with her jailbait figures.
But she was all grown up now and well past the pig tail stage.
She had replaced the mini skirt and tank top with a black shirt and jeans so tight I couldn't tell how she had put them on.
She had kept the black heels though and her bangs were still as long and cute as before.
The glock at her hip and the gold badge on her belt gave her a very authoritative look.
Wow she sure was sexy as hell and seeing as old Johnny had dropped death of a stroke back in 02, I didn't have to worry about him shooting me for thinking so.
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She had given me one of her famous smiles when she saw me and it hadn't taken long for me to convince her to let me take a look at the body.
Janelle elected to wait outside, she didn't like the idea of seeing her old friend like that.

Me and Constance took our place on either side of the slab and the coroner pulled the sheet away, revealing Alicia Donovan's naked dead body.
She was as pale as a person can be and cold from the morgue's storage units.
No one had bothered to close her eyes and they stared up at us blankly.
The painful last moments she had experienced were clear in her face.
I hadn't realized before then just how beautiful she was and young to, a damn shame.
I looked at the three stab wounds and it was clear to me that these were not left by an unsure hand.
This killer knew what she was doing, each stab was aimed to inflict maximum pain but without leaving any chance of survival.
Could Virginia have done this?
I hoped not.
I looked up at Constance's face and I saw that she was determined to catch this killer as her eyes ran over Alicia's breasts, or more specifically the large gash in the left one.
The coroner confirmed my conclusions about the wounds and he estimated that the first two stabs had been primarily intended to cause pain while the third to the breast was what finished her off.
Even though I knew that Alicia had been a royal bitch, I still felt for her.
Poor girl.

"So do you really think that my client is guilty?"
I asked Constance as we walked back out into the hallway.

"She certainly had motive and she conveniently disappeared at the time of the murder so yes, she is my prime suspect."
Constance said matter of factly.

"Well I hope you're wrong."
I said as I lit a cigarette.

"So do I, seeing as she's got you working for her."
Constance said friendly.

"Now what?"
She added.

"I was thinking of talking to this supposed witness you have, a Kate something."
I said.

"Okay, I'll join you."
Constance replied.

"Fine by me. Don't know how to get to Queen's anyway."
I said as I held the door open for her.

She gave me one of her smiles and I nearly melted on the spot.
The theoryI had on me being stuck in some sort of a beautiful woman's paradise strengthened even further as I got a look at the stunning blonde that stood out in the hall with Janelle.
She had her hair done up in a very charming way and wearing a splendid strapless dress, no doubt from some famous and very expensive label.
The red heels she had on her feet were both sexy and a bold choice.
There was a delightful smile on her full lips and she I was sure she was one of more beautiful women I had seen.
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Janelle didn't seem to pleased about her company and I quickly discovered why.

"Mr Monroe. Hello I´m Rita McQueen from Gossip magazine. Its a pleasure to meet you."
The blonde said in a very sexy voice as she rushed up to me, her hand outstretched.

Oh damn, a reporter and a gossip writer of all things.
Suddenly I felt a lot less interested in her.
I took her hand to be polite and nodded with a awkward smile plastered on my face.

"You know who I am?"
I asked surprised.

"Oh of course. You're the famous detective who solved the Hollywood murder mystery."
Rita said impressed.

The press had seen my work on that case a bit differently.
I personally felt like a big fat failure while they saw me as some sort of a hero.
What kind of a hero lets everyone around him die and then shots the killer in cold blood instead of bringing her in?

"So you're working on this case? Wow, that's quite a scoop. You know, I was at Kensington's party when it happened. Hard to believe she's a killer. Got anything you want to share with the press?"
Rita asked enthusiastic as she took out her tape recorder to take down my reply.

"Yes I do. Fuck off."
I said directly into the recorder.

I then walked past her without a second glance with Constance and Janelle in tow as both of them had a hard time containing their laughs while Rita stood there with an outraged and offended look on her face.
Perhaps I was being overly rude but she had pissed me off by bringing up the old case plus I just naturally hated reporters, especially gossip rag reporters like her.
Goddamn vultures.



In her apartment, Kate was frantically pacing the floor back and forth with her bare feet, chewing on her fingernails.
She was terrified and she couldn't stop seeing Alicia getting pulled into that elevator by the woman in the green dress.
She tried to see the woman's face in her mind but she just couldn't.
Kate ran her hands through her blonde hair and cursed her luck of having been there at that exact moment.
And now she was a witness in a brutal murder and that meant she might be in danger but who would care about that.
After all she was just a hooker who had been there to see a client and she got the feeling the cops wouldn't give two shits about her.
They only cared about the dead rich girl.

Her nerves were so weak that when the door of her roomates bedroom was carelessly yanked open from inside the room that Kate was startled to death and nearly screamed out.
A fat, sweaty middle aged man with a bad wig and a gut large enough to crush an elephant walked out of the room buckling his belt.
He stopped for a moment as he spotted Kate and his eyes ran over her young, firm body poorly consealed by the open sleeveless sweater she had on which left her black underwear exposed.
As he stood there, his mouth open, tongue running over his upper lip, Kate felt his eyes on her bright red lips, her bra clad ample breasts, the the ring in her bare bellybutton or the outline of her black panty's.
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Being in her line of work she was used to it and had on many occations let men like him have their way with her but right now she felt discusted and cheep.
The man grinned creepily before her cold gaze caught his eyes and he walked over to the front door, opened it and left the apartment.
Kate swore right then and there that she would stop hooking and do something better with her life.

Carly, Kate's roommate came out of her room naked aside from the stripped girly panty's and white socks holding a teddie bear.
Apparently the sweaty man's type was the sweet little girl.
She shuddered at the thought.
Carly threw the teddie bear to the corner, picked up a red tank top and pulled it over her head, covering up her delightful breasts with their hard, sweet nipples.
Carly was the same age as Kate but a very different type, her hair was jet black and smooth, her figure slim and she was rather petite but stunningly beautiful and so sexy she drove all men wild.
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Her speciality as a hooker was in satisfying men who liked to play schoolgirl fantasy's but unlike Kate she actually enjoyed her work and felt like she was living the life.
In a lot of ways she was like Julia Roberts best friend in Pretty woman.
Kate sometimes wondered if that made her Julia Roberts and her knight in shining armour would soon save her or if she was that hooker found dead in the dumpster in the opening scene.

"Wow that fat fuck sure did have some fucked up things he wanted to do."
Carly said as she laughed at it.

Not wanting to hear what these things were, Kate turned her back on her roommate and kept pacing the floor.
Carly looked at Kate for a while, trying to figure out what was going on.

"What's up with you?"
She asked confused.

"What's up with me? I just witnessed fucking murder last night and I'm freaking out."
Kate spat out at her.

Carly rolled her eyes and shook her head annoyed.

"Will you just get over that already. You didn't witness a murder. Its not like to saw the bitch get shived, it was a prelude to a murder at best."
Carly said uninterested.

Kate stared at her with an outraged expression thinking of all the things she wanted to yell at her but she was interrupted by the knock on the front door of the apartment.

"Why don't you see who it is?"
Kate said angerly as she rushed past Carly into he rbedroom and slammed the door behind her.

"Huh, drama queen."
Carly said to herself.

She went to the door and opened it.
There was a very beautiful woman dressed in a red coat and matching heels standing outside the door.

"Can I help you?"
Carly asked impatiantly.

"Yes I think you can."
The woman replied with a grin.

Carly didn't notice the woman's hand slide into the handbag that hung of her shoulder as she spoke.
She never saw the knife come out of the handbag but she certainly felt it being thrust into her belly.
She let out a soul shattering gasp as the cold blade cut though her flesh and buried itself deep inside her stomach.
As she looked down at her ruined gut, she saw the 12 inch blade sticking out from under her red top below the bellybutton.
Instinctivly she reached out and grabbed the woman's hand, trying to get the knife out of her.
Carly felt her warm blood gush from the wound and run down to her stripped panty's, soaking them and continuing down her bare leg.
The killer grabbed the back of Carly's neck and pulled her closer to her so the knife was thrust deeper inside her.
Blood spat from her lips as the blood from her ruined gut was forced up to her mouth when she gasped.
The blood streamed down her chin on both sides and her eyes stared into the killers horrified and filled with unbarable pain.
Her sock glad feet twitched on the blood stained floor under her as she fought to stay upright but it was a loosing battle.

The killer released her grip on Carly and the knife's handle and she staggered backwards into the apartment, clutching the knife buired in her.
She left bloody footprints as she moved further into the room but she didn't care.
The killer grinned as she watched her go and stepped into the apartment and closed the door behind her, her eyes still keeping full attention of Carly's wobbly death dance.
Carly moaned from the pain and tears ran down her cheek as she realised she was going to die.
She heaved forward in pain as an excrusiating surge of agony rode though her.
She could barely stand straight and she nearly crashed into the coffee table.
With effort, Carly looked up at Kate's door and she suddenly felt a strong need to warn her friend.
She tried to call out or scream but she couldn't, it was too difficul and her mouth was full of blood.
She took a step towards the door, her hand reaching out for it before she collapsed facedown on the floor.

Carly came down on the knife and her weight pushed down on it so it shoved even deeper into her and she let out a horrible final sigh as her feet shook on the floor.
Her body fell still and lay unmoving, her pert panty clad ass sticking slightly up in the air and a pool of blood running from under her onto the floor.
The left leg lay straight while the right lay bent out on the floor.
Her hands rested under her stomach, still clutching the knife and her left cheek pressed into the cold floor.
Locks of her black hair had fallen over her face, covering it.
The killer bent down beside her and with her gloved hand she brushed the hair away from Carly's face and the brown eyes looked back at her.

They were blank and distant, now more like the eyes of a doll than a living woman.

Blood dripped from her lips to the floor and collected into a small puddle.

Carly was very much dead.






Kate stood by the window in her bed, looking down on the street, waiting for her prince charming to arrive to take her away.

She heard the door of her bedroom opening and she sighed.

"What now Carly?"
She asked annoyed.

"Carly? Afraid not."
She heard an unfamiliar woman's voice say behind her.

Kate was startled and quickly turned to the door.
She gasped terrified and the lovely green eyes widened as much as they could, she was staring down the barrel of a silencer in the hand of a woman in a red coat.
The woman's face wasn't familiar but she still seemed somehow familiar.
Kate raised her hand in protest as she stepped backwards away from the woman so her back was pressed up against the window she had been gazing out dreaming not thirty seconds before.
She was trembling with fear and her breasts rose and fell rapidly against her black bra.

"Please don't."
She begged.

"Sorry but you were at the wrong place at the wrong time."
The woman said coldly.

"No, don'.... aaarrrgggghhhh..."
Kate gasped painfully.

The sound of the shell casing ejecting from the pistol and landing on the floor with a destinctive clang filled Kate's ears.
She watched the smoke rise from the barrel of the silencer that still pointed at her chest.
She felt the pain in her breast and the blood streaming down it.
Kate knew she was shot but she didn't believe it.
It couldn't have happened.
She stared at the woman in the red coat with sadness as she felt the pain move though her body and her legs beginning to buckle.
She looked down and moaned as she saw the small hole at the edge of her bra on her left breast.
Blood was trickling down the breast in two streams, one to the side in her cleavage and one over her bra.
The taste of blood came to her mouth and as her full red lips parted, a thin stream of blood ran out of the corner of her mouth and down her chin.
She looked her killer in the eyes and tried to say something but no words came out.
Instead she sighed and the killer saw the life drain out of her beautiful green eyes.
Kate slide down the window, leaving a smear of blood on it as she went, and slumped to her left side behind the bed.

The killer walked to the bed and glanced down on Kate's lifeless body.
She lay on her side up against the wall with her legs ontop of each other and her hands lying on the floor in front of her.
The green eyes stared blank under the bed but did not see what was under it.
The kissable bright red lips were apart, stained with the darker shade of blood.
Blood ran from her breast onto the floor.
The killer raised the pistol and popped a round in Kate's right breast, just to be sure.
Kate's body jerked on the floor as the second bullet ripped into her and the bare feet flopped on the floor for an instant.
The killer looked outside the blood smeared window and she saw a car pull outside the building and a man and two beautiful women step out of it and she cursed under her breath.



Constance pulled up on the curve outside the apartment building this Kate apparently lived in and me, her and Janelle got out.

"What floor is it?"
I asked worried when I saw the hight of the building.

"Nine."
Constance replied.

"Oh shit. I hope the elevator's working."
I said wishfully.

"Relax Gavin. At least that's the worst thing that could happen in there."
Janelle teased me.

I had a gut feeling she was wrong about that.



Chapter 7. Trouble on the 9th floor.
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:o :bravo: :bravo: :bravo:
what bad end for that friends. :lol: :up:
i dont now how could you do this but i love your style at your works. :bravo: :loves:
i hope you following this way in your art works.
and hope you sen next chapter very soon for me.
you are the best this is my last word.
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Thank you very much Ogre.
Its very rewarding to hear how much you like it.
I will most likely post a new chapter in one of the story's before the end of the weekend, hopefully.

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tank you very much my dear friend :loves: :bravo: :dance:


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Good kill on Carly. This might be how she looked falling on that knife in her belly.


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Hey Thrill. Glad you liked it.
I suppose you're right about that, its similar to what I had in mind although she of course wasn't naked.
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Chapter 7. Trouble on the 9th floor.


I had walked down the hallway of a run down building in a bad neighborhood on my way to talk to a witness before but never had I done it in such good company.
Constance and Janelle bewitching looks could brighten even the gloomiest days.
I deliberately walked a few steps so I could admire them from behind as they walked side by side.
Janelle...
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... had never looked better than she did right at that moment as she turned her head and smiled at me over her shoulder.
If there had been a wall in my path, I'd have slammed right into it.
Constance...
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... in her tight jeans was no less of a vision.
I was a lucky man, that was for sure.

We got to the door that Constance said was the one we were looking for and she knocked on the door.
Due to old police habits, Constance and me stood on either side of the door, ready to burst in if we needed to.
Janelle stood facing the door.
I found myself looking at Janelle, she was glowing, so beautiful.
I could tell she was excited to be on this case and she was having a great deal of fun.

"Open up. Its NYPD."
Constance called firmly.

There was no answer but I could hear movement on the other side of the door, there was no mistaking it.
I could hear the stiletto heels on the wooden floor.
For some reason I had an unsettling feeling and I reached inside my jacket and put my hand on my Colt.
I could see Constance doing the same with the glock on her hip.

"I said open up. Its the police. We just want to talk."
Constance said in a slightly gentler manner.

There was no response.
Again I heard the sound of stiletto's on the floor on the other side of the door.
Then a faint sound that I could have sworn was the sound of a gun being cocked.
My eyes widened.

"Get down."
I yelled at Janelle and Constance.

Before the words had completely left my lips something small came though the door, leaving a small hole in it.
Then another just like it.
Tiny wood splinters blew into the air as the bullets ripped though the door.

"Aaaahhhhh."
Constance yelled out as blood squirted out of her arm and she fell backwards, clutching it.

I hadn't heard the shots, it must have been a silencer involved.
I already had my Colt drawn and without hesitating I fired three shots through the door for cover and then I kicked it open and burst through it blasting wildly into the apartment.
My bullets shattered the window, a vase in the corner and for some reason the tv.
I guess I wasn't aiming as well as I should have.
I caught a glimpse of a red coat disappearing from view in the window.
The body of a young black haired woman lying on the middle of the floor in a pool of her blood with a knife loadged in her gut.
I didn't need to check her pulse to know she was dead.
Not waisting time I jumped over the dead girl and stuck my head out the window and aimed the Colt.
A red coat lay abandoned on the top step of the fire escape and there was no sign of anyone on it.
Whoever she was she must have ducked into a window on one of the floors below.
There was no way to find her now.
I had nothing to go on to spot her anyway.

"Damn."
I cursed out loud.

"Gavin."
I heard Constance calling worried.

I turned around and I saw Constance standing in the doorway, clutching her wounded arm but she wasn't looking at me.
Suddenly I felt cold water running down my spine and I rushed to the hallway.
My worst fear was realized when I saw Janelle standing there up against the hallway wall, a look of utter shock and fear on her beautiful face.
With one hand she held onto the wall to stay upright and with the other she clutched her gut.
Blood was seeping through her fingers and running down her skirt.
I stood there frozen, staring at her.
She looked up at me with tears in her eyes and I could see the agonizing pain she felt in her face.
I saw the pain and disbelieve in her blue eyes.
It was the same look that I had in my eyes.

"Gavin... I´m...shot."
She moaned out painfully.

Blood spat out of her mouth as she spoke and dribbled down her chin.
Her heels slipped on the floor causing her to lose her balance and she slide down the wall sideways.
She let go of her gut to try and grab onto the wall, to stop herself from sliding down but it was no use.
Janelle left a red smear on the wall as she came down on her perfectly rounded behind.
She pressed her hands down on the floor in an effort to stay up but her hands shook under her weight, it was a loosing battle.
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"Call for help."
I yelled at Constance who was already dialing her cell.

I rushed over to Janelle and got down on my knees besides her.
She was breathing with difficulty and more blood flowed down her cheek with each new breath.
Few drops of her blood dripped off of her chin and fell down on her heaving breasts as she gasped her final breaths.
I put one hand on her cheek and looked down on her wound.
She was hit below the waist line of her leather skirt and most of the skirt was soaked in blood and so was the lowest part of her leopard top.
She winched in pain and a shudder moved though her entire body.
Her feet kicked on the floor and one of her black heels fell off her delicate bare foot as the bullet burned in her belly.
I carefully unbuttoned the top so her black bra was out in the open and unzipped the skirt and pulled it down enough so I could see her injury's.
Blood oozed out of the tine new hole an inch below her bellybutton and I knew this was a fatal wound.
Janelle saw the look on my face and she knew what I knew.
She put her hand on my cheek and smiled weakly.
Her breaths were shorter and her breasts didn't heave as much anymore.

"Kk...iss...mm...meee.."
She whispered softly.

I pulled her close and kissed her passionately on the lips.
I tasted her lipstick and her blood but I didn't care.
Her sigh echoed in my mouth and I felt her body tense up for a moment before it went limp.
The hand on my cheek fell away from it and fell on the floor with a thud.
Our lips parted and I looked into her eyes.
They didn't see me anymore but simply stared back empty and lifeless.
Janelle was dead.
I let go of her and she slumped down on her left side and lay still with her hands in front of her and her legs on top of each other, one missing a shoe.
I felt a lump in my throat and I wanted to scream out but instead I just sat there on the floor besides her and looked at her quietly.
Constance felt I should have a moment to myself and she walked into the apartment and looked down on Carly's corpse on the floor.
She walked into Kate's bedroom and found exactly what she was expecting, Kate's dead, half naked body slumped up against the wall with a haunting stare and two bullets in her ample breasts.
She sighed with disappointment.


I watched as two paramedics rolled Janelle's body into an open bodybag on the floor and carefully tucked her arms and bare feet into it before they zipped her up.
As the zipper moved up from her toes I watched as she disappeared under the plastic and the last thing I saw of her were her blue eyes staring up at me before the zipper came over her head.
I felt a sharp sting in my heart and I promised myself that whoever that woman in the red coat was, she would soon find herself being zipped up in a bag like that.
I stepped back into the apartment where Carly's body was being photographed from every angle.
Constance sat on the sofa with her shirt off as a paramedic bandaged up her arm.
Luckily the bullet had only graced her arm and she was okay.
She gave me a reassuring smile and I felt relieved she wasn't badly hurt.
I looked over at the window where a uniformed cop was handing a forensic guy the red coat in through the window.
I noticed a card fall out of the pocket that no one else seemed to see and I hurried over to it and as soon as no one was looking, I picked it up and read it before pocketing it.
It was a business card for a Dr. Hilary Rose, a plastic surgeon specialicing in facial reconstruction.
After a quick excuse to Constance, I left and hailed a cab.
I was going to check up on this Dr. Rose and find out what her card was doing in the killers pocket but first I needed to see someone else.


I knocked on the door of Virginia's penthouse.
The old cuban maid let me in and I demanded to know where Virginia was.
Although her english was worse than my spanish I did gather that Virginia was in her bedroom and I rushed up the stairs and banged on the door, ignoring the maids curses in spanish.
Virginia opened the door and as soon as she did I grabbed her by the throat and pushed her into the room, slamming the door shut behind us.
I threw her down on the bed and held her down, my hands still on her throat.
I was bursting with anger.

"Where were you before."
I demanded angerly.

She looked up at me frightened and confused.

"Wh..what?"
She asked shaking.

"WHERE WERE YOU BEFORE?"
I screamed.

"I was here. Where else?"
She replied frightened.

"You were the only one who knew I was going to see the witness so you got there first and kill her didn't you?"
I was so angry I wasn't thinking clearly.

"No. What's happened"
She said alarmed as she noticed the blood on jacket and shirt.

"Liar."
I spat back at her.

"She's not lying."
I heard Janelle's voice say behind me.

I turned quickly, hopeful and I saw Tricia standing in the doorway looking shocked at what was going on and I felt my hopes shattered.
I had forgotten she and Janelle sounded the same.

"She was here the whole time with me."
Tricia continued.

I wasn't sure what to believe but the genuine look of shock and confusion on both their faces convinced me I was making a horrible mistake.
I let go of Virginia, got off the bed and backed away shaking.
Virginia sat up, nursing her neck and she looked at me, not with anger but pity.

"I...I´m... sorry..."
I stuttered at her.

"What's wrong? Where's my sister?"
Tricia asked worried as she moved closer to me.

I tried to say something but the words she's dead just didn't come out.
But I could see by the look on her face that she had gotten the picture from the look on my face.
I saw tears running down from her blue eyes.

"Wh...ere's.. my sister?"
She asked again, her voice broken.

I would have given anything not to be the one to tell her but I had to.

"Ss..she's...dead..."
I had never utter more painful words.

"Oh god."
Virginia said devistated and she rushed to Tricia and embraced her.

"Did she suffer?"
Tricia asked weakly after a little while, her eyes staring at me hopeful I would say no.

"No. She didn't."
I lied.


After I had explained what had happened, I left them alone to be in peace.
Before I left the room, Virginia grabbed my arm and gave me a reassuring smile.

"I´m sorry. I..."
I began.

"Its okay. I understand. You were upset."
She said with a kind tone.


It was hours later and dark outside when Virginia joined me where I out on the balcony, doing my best to break the record for most bottles of scoatch drunk in one day.
She sat besides me and asked me to pour her a glass, which I did.

"She okay?"
I asked.

"She will be. She went to meet the family."
Virginia replied.

I was glad someone else than me was going to handle the family matters.

"To Janelle."
She said to propose a toast.



Tricia felt a painful shudder in her stomach as she walked into the morgue.
I had called Constance and asked her to meet her there.
I felt she shouldn't see her sister's body alone but I just couldn't face doing it with her.
Constance led her to the slab where her twin sister's body lay under a white sheet, only her bare toes stood out with a tag tied to one toe.
Tricia reached out and carefully pulled back the sheet and looked Janelle's naked body over with tearfilled eyes.
Her eyes still stared blankly and the truth of her painful death was etched on her face and she knew that Gavin had lied but rather than feel angry for being lied to, she felt a sense of gratitute towards him.
Her eyes moved from her sister's face, over her bare breasts, who's nipples were hard and pointing up in the air, past her bellybutton and stopped on the tiny hole that had caused her sister's death.
The blood had been wiped off and it was hard to imagine something so small had killed her.
Tricia reached out and closed her sister's eyes for the last time and kissed her gently on the forehead before covering her back up.



My and Virginia sat out on the balcony for what must have been hours, just drinking and talking.
I had asked her about whether she knew anything about this Dr. Rose and she told me that Dr. Rose was Manhattan's top plastic surgeon renounded for her skills in facial reconstrction and altering people's appearance.
Dr. Rose had even been amongst the guests at Virginia's birthday party but she didn't know Dr. Rose personally.
It was clear that this Dr. Rose was someone I needed to have aword with but it would have to wait until tomorrow, I was far too drunk now and besides I though it better to have Constance there with me, just in case, I got upset.

I looked over at Virginia.
I was so relieved that she was innocent, I liked her very much.
She was so beautiful and charming.
I felt such an attraction to her and I needed to get ride of the pain I felt over Janelle so I did something stupid.
I reached over and kissed her but unlike my expectations, she didn't pull back or slap me, she kissed me back.
I felt like I was cheating Janelle's memory but at the same time I needed Virginia, more than i ever needed anyone and I felt she needed me.
She pulled me closer and the kiss grew more passionate and heated.
I carried her to her bedroom and for the second time in one day, I threw her down on her bed but this time I ripped her clothes off.
For hours we made love, our naked body's thrusting against each other.
I didn't know which one of us needed it more, me or her.
It didn't matter.


I woke up the next morning with Virginia in my arms.
The sun was shining brightly though the window and I felt much better than I should have after all that alchohol I drank the night before but then again, I was used to it by now.
I could have stayed there with her for the rest of time but a terrible scream coming from inside the penthouse made that impossible.
I rushed to my feet, got my pants on and grabbed the Colt from the shoulder holster where it hung of the back of a chair and rushed out of the bedroom.
When I got to the buttom of the stairs, I saw the old maid running towards me, sobbing and screaming hysterically.
I grabbed hold of her and tried to calm her down and find out what was wrong.
All I got from her was incombrehensible babble so I gave up and ran in the direction she had come from.
I walked down the hallway towards the kitchen, the Colt aimed and ready.
The door of the broom closet next to the kitchen was open and when I looked inside I understood what it was that the maid was screaming about.
Inside it lay two dead women's body's.
Jenny lay spread out, her legs and hands spread-eagled on the floor with a knife sticking out of her left breast.
Her top was entierly soaked in her blood and there was a blank stare on her face.
Nicole lay on the floor, facing the door with her head resting on Jenny's stomach, her hands sprawled out on the floor and her bare legs pressed together, bent at the knee.
Her empty bloodshot eyes looked up at me sightless.
Her face was blue and anguished.
The neck was brused and clear handprints were visible.
I sighed at the thought of this beautiful, interesting woman having been violently strangled to death.
Virginia came running in her silk robe wit ha worried look on her face.

"What is it?"
She asked worried as she saw the look on my face.

Her eyes burst to tears as she saw the two lifeless body's lying on the closet floor.
I took her in my arms and let her cry on my shoulder.
I knew how she felt.
I glanced back at Nicole and Jenny's body's puzzled.
This was getting way out of hand.
Who the hell was behind these deaths and why?



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:bravo: :bravo: that is good end for Janelle like the others on your storis.
thanks so much Jóhann.who is the next victim of this killer? :666:
ooooooooohhhhhhhhh i must waiting until next chapter :lolsmile:
have good time dear friend.thanks again :up: :salute:


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As before you flatter me Orge010. Thank you.
As for who the next victim is well... we'll just have to see.

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I`m sure that scenes in which actual action happens are harder to write than ``the victim`s appearance was X. The killer came in. The victim reacted with fear and dismay. The killer killed her in way Y``. But they are SO MUCH more interesting to read.

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I´m sure that its harder to do something yourself, to create something and to give it your best shot than it is to just sit back and judge other people's work and bitch about things you don't like but its SO MUCH easier to just sit back and bitch and belittle those who do try.


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I kinda am "doing something myself" that actually involves a lot of effort. Duh.

Also, a response that could apply to anything (any criticism of your writing) applies to nothing.

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Chapter 8. Appointment with Dr. Rose.



After spending the morning and part of the afternoon with the police as they went through Virginia's penthouse with the upmost detail and removed Nicole and Jenny's body's, me and Constance headed of to see this Dr. Rose.
I had a feeling she would have some answers and after the mornings discoveries, I was aching for some of those.
Janelle's killer had a first class ticket straight to hell and I was going to make sure she got to there on time.
Nicole's death had shaken Virginia up badly and although I didn't want to leave her, I knew I had too.
I was relieved that Tricia had arrived just before I left and she promised me, she'd look after Virginia while I was gone.
I glanced over at Constance and I saw that she was dressed exactly the same way as she was the day before but not in the same clothes.
It couldn't be, the shirt she had worn the day before was ruined by the bullet that grazed her in the upper left arm.
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I wondered if she was one of those people who had like a closet full of the same kind of clothes and always looked the same, like a character on the Simpson's or something.
We pulled up outside a very fancy building a block away from Wall Street.
One look at it told me that this Dr. Rose was doing very well indeed.
I let my cigarette drop on the concrete sidewalk and crushed it under my foot.

"Gavin. Just remember we're just there to talk to her."
Constance said with a worried look on her face as we stepped into the lobby.

She was afraid I'd do something rash or maybe even violent.
She knew me better than I thought.

"Of course. I´m just going to calmly ask her a few simple questions."
I lied.

Constance gave me a doubtful look and i could tell she was thinking of asking me to let her hold onto my Colt until later.
Good luck with that Constance, you'll have to pry that from my cold, dead hands.

"I promise I won't dangle her out of the window by her ankles or anything like that."
I sounded like a boy trying to convince his mother to allow him to bring his sling-shot to school.



Connie Demico...
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... was floating peacefully on her on her inflated mattress in the pool on the terrace of her penthouse apartment at the top of the McAndrew building, a few blocks away from Virginia's penthouse.
She was wearing her brand new purple designer bathing suit that left her sides and back bare and a pair of vintage Ray Bans to keep the sun out of her eyes.
Her secrets of her marvelous figure were poorly kept by the skimpy bathing suit, just the way she liked it.
Her hay colored hair draped down of her shoulders as she lay back letting her toes cool in the water.
The sun was shining brightly and it was a very hot day, unseasonably hot for New York.
The moment she saw what a nice day it was, she canceled her yoga class and took the opportunity to let the rays of the sun lick her smooth skin.
Drops of perspiration trickled down the side of her margarita glass that rested in the mattress's cup holder.
Just when she felt like the day couldn't get any better and she felt herself starting to drift into sleep, she was proven right.
She heard sounds of high heels on the pools edge, drawing closer and as they stopped, she felt something blocking the sun and opened her eyes and rose up slightly to see who it was that was bothering her.

"Oh... its you. What ever could you want?"
Connie asked with contempt.

The woman standing before her on the edge of the pool didn't respond and merely looked at her, watching her own reflection in Connie's Ray Bans.
She pulled the silenced pistol she held behind her back into view and a look of the upmost horror washed over Connie's face.
She tensed up and fear gripped her.
The woman raised the pistol at Connie.

"Wait... please wait I..."
Connie pleaded.

She stared right into the black cylinder's barrel and the last thing she ever saw was the bullet speeding out of darkness engulfed in flame.

"Hhhuugghhh..."
She gasped as the bullet slammed into the center of her forehead, an inch above the rim of the Ray Bans and tunneled deep into her brain.

Her body jerked like a surge of electricity had rode though it and slammed back into the mattress.
Her bare feet flew up out of the water, hung in the air for a millisecond and splash back down in the water and dangled limply below the surface of the water.
The arms were thrown upwards in perfect rhythm as if she were apart of a crowd in a football game and then fell down and sank in the water on either side of her, hanging of the edge of the mattress, cooling in the water.
Her head lolled over on her right side and remained still.
A thin stream of blood ran down from the fresh hole in her forehead and moved down under the Ray Bans and flowed past her right eyes and continued down her face past her nose.
Her sensual lips were locked in the O shape of her last gasp and the eyes stared unfocused into the air.
The commotion had knocked her glass over on the side and the margarita spilled into the water
The killer unscrewed the silencer of her pistol, placed it up to her lips and blew the smoke out of it like it as she watched Connie's body float on her mattress, admiring how the sunlight sparkled in the water around her and in the blood running down her face.
Then she turned on her heel and walked away.


Lupe, Connie's sixty year old, personal maid came back from the grouser's an hour later and when she saw her mistress sitting out on her precious inflated mattress, drifting aimlessly in the water lying around she shook her head and said a prayer for her.
A beautiful young woman like that wasting her time with such nonsense as sunbathing.
Never had she known such a thing before coming to work for Miss Demico.
She noticed that Connie wasn't moving and she guessed she had fallen asleep and after muttering to herself in spanish about how she would like to be able to sleep the day away, she walked out on the terrace to wake her up so she wouldn't get sunburned.

"Missy Connie. Missy Connie, you need to do the waking up now or your beautiful skin will..."
She began in her slightly flawed english.

It was then that she saw the blood flowing down Connie's face from the bullet hole in her head and the vacant stare behind the colored glass of her Ray Bans.
Drops of blood were dripping of her cheek and falling into the water.
Lupe let out a horrified scream and covered her eyes before she ran as fast as her age allowed her to call for help.
But no help would be of any use to Connie now, except maybe a hearse.



After a thoroughly aggravating encounter with the receptionist and her pea sized brain, me and Constance got out and entered Dr. Rose's office.
I was quite surprised to when it I we were greeted by a strikingly beautiful woman no older than thirty.
She looked much more like a model that a Dr.
There was a welcoming smile on her lips and a touch of rouge in her soft cheeks.
She keeped her auburn hair done up in a very fashionable way and I found myself wondering just how the hell that was done.
Her gray eyes shone brightly with something I couldn't quite put my finger on but I liked it all the same.
Her tall and slender figure was covered by a formal but fashionable blue dress and she had alarge balc leather belt over the waist that I suspected was purly decrotive.
The long, legs were drapped by skin colored stockings and her long heels matched the color of her dress.
In short she was the the doctor any man would want to be a patient of.
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"Welcome. I´m Dr. Hilary Rose."
She said with a seductive english accent as she held out her hand.

I shook it as I carefully looked her up and down, trying to figure her out.
She knew that we were there on police business but she seemed entierly calm and unaffected by our unannounced visit.
In fact I had rarely seen anyone more together than her and god... she smelled good.
I noticed that she carried herself very well, her back was as straight as an arrow and she kept her posture pristine at all times.
No doubt a hangover from her days in some english boarding school.
There was a real old fashioned, Grace Kelly elegance about her.
I should know, while most boys in my neighbourhood had that poster of Raquel Welch in the fur bikini, it was To Catch a thief that graced my wall.
She gestured us to have a seat and sat down on the edge of her desk and crossed her slender legs right in front of me.

"I understand your from the police. I wonder what you need from me?"
Dr. Rose asked calmly with a hint of curiosity in her voice.

"Well yes, I am but he's a private detective that's also working on this case."
Constance explained.

"Oh, I see. A private detective, gosh that's interesting."
Dr. Rose said impressed and I felt her eyes on me, sizing me up as I had her.

There was a faint smile in the corner of her mouth.
My ego told me it was there because she liked what she saw.

"And what case might that be?"
She added.

"A string of murders in the Society circles."
I said bluntly.

"Oh yes. Terrible business isn't it. I read about it in the paper and I was a guest in Miss Kensington's party the other night when Alicia Donovan was...rudely removed from this world. But of course you must know this, a assume that's why your here, to ask if I saw anything out of the ordinary."
Dr. Rose said matter of factly.

Constance opened her mouth to say something, but I didn't give her the chance.

"No. We're here to ask you about this."
I said firmly as I pulled the business card the killer had left behind in Kate's apartment and handed it to Dr. Rose.

She looked at it for a moment, quite puzzled.

"Yes its one of my business cards. What of it?"
She asked confused.

"The killer dropped that at one of the crimescenes. Any idea how that card got into his possession?"
I asked casually, carefully studding her reaction.

"No but there are number of ways for it to have found itself into his hands. I hand out hundreds of these a year."
She replied.

"Turn it over."
I suggested.

Dr. Rose rolled her eyes impatiently and did as I asked.
As soon as she saw the back of the car her eyes widened and the expression of indifference turned into fear.
On the back of the card was a line written with red ink.
PLEASE COME BACK FOR A FOLLOW UP EXAM ON THE 12TH OF MAY.
I saw the panic in her eyes as she read her own handwriting over and over.

"That's your handwriting, isn't it Dr. Rose?"
I asked needlessly.

Me and Constance had already had it checked by a guy down at the station and after testing it against a sample of Dr. Rose's handwriting we got our hands onto, he confirmed it was
her's.
She nodded her head weakly, she looked as if she had been punched in the stomach.
I stood up and walked close to her so I towered over her where she sat on the desk's edge.

"This killer we're looking for is or was a patient of your's. Who was it you gave that card to?"
I asked firmly.

I... d..."
She stammered.

I had no patience for bullshit like this so I grabbed her by the shoulders, pulled her up and slammed her against the wall.
Constance jumped from her chair and tried to pull me away from her but I shook her off easily.

"Who did you give this card to?"
I yelled at Dr. Rose.

She glared at me with those bewitching gray eyes of hers and I saw she was genuinly frightnened.
Whatever was going on, I knew she wasn't a part of it and I softened up and let go of her.

"Please. You know this killer, help me stop her before she kills more people? She's already killed someone close to me."
I asked her.

She stared at my face for a moment, deciding if she should.

"H...her name is... Sandra Brown."
Dr. Rose whispered nervously.

I turned my head to Constance who already had her cell phone out and was calling the station to find out everything she could about this Sandra Brown.

"Who is she? Why was she a patient of your's?"
I asked eager for more answers.

"I don't know much about her. When she first came to me she was just a skinny little girl fresh of the bus from some cornstate, hoping to be an actress. She was naive and not much to look at. She had a benefactor, someone with deep pockets that hired me to preform plastic surgeory on her."
Dr. Rose said and I could fell the self loathing that was washing over her.

She moved behind her desk and turned her back to me and Constance, she was too ashamed to let us see her face as she confessed her dark secret.

"Who was it that hired you?"
I demanded.

"I don't know. It was all done though Sandra. I never met whoever she was working for."
Dr. Rose said and I believed her. It made sense.

"Why the surgeory on Sandra. To make her more attractive?"
I asked.

"No... to make her look different. Like someone else."
Dr. Rose said as a tear ran down her face.

"Who?"
I asked firmly.

She turned around and I saw the tears in her eyes.

"I swear I didn't know that there would be murders or anything like that."
She said, begging for me to understand, to forgive her.

"What did you think it was all about?"
Constance asked outraged.

"Money. It always is about the money."
Dr. Rose replied oddly calm.

"Be careful Mr. Monroe. Sandra Brown is a deeply disturbed young woman. She's capable of terrible things."
She said as she looked me in the eyes.

"Who did you make her look like?"
I asked again.

Just as the words left my mouth I noticed something odd.
There was a bright red dot hovering over her left breast and I quickly understood its meaning.

"Sniper get down."
I yelled out too late.

A tiny lead bullet suddenly smashed though the office window, leaving a small hole with cracks leading out from it in the glass and slammed into Dr. Rose, burying itself in her soft left breast.

"Aaahhh..."
She sighed as the bullet tore though her blue dress, her white lace bar and finally her smooth skin.

A few drops of blood squirted out in the air from the injured breast and she staggered a wobbly step backwards, a horror stricken expression on her face.
She looked up at me and gasped before her legs gave in and she fell behind her desk, disappearing from view.
Me and Constance dove to the floor in case the shooter felt like making it a hat trick.
Constance rolled to the window with and with her glock drawn, she carefully peaked out to see if she saw any sign of the shooter or where the shot came from.
It was no use there must have been a hundred windows that the shot could have come from.
A little while past and we knew that there would be no more shots and I rushed to my feet and moved across the desk to Dr. Rose as fast as I could.
She lay on her back on the other side of it on her back with her arms by her side.
Her legs were bent at the knee and her right shoe had fallen away from her bare foot.
I could see that the bullet had struck her on the inside of her left breast and there was a thin stream of blood running down her dress from the wound.
I heard her moan and saw her hand twitch on the floor, she was still alive but not for long.
Her lead filled breasts rose with difficultly and fell back down as she drew her final breaths.
I got down on my knees beside her.
Her gray eyes found me and I saw the angst in them.

"Who is it that you made Sandra look like?"
I asked her.

As she tried to speak, blood forced itself out between her lips and a stream of it ran down her right cheek.
Her hand reached up and grabbed my shoulder and I moved my head closer.
I was too late again.
All that she managed was a weak sigh before her hand let go of my shoulder and fell down on the floor.
Her feet jerked and relaxed and the breasts fell for the last time and didn't rise up again.
I looked into her face and and saw there was no reason to listen expect her to say anything more.
Her gray eyes looked back at me, empty... lifeless... dead.
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I didn't take my eyes off her as I stood up.
I cursed the fact that I didn't get the answer I needed.
Constance must have read my thoughts of my face.



The coroner guys carefully picked up Hilary Rose's corpse after zipping her up in the black plastic bag and carried her out of the office, leaving behind her shoes and a stain of her blood on the carpet.
I recognized them as the same ones that had zipped up Janelle and they even nodded me as they carried the body past me, like we were poker pals or something.
I thought of Janelle, Nicole, Jenny, Alicia, Kate and her roommate and now Hilary Rose all lying there together in that dark, cold morgue like bunkmates and I shuddered at the thought of how much more room there was in those drawers.
The traumatised whining of Dr. Rose's idiot receptionist as the body was carried by her got on my nerves.
Constance stood in the corner, talking on her cell while her brothers in blue carried out the usual crime scene CSI crap.
I didn't know how much more of this I could take.
I had seen enough death to last a lifetime but I had a nawing feeling it wasn't nearly over.

"Cheer up Gavin. I just got Sandra Brown's address."
Constance said as she walked up to me.

"Well what the fuck are we waiting for?"
I said enthusiastic.

We rushed to her car and sped off.



A red BMW parked across the street started and drove after them.
Behind the wheel sat Rita MaQueen with a grin on her face as she sped after them.



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Chapter 9. The Doppleganger.


Constance's car screeched to a halt outside the building where Sandra Brown lived in.
Rita McQueen pulled over a little down the street and watched as Gavin and Constance rushed out of the car and ran inside the building.
After waiting for a little while she stepped out of her car and walked quickly to the front door of the building.
She looked phenomenal in her tightly fitting white dress and matching heels.
Her long legs, alluring curves and flowing blonde hair made her more resemble a model rather than a reporter.
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Her six inch heels sounded loudly on the sidewalk as she hurried to the door, she didn't want to miss any of the action.
She got into the foyer of the apartment building and looked over the apartment listing to try and get a sense of who they were there to meet.
Suddenly she heard a gun cocked behind her and felt the barrel of a pistol shoved into her back.
Rita froze and instinctively raised her hands in the air.

"Good afternoon Miss McQueen."
Gavin said behind her.



She turned slowly and looked me in the eyes.
I kept my Colt aimed at her.

"You're not very good at tailing people are you? I spotted you after the first block."
I said.

Rita frowned, annoyed with herself.
Constance...
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...walked out of a corner by the elevators, her glock in her hand as well.

"But the question is, why follow us?"
I asked firmly.

"I... I, do you mind lowering your gun Mr Monroe, its making me nervous."
Rita said uneasy.

"Me lowering the gun depends on you answering the question right. How do I know you're not the one we're looking for."
I replied coldly.

Rita gave me the coldest stare I'd received since my wife left me.
Then she sighed in surrender.

"I've been following you all day. I want this story and you could say I´m a hands on reporter."
She said with a sense of self righteousness.

Constance let out a snort of laughter.

"You're calling yourself a reporter now. That's rich."
Constance said, mocking her.

Rita seemed to want to responde but thought better of it, after all we had the guns.

"All right say I believe you. Why should I let you tag along?"
I asked.

"Because you want to prove that Virginia Kensington is innocent and I can make sure the people know it. You wash my back, I wash your's."
Rita's confidence was growing and she was quite sure no one was going to shot her at this point.

I glanced at Constance who shook her head, she didn't like that idea.
I couldn't blame her but Rita had hit a nerve with me, proving Virginia innocent was important to me.

"Okay you do exactly as I say. Understood?"
I ordered her as I lowered the Colt and slipped back under my armpit.

Rita lowered her hands and nodded with a smile.

"I am in your hands Mr Monroe."
Rita said in a seductive tone.

Her voice was very sexy, very deep and throaty but in the good way, gave me goosepumps.
She was definitly my favorite gossip writer and I had to admit that despite myself I kinda liked her.
As the three of us headed for the elevator, Constance gave me a chilly look, she disapproved.

The elevator stopped on the eleventh floor and me and Constance got out with our guns ready, I didn't want to take any chances.
Rita followed us with a curious and excited look on her face.
I had quickly filled her in on what we learned at Dr. Rose's office and her eyes had lit up with excitment, she could tell that she was in for the story of a lifetime.
We got to the door of the apartment Sandra Brown lived in and this time I didn't want to give her any chances to shot through the door so I reached inside my pocket, pulled out a lockpick I always carried on me and set about unlocking it silently.

"What the hell are you doing Gavin. I need a warrent to go in there uninvited. That's breaking and entering."
Constance protested.

"See if I give a shit."
I said coldly.

Rita barely contained her amusement, apparently she saw things my way.
I didn't care about some stupid warrent, I wasn't a cop anymore and besides if this Sandra was responsible for Janelle's death, I wasn't planning on arresting her.
The lock clicked and I carefully nudged the door open and slipped inside, the Colt ready in my hand with Constance and Rita following.
It wasn't a very upscale place, the view from the windows was the wall of the ajoining building, the poorly choosen wallpaper was pealing of the walls and the tv was from the 80's.
This could have been the apartment I rented with that yugoslavian exchange student Vannia back when I was working at Burger King while I was awaiting to get into the Police academy.
Hmmm, Vannia lovely gal, we had some good times when there wasn't anything but Alf re-runs on the tv.
I wonder what happened to her?

There was no sight of anyone or anything unusual in the apartment.
It worried me.
It meant that whoever this Sandra now look like, thanks to Dr. Rose's talents and loose morals, she was out there putting her plans into action.
I could only hope that there was some answer or clue to be found in the apartment.

"Spread out and search for some clue or anything to what her plan may be or who she looks like now."
I ordered.

I set out going through the desk by the window and Constance took the bedroom.
Rita started going through some papers on the coffee table.
I quickly grew frustrated over finding nothing valuble and Rita had no better luck.
I threw one of the drawers from the desk into the wall, shattering it.

"I'll go and see if I can't help Constance in the bedroom."
Rita suggested.

I hardly notised that she left the room and moved over to the large closet on the other end of the room.


Constance was on her knees by the bed going through the contense of a shoebox she had found under the bed when Rita stepped inside the bedroom.
Very descreetly, Rita closed the bedroom door behind her without Constance noticing.

"What have you got there?"
Rita asked curious as she looked over Constance's shoulder.

"I think I've got something. Here's a letter from Dr. Rose and...oh my god."
Constance suddenly said shocked.

"What is it?"
Rita asked curious as hell.

"It's a detailed report of the plastic surgeory and here's what she looks like now. Holy shit, Gavin needs to see this right now."
Constance said alarmed as she got to her feet and moved to the door.
Just as Constance was about to pull the doorknob, Rita grabbed her shoulder and spun her around to face her.
Before Constance could let out a word, Rita pressed the tip of the silencer of the small pistol she had drawn from her handbag into Constance's gut and pulled the trigger.
The shot was barely a whisper.

Constance's bewitching gray eyes widened in shock and pain as the small nine millimeter bullet ripped through her black shirt and tunneled itself into her gut, an inch below her bellybutton.
She gasped painfully as the searing pain rode through her body.
The disbelieve took over her and she didn't understand what had just happened.
Constance looked down and saw the smoke rise from the silencer of the pistol Rita held pointed at her gut and the new hole in her shirt.
She reached down and ripped the buttons of her shirt open and she saw the wound below her bellybutton.
It was a tiny hole, barely wide enough to fit one of her slender fingers into and yet it was causing her all this pain.
A thin stream of warm blood trickled down her skin and flowed down under the waistline of her jeans.
She clutched the wound with her left hand and felt her warm blood against her hand.
Constance let out a pain filled sigh as she realized how bad it was and she staggered backwards, her stiletto heels dragging on the floor as she barely kept herself upright as the strength was leaving her at an alarming rate.
She wanted to yell out, scream, warn Gavin but she couldn't, it was too painful and hard.
She grabbed hold of her glock at her hip and pulled it from the holster but she lacked the strength to raise it and it slipped from her fingers and fell on the floor.

Rita's pistol was still trained on Constance's gut and she shot her again.
Constance winched painfully and let out a groan as the second bullet tore into her belly, just an couple of inches to the left of the first.
She fell backwards on the bed and bounced up once on the soft mattress.
She let out a gasp and blood spat from between her lips as she did.
Her pretty face was a picture of agony and she sucked in the air as the pain nearly ripped her apart, both her hands clutching her wounds.
Her boots touched the floor and her heels scratched the floor as her feet kicked against it as she thrashed in pain on the bed.
The blood escaped through her fingers and ran down the back of her hand.
Constance's firm breasts in their pink lace bra rose up and down at a frantic pace.

Rita moved towards the dying police officer and felt dissatisfied over how slowly she was dying, after all she had a schedule to keep.
She hiked up her dress and straddled Constance who was helpless to stop her doing so.
Rita lowered herself down so her face was close to Constance's.
Her free hand covered Constance's mouth and she pressed the silencer into Constance's gut again, this time a little higher, directly against the bellybutton.
She disliked the feel of Constance's blood on the palm of her hand.
Constance's beauty was still evident despite the blood dribbling from her lips or the agonized expression.

"Beg me for mercy."
Rita whispered coldly with a sadistic smile.

"Aarrgghh..ff...fuuc...ckk...yyou...ccuu...nnntt..."
Constance stammered hatefully.

Rita's grin widened.
Her finger pulled the trigger.
Constance gasped a third time as the bullet ripped through her bellybutton.
Her whole body jerked underneath Rita.
Her boots twitched once on the floor and then slumped down still.
The blood stained hands fell from her wounds and fell on the bed.
Her head lolled on the bed to her right side and she lay still.


I threw the last useless scrapbook I found in the closet on the floor in frustration.
There was nothing of any use to be found in this goddamn apartment.
I needed to find something, anything that might shed a light on things.
I heard the bedroom door open behind me and I turned, hopeful that Constance and Rita might have found something.

"Wait, why was the bedroom door closed?"
I asked myself.

I got my answer as I saw Rita standing there before me, a silenced pistol in her hand and pointed at my heart.
There was no look of doubt in her eyes, her hand as steady as a rock.
She held that pistol with such ease that it seemed almost a part of her hand, she was definitly a professional.
I felt like kicking myself for trusting her so easily without any reason but I had the feeling she would do all the kicking for me.
A rush of concern for Constance rode over me, my head told me she was dead but my heart let me think otherwise.

"I knew that reporters weren't trustworthy but this is a little extreme, Miss McQueen."
I said dryly.

Rita laughed but I doubted it was because she found me witty.
I raised my hands, knowing I had no chance of reaching the Colt without her getting of a clean shot.

"Oh please, Mr Monroe, there's no Rita McQueen, that's just my cover. I´m quite fortunate you didn't have the brains to phone the paper and ask about me before you decided to trust me. But it seemes that you're always willing to trust a pretty skirt, aren't you?"
She said with a smug look on her face.

I really wanted to wipe that grin of her face.

"Sandra Brown, I presume."
I guessed.

She laughed again, it was starting to piss me off.

"Oh no nothing like that Mr Monroe. Unlike her I am a professional. I was simply hired to make sure you wouldn't get too far in your investigation. I barely managed to silence Dr. Rose before she spilled everything to you, the silly cow."
Rita explained as she moved closer to me, that pistol never leaving me unguarded.

"An assassin. I really hate assassin's."
I thought to myself.

"I could have killed you so easily right there as I watched you through the scope of my rifle but I was instructed to leave you unharmed unless absolutely essential. Which I am afraid is the case now."
Rita was having fun, I could tell.

"Don't do me any favors, you bile spewing bitch."
I said coldly, if I was about to die, I wasn't going to let her see me whimper.

That wiped the grin of her face.
I saw the vein in her neck throbbing with anger, which felt nice.
She raised the pistol.
BANG.
"Arrrgghhhh..."
I was shot.
No wait a minute, I wasn't.
I didn't feel anything.
I looked down at my chest, no blood, no anything.
And I didn't gasp but someone did.
I suddenly realized that guns with silencers attached don't sound so loud.
I looked Rita in the face.
She seemed stunned, her blue eyes were wide open and her mouth was gaping, something had shocked the hell out of her.
The pistol dropped out of her grip and her hand fell to her side.
She sighed and blood suddenly flowed out of the corner of her mouth and ran down her cheek.
She fell down on her knees and then she slumped facedown into the floor and lay still.
There was a small hole in her high in her back, near the left shoulder blade and there was a red stain around it that was growing with each second as more blood seeped from the bullet wound.

Constance was standing in the bedroom door, leaning against it to hold herself upright.
Her shirt was ripped open and I saw that her stomach and jeans were soaked in her blood, as was her chin.
Her left hand clutched her bleeding belly.
The smoking Glock fell out of her hand as she couldn't hold it any longer.
She slide down the door and I rushed to grab her before she slammed down into the hard floor.
I took her in my arms and she smiled weakly.
Her boots kicked weakly on the floor as she winched in pain.
Her face was pale from all the blood she had lost.
She had just saved my life and now she was dying in my arms.
It wasn't fair.

"Thanks."
I said softly.

"Welc..oomee..."
She whisped with a weak smile as blood gushed from her mouth and belly.

"AAaarrrhhhh..."
She sighed as her body twitched and relaxed.
Her head slumped back, her hand fell on the floor and I felt her go limp in my arms.
Her beautiful gray eyes stared up at me with a blank stare that told me that the woman I knew was no longer in my arms, this was just an empty shell.
I cursed out in anger and then I lowered Constance's dead body on the floor.
I pulled her shirt over her pink bra so it wouldn't be out for all to see.
I stood up and looked at her lying there with her legs bent at the knee and her arms lying blood stained beside her.
It was perhaps a good thing her father was dead or he'd have killed me, and he'd have been right to do so.

I heard a weak moan coming from the assassin formally know as Rita where she lay on her stomach on the floor, bleeding.
The stain on the back of her dress had grown considerably and so had the amount of blood dripping from her lip to the floor.
She had lost her left heel and it lay besides her bare foot as it moved weakly on the floor.
Her hand was reaching for her silenced pistol that lay in front of her.
I snatched the gun from her hand just as she got a grip on it and without giving much thought to weither it would be painful for her I flipped her on over on the floor so her wound was pressed to the floor.
She let out a painful groan as I did.
I bent down beside her and pressed her own silencer into her left breast.

"Now, how hired you and Sandra Brown?"
I asked in a manner that told her I wasn't in any mood for games.

She spat out some blood as she tried to speak, Constance's bullet was loadged in her left lung by the look of it.
As she drew each new layboured breath, her supple breast rose up and pushed the silencer up and then the breast sank and the silencer followed.

"Go...ffucckk..you..rs...ell...Mon..r..ooe.."
She said with difficulty.

"Who was Sandra cut to look like? Who is she replacing? Tell me or I'll pull this trigger."
I yelled out.

My eyes were burning with hatred over her, I longed to do it.
She made that grin of hers and laughed weakly.

"I...m... alrea...dy....ing...ass...hh...ole."
She sighed.

I glanced at the pool of blood of blood that was runninf from under her and I knew she was right.
There was nothing more I could get from her.

"Then get on with it."
I said coldly as I pulled the trigger.

Rita's whole body jerked on the floor for a second as the bullet sank into her breast and pierced her cold heart.
Her legs and arms flopped and then they fell perfectly still and limp on the floor.
A thick red tear flowed out of the fresh wound and moved down her breast to her abdomen, further ruining her white dress.
Around it, a large scarlet stain grew.
Her eyes stared up at me vacantly, her face expressionless.
She was as dead as a doornail or in her case a coffin nail.
I finally wiped that grin of her face.

I went to Constance's body and closed her eyes.
Suddenly I noticed something in her hand that I hadn't before.
I carefully unclenched her fingers and removed it, it was a photograph of Virginia, taken from a wide lence from a distance.
I looked at the trail of blood that Constance had left from the bedroom and I followed it to the bed and the open shoe box filled with photographs, files and all sorts of things regarding Virginia and more especially reports from one of the operation Dr. Rose had preformed on Sandra Brown.
My jaw nearly fell through the floor and ice water ran down my back.

"SHIT."



I was driving like a mad man, running every red light I came across, rushing towards Virginia's penthouse, hoping with every fiber of my being that I wouldn't be too late.
I grabbed Constance's cell phone and dialed Virginia's number just as I ran down a newspaper vending machine as I moved the car up on the sidewalk to get past a roadblock.
I narrowly avoided running a fat man carrying a box of doughnuts leaving a 7/11.
The box flew out of his hand as he dove out of the way and doughnuts reigned out on the dirty sidewalk.
By the look of him I had done him a favor but judging the hand gesture he gave me, I'm guessing he didn't see it that way.
I got a signal and it began to ring.


Virginia stood out on the balcony of her bedroom, a cigarette in her hand, overlooking the city.
She looked like a dream in her buttoned up, slim tailored black jacket and matching mini-skirt.
The dark nylon stockings she wore were hooked up to her garter belt under the skirt and she had one black open-toed heels.
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Her cell phone began vibrating loudly on her nightstand and at first she ignored it, she was enjoying the view and her cigarette all too much to bother with answering her phone but then it occurred to her that it might be Gavin with some important information and even if it wasn't important, she still relished the thought of hearing his voice.
She had only known him for a little over a day but she knew that he was different from the other men she had met, he was special and making love to him had been the most thrilling experience of her life.
She took one last puff before she flicked the cigarette of the balcony and turned on her heels and walked through the red satin curtains in the doorway that were blowing gently in the cool summer breeze.

"Come one Virginia, answer damn it."
I said to myself tense as I reared the car so quickly in a turn that it nearly flipped over.

Virginia smiled to herself as she walked towards her bed, thinking of the night she had just spent in it with Gavin.
The phone vibrated frantically on the floor, awaiting to warn her of the danger she was in.
A second before her hand touched the phone, she felt that she wasn't alone in the room and looked to the door on her right.
Virginia gasped in shock and her eyes stared in horror at the sight of the woman standing in the door.
It was like looking in the mirror, the woman looked exactly like her in every way aside from her clothes, the mystery woman wore a white vest and a short sleeveless dress, laced with small glittering trinkets.
Her shoes were much like Virginia's aside from them being white.
There was a devious smile on her lips, sort of like she was gloating about something.


Special appearance Keira Knightley as Sandra Brown, the doppelganger.


"Wh..who...are you?"
Virginia stuttered stunned.

Sandra's head tilted slightly and her smile widened.

"She's you darling."
Virginia heard a familiar voice say from behind her.

Before Virginia could react, the woman that had snuck up behind her threw a black lace bra she had found in Virginia's drawer, Virginia's favorite one, over her head and wrapped it tightly around her delicate neck.

"HHhhuurrrggg...aaaarrhhhhhh..."
Virginia gasped as the bra forced itself into her neck, shutting of her windpipe and stopping any air from reaching her lungs.

Virginia grabbed hold of the bra and desperately pulled on it, trying with all her strength to remove it away from her throat but the grip it had on her was far to tight.
Her beautiful hazel brown eyes widened in panic and fear took hold of her.
She tried ripping the bra but the material was too strong, too well designed.
She cursed herself for buying such a quality bra and yanked harder on it.
Her feet kicked wildly under her, scratching the wooden floor badly with her long heels
Her small but firm breasts heaved frantically up against her jacket as she struggled for her life and the top two buttons popped open so the black bra she was wearing, much similar to the one currently wrapped around her neck, throttling her, was partially revealed.
Hard as they pulled on the bra, Virginia's slender fingers couldn't get between her neck and the bra.
Painful, desperate filled gasps escaped her lips amidst the chocking gurgles as she fought for even the slightest breath.

The woman strangling her pull Virginia down on the bed so they lay on their sides and she tightened the grip on the bra further yet so it cut deeper into the struggling Virginia's soft neck.
Virginia heaved and trashed more violently on the bed, feeling her attackers delectable, firm body against hers.
Her feet dangled off of the bed and kicked and twitched in the air above the floor so that her long, open-toed heels slipped off of her delicate, stocking clad toes and fell to the floor.
Her feet continued to twitch in the air and her toes curled.
She trashed on top of her silk sheets, yanking on the bra that was strangling her but it didn't do any good.
Virginia's thrashing on the bed caused her short skirt to hike up her thighs so her black garter belt and panty's came into view.
The color in Virginia's face drained and her skin turned blue as the last bits of air left her and her hazel eyes were nearly squeezed out of her head.
Her tongue was forced out between her bright red lips and slapped against the corner of her mouth.
With hardly any strength or rational thought left in her, Virginia's right hand released the wire and hit up at her attacker and scratched her cheek up badly with her fingernails.

"Ow, you bitch."
The woman spat out as she moved her head out of Virginia's reach.

She got up on her knees on the bed and yanked the bra harder, with more strength than before and heaved Virginia upwards on her neck.
Virginia's eyes widened further as the last bits of fight she had left in her faded away.
Her feet shook weakly out of the edge of the bed and slowly her life withered away, throttled out of her.
For a second her mind became clear and she thought of Gavin in her last moments she felt solace in knowing that he would avenge her one way or the other.

"Eeehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..."
A soft, gurgled sigh escaped Virginia's red lips as she expired.

Her hands lost their grip on the bra around her neck and fell limp down to her side.
The breasts rose and fell one last time and remained still inside the black bra.
The stocking clad toes relaxed and her feet stopped shaking.
Her head slumped forward.
Virginia Kensington was dead, strangled to death two days after her 25th birthday.
The woman released the grip on the bra and Virginia's body fell down on the bed on her side and rolled slowly to her back.
She lay with her hands lying besides her and her legs dangling off of the bed.
The woman sighed with relief, exhausted.
Sandra stood by the door, having watched the entire strangling with great enjoyment.

"You know I could have done that for you, it was easy enough for me to deal with that lawyer bitch."
Sandra said calmly.

"No Nicole was different, I needed to kill Virginia myself."
The woman said pleased.

Virginia's phone kept vibrating on the nightstand.
The woman picked up Virginia's phone from the nightstand, and threw it to Sandra who caught it.

"Answer it and see who it is."
The woman ordered.

Sandra answered the phone.

"Yes?"
Her accent and voice matched Virginia's perfectly.

"Oh finally you answer. What the hell took you so long. Its me Gavin."
Gavin said hurriedly.

"Are you all right, you sound flushed."
Sandra played her part well.

"Listen there's little time, Virginia someone is going to try and kill you."
Gavin explained in a hurry as he clipped the door of a parked cab as he rushed past it without stopping.

"Oh no, are you sure?"
Sandra said as she feigned worry.

As she did she looked amused down on the real Virginia's lifeless body, lying sprawled out on her silk sheets, the lace bra still wrapped around her slender neck,
with her short skirt hiked up and her undergaments exposed for all to see and her tongue dangling out from between her bright red lips and dribbles of saliva running down her soft cheek.
Sandra looked deeply into Virginia's hazel eyes as they stared emptily back at her and she saw her own reflection in them.
It was an odd sight to behold, seeing yourself looking like someone else as a reflection in their dead eyes but most enjoyable for her.

"I'll be there in a few minutes. Get in your room and lock the door. Okay?"
Gavin said firmly.

"I won't leave me room, that I can promise."
Sandra replied hiding her amusement as she looked back down on Virginia's corpse.

Then she cut the connection and threw the phone away.
Gavin pressed down on the gas and sped up even further.
Sandra looked up from Virginia at her employer that was still admiring her handiwork.

"Monroe is on his way here."
Sandra announced indifferent.

"Hmm, guess that means Rita failed. Oh well no matter, we'll prepare a nice welcome for Mr Monroe."
The woman said grinning.



Chapter 10. The mastermind and her minions.
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:bravo: :bravo: :bravo: :bravo:
what grate death for poor Constance. :loves: :bravo:
i wish you use more than this style.
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Very glad you liked it, thanks a lot. Hope you'll like the ending if I ever get around to writing it.


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Chapter 10. The mastermind.


I ran into Virginia's penthouse towards the stairs that led up to her room.
I felt the relief wash over me as I saw Virginia on the sofa in the sitting room and I rushed over to her.
Virginia smiled her beautiful smile as she saw me and she got up and ran into my arms and embraced me in a way that made me thankful I was a man.

"What are you doing here. I thought I told you to wait in you room?"
I asked her worried.

"Oh don't worry Gavin. Its much safer here than in my room."
She said smiling as she hugged me close to her.

Where's Tricia? I though she was going to stay with you all day."
I asked.

"Oh she said that she had to go down to the funeral home and arrange for Janelle's funeral."
She explained.

I wasn't sure I believed that and I wondered where Tricia had really gone but my thoughts went out the window as I gazed into Virginia's eyes and I forgot all about my suspicious.
I couldn't believe just how happy I was that Virginia was unharmed and at that moment I realized that I loved her.
Our lips met in a kiss and I felt her warm body press into mine.
It was at that moment that the terrible truth dawned on me and my heart was shattered.
I pulled my lips away from hers and took a step back from her, my expression as grim as it had ever been.
Virginia stared at me with utter confusion on her face.

"Gavin, darling what's wrong?"
She asked worried.

My hand reached inside my jacket and I pulled out my Colt and held it by my side.
Virginia's eyes widened and I saw a drop of sweat run down her cheek.
It was the final piece of evidence I needed and I aimed the Colt at her which made her gasp in fear and she took a step back away from me.

"G..Gavin...wh..at the fuc..k..are you doing?"
She asked me frightened.

"The real Virginia would never be afraid of me even if I pulled out a gun and she's a far better kisser than you are. You use far too much tongue...Sandra."
I explained matter of factly.

"Shit."
Sandra muttered nervously to herself, she knew she was caught.

"Where's Virginia?"
I asked firmly.

The fresh level of fear in Sandra's eyes told me what I already knew but my heart hadn't allowed me to accept it so I clung to denial but now I couldn't do that anymore.
Virginia was dead.
I felt the anger boil inside me and I cocked back the hammer of the Colt.

"Wait. Aren't you going to arrest me?"
Sandra the doppelganger asked confused.

I wasn't sure what I was doing.
The Colt shook in my hand.
I knew the right thing was to bring her in, let the cops deal with her but I couldn't bring myself to lower the Colt.
I kept seeing the faces of all the young women that had died because of Sandra and her mystery employer.
Nicole, Jenny, Kate, Constance... Janelle and...Virginia.
It was suddenly clear what I had to do, my hand didn't shake anymore.

"Not today."
I said coldly.

Sandra gasped and her brown eyes widened as much as they could as she realized what was about to happen.
My finger squeezed the trigger once...twice...three times.
Sandra's body jerked and twitched as each bullet ripped into her chest and blood squirted out of her breasts as she staggered backwards involuntarily as each bullet penetrated her body.
Sandra's face winched in pain and she let out a painful gasp before she tumbled backwards on the floor.
Her legs and arms bounced once up on the floor before they fell back down, still.

I lowered the smoking Colt and walked closer to where Sandra's dead body lay.
She had fallen back on a white fur rug made from Polar bear skin and her head lay on top of a satin pillow, her long curly brown hair spread out beautifully, she almost looked comfortable.
Her left arm lay at her side and the right lay bent up next to her head on the satin pillow.
The bare legs lay bent with one resting on top of the other and both of her high heeled open toed shoes had stayed on her bare feet.
Blood oozed from the three bullet holes in her chest, soaking her glittery dress and white vest.
The bullet wounds made a triangle shape with one in the center of her left breast and the other two in her right breast, one high, one low.
A stream of blood ran from under her dress up to her chest and to her shoulder.
There was a single little trail of blood than flowed down her right cheek from the corner of her mouth.
Her brown eyes stared half open and lazily up at me without seeing me or anything else for that matter.
Sandra Brown was dead and the world was all the better for it.
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I stared down at Sandra's body for what felt like ages. In my whole life I had killed twelve people, seven of whom I had killed in the last four days and what alarmed me was how easy it was for me.
Sandra had deserved her fate and more but it frightened me how ready I had been to shoot her dead in cold blood.
I now realized how deeply Julia's betrayal had changed me.
I took my mind off of this and ran up the stairs to Virginia's room.
When I got to her door, I could barely get myself to open it, I knew what was waiting for me in there and it was the last thing on earth I wanted to see but I needed to go in, I needed to know for sure.


Virginia's...
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...freshly garroted body lay sprawled out on her bed, her bloated tongue dangled out of her mouth, the black skirt hiked up so high her panty's and garter belt were for all to see and worst of all, her bloodshot eyes stared emptily at me and I saw the pain and fear etched on her pale face.
It was a sight that broke my heart.
I slowly walked up to her and sat down on the bed beside her.
I needed to make her feel better so I hitched her skirt down and gently pushed her tongue back into her mouth.
I unwrapped the bra from around her bruised neck and threw it angrily to the floor.
It was stained with the killers blood who must have cut herself on the bra as she throttled Virginia.
I moved my hand over her eyes and closed them forever, the thought that I had been the last person to ever see her beautiful eyes filled me with sadness.
She now looked peaceful and so beautiful, I held her in my arms for a while thinking about how I had only met her two days ago but it had only taken her moments to make me fall for her and now she was lost to me forever.
I laid Virginia's body down on the bed and pulled the cover over her.
Whoever hired Sandra and Rita to do their dirty work, the mastermind of all these deaths had yet to face me and I had a good idea who she was.

I walked down the stairs from Virginia's bedroom and walked to the sofa that Sandra had been sitting in and let myself fall in it.
I set the Colt down on the the cushion next to me and reached into my pocket and pulled out my smokes and matchbook and lit myself a much needed cigarette.
As I sat there smoking and thinking what to do next, I noticed something about Sandra's body that I had over looked and at that moment I knew how I was going identify the woman responsible.



When Tricia got back to the penthouse she was unsure what to expect.
Gavin Monroe had called her and asked her to meet him there as soon as possible.
She was wearing a very charming low cut, backless gold dress and her purple pumps dangled from the tip of her fingers.
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When she walked into the foyer she was most unhappy to see that Virginia's screw up older sister Regina had just arrived there as well.
There was no love lost between the two, in fact they hated each other, always had.
Judging by her wardrobe, Regina had come straight from her apartment that was in the same building three floors down.

Regina certainly liked to show of her beauty and her amazing figure, something that annoyed Tricia, she felt that Regina was far too loose in her way of life and she disliked her for all that she had put her sister through.
The black lace underwear was poorly concealed by the lazily buttoned up red silk blouse, she didn't mind me seeing what she had to offer.
The knee-high stripped socks and heels completed the image of the easy going sex kitten she was trying so desperately to project.
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"Regina. What are you doing here?"
Tricia asked coldly.

"What a lovely greeting. You're a very warm person, you know that."
Regina replied sarcastically.

Tricia shot her a dirty, go fuck yourself look which amused Regina.

"That private dick Monroe called me and asked me to meet him here. Just got here."
Regina said lazily.

This concerned Tricia.
What could he want with the two of them in Virginia's apartment and who else was involved.
Without another word they walked to the sitting room.
Tricia's shoes fell to the floor and she clapped her hand over her mouth in horror and Regina's mouth fell open and they both froze as they saw Sandra's body lying in a pool of blood on the floor.
They rushed over to her body and Tricia fell to her knees beside it while Regina just stared at it horrified, speechless.

"What the fuck happened?"
Tricia asked shocked.

"I have no fucking clue."
Regina replied.

"Don't worry, its not Virginia, its her double."
I said as I stepped into view from behind the large column by the door with the Colt in my hand.

They both gasped in shock as I revealed myself and stared at me confused.

"But then again one of you already knew that. The one of you who killed the real Virginia."
I added as I aimed the Colt at them.

This got their full attention and Tricia got up and stood next to Regina as they were both clearly nervous by my action.

"What are you talking about? You said that wasn't Virginia?"
Regina asked confused and frightened.

"It isn't. The real Virginia is lying up in her bed, strangled. That's a low life killer named Sandra Brown. She was hired to take Virginia's place after she was murdered. She's the one who was killing everyone while the police thought it was Virginia."
I explained, for one of them it was needed, for the other one it wasn't, she knew it all.

"Virginia's dead?"
Tricia asked tearful.

"Yes please pay attention, I don't want to start having to repeat myself."
I said impatiantly.

"What are you saying? Why kill all the others?"
Regina asked nervously.

"Isn't it obvious? Whoever hired Miss Brown needed everyone out of the way that would be able to spot the change. Once that was all over, the mastermind of this devious plot could just have Miss Brown transfer all of Virginia's assets on her name or have herself named as the sole beneficiary in Virginia's will and then she just needed to stage Virginia's suicide or disappearance after a sutible time had passed. Poor Miss Brown must have believed she'd be allowed to live as Virginia forever but I am betting that wasn't the intention of whoever was behind this all. But I guess with me shooting poor Sandra dead, the plans fucked."
I had to admit I was sort of enjoying my little Poirot moment.

They both stared at me shocked, taking everything in.

"But who's behind it?"
Tricia asked oblivious.

"Well to tell you the truth, I wasn't sure which one of you two did until you walked in here."
I replied calmly.

"What? Why do you say that?"
Regina asked.

"Well take a look at Sandra's hands. See anything unusual?"
I wanted the guilty one to know her mistake.

The both turned their heads to the body and stared at the hand, anxious to see what I meant.

"No. There's nothing unusual about her hands."
Regina said confused.

"Exactly. Virginia was violently strangled with one of her own bra's and recently. There is no way to strangle someone like that without your hands having some sign of it and the bra that Virginia was strangled with had been stained in the killers blood. If Sandra had killed her, her hands would have cuts on them. And as you said Regina, there's nothing on Sandra's hands."
I explained.

Regina's eyes widened in fear with the realisation that she was exposed and her body tensed up as she looked down at her own bandaged hands.

"F.U.C.K."
Regina mouthed.

"You really should have let Sandra continue to do your dirty deeds Regina. What was it, you just had to do it yourself? Did you hate your sister that much."
I said coldly.

Regina looked me in the face with a desperate smile and a tear in her eye.

"Yes. All our lives she wa salways the favorite. She got it all and I was just the fuck up but I showed her. I showed them all."
Regina said as more tears ran down her cheek.

"Yes, well now I'll show you."
I said as I pointed the Colt at her, my finger on the trigger.

Tricia who had stood by in shock, looked at Regina, her hatred boiling within her..

"You fucking cunt."
Tricia yelled at her.

I was about to shot Regina when Tricia threw herself on her and slammed her into the wall as hard as she could, blocking my line of fire.
Tricia wrapped her hands around Regina's neck and squeezed as hard as she could.
Regina's eyes looked like they were about to pop out of her head and her feet kicked on the floor as her hands grabbed Tricia's.

"Goddamn it Tricia get out of the way."
I yelled out, I needed to be the one to do it.

"No."
Tricia protested as she squeezed harder.

If Tricia hadn't been in the way, I'd have seen Regina's hand slide down to the object in her pantyline.
Suddenly Tricia gasped painfully and I saw her twitch and arch forward as her hands fell let go of Regina's neck.
I wasn't sure what had happened and as I moved closer, Regina pushed Tricia who could barely stand upright towards me and she fell into my arms.
Regina waisted no time and ran off to the open terrace doors.
I fired after her twice but my aim was thrown of by having Tricia land in my arms, the first bullet whized by Regina's head and hit the wall and the second grazed shattered the window.
Before I could fire a third time, she had disappeared through the door, out onto the enormous balcony.

"...Ga..vin..."
Tricia sighed.

I saw the shock in her face as she looked up at me and and I saw the blood on my jacket where her chest had touched mine.
A small knife was buried up to the hilt just below Tricia's left breast.
Blood was gushing from her wound and running down her golden dress.
I saw the pain and sadness in her face as I moved down on the floor, with her in my arms.
There was no doubt in my mind that this wound was fatal, she only had moment left.
Her breathing was very shallow and blood appeared in the corner of her mouth and flowed down her cheek.
Her breasts rose and fell, moving the knife up and down in her wound as they did, each breath she took was agony because of it.
I could see her bare feet kick weakly on the floor and her toes curl, she was in a lot of pain and I wished I could help her.
I hated this, just yesterday Janelle had died in my arms and now her sister was too.
It was like loosing Janelle all over again.
Tricia's hand found mine and squeezed it tightly, her blue eyes looked at me, begging me to help her but I couldn't, no one could.

"...I´m..ahh..d.ddy.in..g...are..n't...I."
Tricia asked with difficulty.

More blood flowed from between her lips as she spoke.
Most of the left side of her golden dress was soaked in the blood gushing from the wound under her breast.
As much as I wanted to say no and that she'd be fine, I couldn't lie.
Its a rotten thing to do, lying to someone who's got seconds to live.
I nodded but I guess the sadness in my face had given her the answer.
A tear ran down her cheek.

"I´m sorry."
I hated myself for getting her in that situation.

"Pr...omi...se..you'll..k..k..kill...Reg..gi..na.."
She said.

"I promise."
I wasn't humoring her, it was my deepest desire to kill Regina.

With all the effort she had left she leaned up and kissed me on the cheek, leaving a smear of her blood on it.
A weak smile came to her full pink lips and then her body fell limp in my arms.
Tricia's head fell back on my arm and rolled to the side.
Her hand stopped squeezing mine and fell to the floor.
Her bare feet no longer twitched and her toes uncurled.
The breasts and the knife didn't move.
The blue eyes stared at me sightless.
I carefully put my hand over her eyes and closed them before I set her down on the floor.
I grabbed the Colt of the floor and ran out on the terrace after Regina, I had a promise to fullfill.


Final chapter. Reflections.
Coming soon.


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